Week 8: Plaz 0-0 vs. High and Drunk 1-4 H&D wins

[Meth]

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@Smog @Plaz @High And Drunk

[hello there]

10 lines. Let's not hurt people's eyeballs too badly.

[Plaz]

sure, sounds good.

[Meth]

This just u 2 now

[hello there]

... Well damn. Time for touching.

[Plaz]

... Well damn. Time for touching.

i know that feel bro!

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA! )
this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another
the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.
but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?
but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well

BAM!
cheers man

[hello there]

Seems like you keyed a little. So I got a few bars keyed and a few bars I wrote while I was at work this week.

Hope you're well, my dude.










Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!

*cough* Fuck. I forgot I was supposed to be edgy...

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!

Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!

As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!

(hey @Barcotic - that's how you write a fucking gun bar)

The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!!

- - - Updated - - -

HOW DID HE EDIT SOMETHING??

HE IS SECRETLY A FUCKING MODERATOR!

[YG]

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA!)
-Weak opener
this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another
-Not bad but not too harsh
the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.
-better, funny
but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?
-Cool
but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well
-Not feeling

Vs


Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!
-Coulda been better

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!
-Cool

Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!
-Cool relevant punch but didn’t have much impact

As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!
-Man I dunno I dig this fr. even tho it’s another plaza nameplay but this was cool. ‘Sweet as your hair smells’ though is kinda fruity.

Why u always got some homosexual setups

The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!
-Cool

Going H&D here

[Barcotic]

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA! )

weak

this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another

ok idea but not really a diss, swing n a miss

the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.

decent wordplay attempts but they were just thrown in there, + "dragon ballin" is a stretch. coulda used dragon ball, not ballin.. just in a different way

but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?

ok, dece

but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well

no, whack

no good punches
1 jab
4 misses

vs

Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!

pretty bad

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!

plastics? if thats what u were going for, its forced af.. another miss

Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!

waayyy too simple of a concept. also corny af

As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!

cool wp but much like ur opponent's, just thrown in there. whack gun bar.. im 100 that ur trolling now, u gotta be

The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!!

ok i guess

no good punches
1 jab
4 misses

v/h&d for being sliiiiiiigntly more creative, but mostly for being one small step above atrociously bad here

terrible match

[hello there]

Yup.

And MY votes are the troll ones.

[JEM.]

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA! )
If you were in a street corner, maybe this gets a chuckle from the crowd….
This doesn’t work in text battling man. No.


this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another
Eh.


the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.
No.

but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?
I personally don’t like to end bars with a question mark… I think it takes zing out of the punch
In all - not sure if this was good, or just the best so far. But it’s a punch.

but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well
This bar seriously ran away from you - Maybe concise it and increase impact? Not sure.
Didn’t hit man.


Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!
No.

*cough* Fuck. I forgot I was supposed to be edgy...

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!
Before you think I am “hating” I get the bar, as I get most bars, it’s just not really good man, sorry.


Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!
Not bad.


As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!
I think you think we are just not getting your “style” but the truth is… There is significant distance
Between you and a battler like Barcotic. Advice, read this verse in 3/4 weeks are you evolve, etc…
And I guarantee you will come to the same conclusion as these votes.

(hey @Barcotic - that's how you write a fucking gun bar)

The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!!
Eh, ok.

v/HD. He at least landed something.

[Greedy]

Plaz:
Opener- this is too simple. Its a decent idea tho. You couldve found a wordplay or something to add to the impact. As is, just a basic line.

So/So- again, decent enough concept. The problem here is that it ended so soft. U have to get harsher, imo u started off good, but let me down w some weak sht tbh.

Vs

High/Drunk:
Opener- i appreciate u trying to be different. I like the approach u took here. But this is �� trash. I liked the way you executed it, but overall this is shit is not good.

Plastics- this shit dont work. Even if i give u the pass for the pla'z'/pla's' shit u tried to pull, because thats a big force...tec/tic is a no go. So u botched this wp x2, from the fucking go. Otherwise u actually coulda done something here because i liked ur setup.

