Week 2: Barcotic 1-0 Vs Ryno 1-0 - Bar wins

[A. Diction]

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@barocotic @Ryno

[Ryno]

im here 10-12

[Barcotic]

sounds gd

[Barcotic]

got 12, down to drop early/whenever @Ryno
gl

[Ryno]

got 12, down to drop early/whenever @Ryno
gl

should have something up later or tonight

[A. Diction]

@Barcotic got 12 from @Ryno

[Barcotic]

this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
this match was perfect how? ill hurt the clown's heart
i kno Ryan Dunn think he wont crash & burn around barc
he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs
ima shatter ya glass jaw so much ur face explodes
tongue hangin out, surrounded by purple like undertaker's pose

[A. Diction]

Ryno's Verse:


Barcotic aka I work for daddy dearest landscaping company

Lets Talk..

Your from canada, ur swaggers limited while all my clothing is insane
I could come to ur country n ball out on u bitches like Zion Williamson preseason games
Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit
I’ve got fam down to knock ur head off, its just a phone call for a favor
If u fuck with my Kin, i’ve got a brother that’ll blast u with somethin foreign just like the trailer
Real textcees despise u, they piss u off just to see what happens
The way hush, bags,n des come at u, u catch more hell than the cheesecake assassin

[Meth]

Seacrest was a nice opener. Smooth play really sets the tone. Man its been awhile since i seen ace ventura im not superrrr aware of the exact reference. Everything about it was pretty smooth wording wise tho. Ryan dunn is nice. Raichu isnt as smooth as the rest of the verse, but thats just me being picky. The play itself is nice. Tibia is funny lol. Closer just didnt bring it like the rest of the verse.

Not fully aware of the zion reference. The wording was stretcheddddd tho, so even if i did get it, it probably wouldn't have been super effective. Hedge fund is pretty good. John deeres too simple for me. It needed another connection somewhere, or some added twist or play to hit well. But it goes on the books as an ok pers. Summer classic line was pretty good even tho i havent been around and have no idea what u mean haha. Fuck with my kin is just to choppy and messed up wording wise. Just gotta smooth out those ideas brother. Last one was a miss for me gimme a tie in or something my man. U could have gone far with a nice personal verse u werr goin for bc ur ideas were all there just the wording was strange for me in almost every line even the ones i said were good.

Nice battle and a cool read. Good luck brahs.

V/ CroBar

[Smog]

this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
Dope!
the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
Lol! Was a funny clip

this match was perfect how? ill hurt the clown's heart
i kno Ryan Dunn think he wont crash & burn around barc
Dope again

he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
Ok, to much np tho

bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs
Ok

ima shatter ya glass jaw so much ur face explodes
tongue hangin out, surrounded by purple like undertaker's pose
Ok

Vs

Ryno's Verse:


Barcotic aka I work for daddy dearest landscaping company

Lets Talk..

Your from canada, ur swaggers limited while all my clothing is insane
I could come to ur country n ball out on u bitches like Zion Williamson preseason games
Ok, thought it could use better execution

Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
Ok

I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
Coulda been better

Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit
I like this

I’ve got fam down to knock ur head off, its just a phone call for a favor
If u fuck with my Kin, i’ve got a brother that’ll blast u with somethin foreign just like the trailer
Again I felt better execution coulda made this more effective

Real textcees despise u, they piss u off just to see what happens
The way hush, bags,n des come at u, u catch more hell than the cheesecake assassin

Ehhh


Bar had the heavier lands here w/smoother execution n nice wp.. I really like the personal approach by ryno just felt the way he worded his joints softened the impact. Cool read y'all

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[Stranger]

barcotic
this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
smooth nameplay here.. I digs it.

the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
not a fan of gunplay, but this was coo

this match was perfect how? ill hurt the clown's heart
i kno Ryan Dunn think he wont crash & burn around barc
I'm not feeling this.

he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
haha nice nameplay

bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs
this one fell flat for me.

ima shatter ya glass jaw so much ur face explodes
tongue hangin out, surrounded by purple like undertaker's pose
nah not feeling this one.

You had a few good lines, the raichu and ry and seek rest was the best from you.

vs

Rhyno

Your from canada, ur swaggers limited while all my clothing is insane
I could come to ur country n ball out on u bitches like Zion Williamson preseason games
not feeling this

Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
haha, nice personal/punch here

I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
you already used this personal.. pick one or the other.

Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit
this was a good personal here

I’ve got fam down to knock ur head off, its just a phone call for a favor
If u fuck with my Kin, i’ve got a brother that’ll blast u with somethin foreign just like the trailer
this seemed a little long for me, shorten em up!

Real textcees despise u, they piss u off just to see what happens
The way hush, bags,n des come at u, u catch more hell than the cheesecake assassin
this wasn't good, not sure where you was coming with this.

You had a few good bars to, I liked the trimming his neihbors bar the most.

I have to give this battle based on entertainment, and barcotic had the most entertaining verse, props to rhyno for keeping it personal, barctic was personal it was a nameplay or something like that.

v/barcotic

[Celph Taut]

Bar
Everything after the opener.

Rhy
Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors


Both had weak openers, but bar was blazing pretty much afterwards. The back of ryno line made me lolz. Raichu shit was smooth. Nicely executed punches and dope wordplay. Ryno's bar I quoted above was dope, but I wasn't really feeling the rest. The trimming line and John Deere were too similar in nature to me to follow it up one after the other.



Not a bad battle by any means, but Bar gets it with more consistency.

[Amen]

this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
Light
the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
Sup w/ the ace ventura punches, man? This was ok.
this match was perfect how? ill hurt the clown's heart
i kno Ryan Dunn think he wont crash & burn around barc
Reach if you were going for Ry & Don't.
he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
Not sure what you were aiming for here.
bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs
Ok.
ima shatter ya glass jaw so much ur face explodes
tongue hangin out, surrounded by purple like undertaker's pose
LOl, haven't read a WWE reference from you in a while. This was light, tho.

Your from canada, ur swaggers limited while all my clothing is insane
I could come to ur country n ball out on u bitches like Zion Williamson preseason games
Nah.
Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
This was ok but over worded.
I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
If it's labeled John Deere would have been more effective. Wording is key.
Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit
Light. Could have did more with this concept and been more creative.
I’ve got fam down to knock ur head off, its just a phone call for a favor
If u fuck with my Kin, i’ve got a brother that’ll blast u with somethin foreign just like the trailer
Not sure what you are referencing here.
Real textcees despise u, they piss u off just to see what happens
The way hush, bags,n des come at u, u catch more hell than the cheesecake assassin
Wack.

Ryno's pretty good. He just needs to work on delivering his concepts in a more effective and harsher manner. Precise wording makes a major difference, if you see what I mean in my feed on one of your bars. It will make or break your bar for sure. I think Barc took this with consistency. Nothing jaw dropping but enough to capture the victory.

v/Barcotic

[Clout]

this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs


vs

Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit


It looks closer than it is. @Ryno i actually like your style. But the way you word your bars its like soft taps instead of heavy handed punches. You definitely have the foundation to build a strong case for contendership simply by battling more & sharpening your wording. Barc got this all his punches hit harder. Even tho ones i quoted from ryno were jab-like.

v/ @Barcotic

[Mr W.Rite]

dam i cant believe Barcotic still in this bitch...
woooooww