Week 2: Meth 0-0 Vs Unfuk 0-0 - Meth wins Via Ns

[A. Diction]

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@Meth @Unfukwitable



Let's have the trilogy!

[Unfukwitable]

14/16

[Meth]

Lol sup fam check

[Meth]

16 sent gl

[A. Diction]

Confirm @Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

Bet my verse coming along bro Ima send in at night or tmm

[Meth]

Sall good bro lmk if u need the ext

[Spree]

@Meth @Unfukwitable

Verse due tonight

[Meth]

@Meth @Unfukwitable

Verse due tonight

Sent my 16 to @Ronin
If unfuk dont show tonight i want the extension

[Meth]

Just bought a tac shotty that can make u yell danger
My new tackle rule this fool til his knees hit the ground like an nfl player
Slap a ho in his mouth u aint walkin like a man
My palm imprinted on his lips, s'why w bitches he always talkin to the hand
My six shooter put u in a spin cycle we get wild
Ill let u make a wish before i leave u seein stars like a sick child
Ill dismemeber ur girl if i dont get top or sex from the whore
For me gettin heads in the bag with the rest of her corpse
U talk big like a gangsta, i dont buy what shorty sellin
bitches only yell "No Way, Unbelievable". Cuz u aint so good at storytellin
U knowww meth fucks ya girl, steady pumpin her throat
My key strokes made her pussy an ocean, ya keystrokes make us wanna jump off a boat
We aint friends homie but thats not with this jerk'll think
I'll tell him "lean on me bro", n then poison him with purple drink
Heard ur a queer that keeps a "notebook", w ur thoughts and emotions
Every time i read ya diarrhea part of me wants to flush myself down the toilet

[Unfukwitable]

Hide that ima get off at 10 i got twelve lines written out

[Spree]

Meth wins by NS Open For feed

[Mr W.Rite]

Just bought a tac shotty that can make u yell danger
My new tackle rule this fool til his knees hit the ground like an nfl player
not a bad concept, but wording was off. clean it up a bit


Slap a ho in his mouth u aint walkin like a man
My palm imprinted on his lips, s'why w bitches he always talkin to the hand
eehh, nah man, once your wording still needs help.

My six shooter put u in a spin cycle we get wild
Ill let u make a wish before i leave u seein stars like a sick child
im lost here bro...didnt understand the punch seems forced


Ill dismemeber ur girl if i dont get top or sex from the whore
For me gettin heads in the bag with the rest of her corpse
really, nah man, didnt do it for me...so his girl is dead,, uumm ok


U talk big like a gangsta, i dont buy what shorty sellin
bitches only yell "No Way, Unbelievable". Cuz u aint so good at storytellin
nope.. doesnt make much sense to me man.


U knowww meth fucks ya girl, steady pumpin her throat
My key strokes made her pussy an ocean, ya keystrokes make us wanna jump off a boat
a little better but not much... wording still needs work here bro

We aint friends homie but thats not with this jerk'll think
I'll tell him "lean on me bro", n then poison him with purple drink
not good, too simple of a punch...


Heard ur a queer that keeps a "notebook", w ur thoughts and emotions
Every time i read ya diarrhea part of me wants to flush myself down the toilet
no no no.. rhyme scheme was totally off, and concept was simple, bad wording


needs improvement homie, keep writing, work on your wording and more complex concepts