Manhattan hide out- this coulda hit. I think u tried too hard to make all ur lil tie ins fit. It reads choppy and comes off like its all over the place.

Bee movie- i liked the wp. This was decent. Best line in the battle.




Vote: HaD.

[Ryno]

i know that feel bro!

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA! )
1/3
this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another
1/3
the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.
1/3
but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?
2/3
but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well
1/3
BAM!
cheers man

6/15

Seems like you keyed a little. So I got a few bars keyed and a few bars I wrote while I was at work this week.

Hope you're well, my dude.










Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!

1/3
*cough* Fuck. I forgot I was supposed to be edgy...

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!
1/3

Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!
1/3
As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!
1/3
(hey @Barcotic - that's how you write a fucking gun bar)

The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!!
1/3
- - - Updated - - -

HOW DID HE EDIT SOMETHING??

HE IS SECRETLY A FUCKING MODERATOR!

5/15

v. plaz...he had the only bar i liked tbh.

[Meth]

i know that feel bro!

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA! )

nah not hard

this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another

eh ok

the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.

nah

but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?

fuck w this

but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well

cool concept but the delivery was off

BAM!
cheers man

Seems like you keyed a little. So I got a few bars keyed and a few bars I wrote while I was at work this week.

Hope you're well, my dude.










Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!

eh this is ok would have been better if u tied in the second meaning to ur wp.

*cough* Fuck. I forgot I was supposed to be edgy...

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!

ok

Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!

not digging this

As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!

dope


(hey @Barcotic - that's how you write a fucking gun bar)

thats lame


The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!!

dream works is really old, obscure reference that u didnt much tie in, the newbie move he made wp is nice, the bars just not well rounded

- - - Updated - - -

HOW DID HE EDIT SOMETHING??

HE IS SECRETLY A FUCKING MODERATOR!

u can edit too weirdo

cool read, got h and d here. u guys can both be quite good, just stick to it
v h & d

[XRey]

PLAZ:

you think im like an alias of some superb vet..
which tells me you already think im dope, and i havent even dropd a verse yet (HA!)
1/5 no real punch

this how a grown man sposed to be? i feel like smacking ya mother!
your name says it all, "so & so" aka one Bad Habbit after another
2/5 concept is ok, miss the real punch tho'

the weed turns him into an emo, so he blaze by himself..
but your bars need a Super Reboot, and taking a Drag n Ballin in tears ain't gonna help.
2/5 ok

but i'll show respect, since youre a bro except i'll pass on smoking cess..
it's an Honor Killing this dude already, so why bother getting Stoned to Death?
2/5 but barely IMO

but yo i guess this ain't a 3way no more since other guy ducked and bailed
allow me to do the same and put holes through ya chest to get rid of Smog from ya lungs as well
2/5 ok

TOTAL 9 POINTS


H&D:


Welcome to RapBattles.com! You're so upbeat I'd say you're making the hobby just...
... Well... FAB-U-LOUSSSSSS! But then, when I say Plaz-A-Square... I'd be stating the obvious..!!
2/5 ok

My "keys" to victory are when the hearse swerves up to greet her...
Cuz when every shot's melting Plaz, Tecs only turn up the heater..!!
2.5/5 solid

Better watch what you say... I may Rush In Fighters to see how real your hand is..
Till your mouth gets you and your whole crew bodied like Dillon Danis..!!
2/5 ok

As for gun bars? Yours sweet as your hair smells... This Queen's secrets I dare tell..
And if I find you in Manhattan, Plaz-A-Hide-Out... but I got shooters who Stare Well..!!
-2.5/5 set up was weird, but I like the second line.


The gap between us? No Brooklyn to bridge it... is it your strategy to come after me first..??
You may say it's a New Bee Movie Made... but that's how killin' the Dream Works..!
- 2/5 ok

TOTAL 10.5 POINTS

VOTE: H&D