LLL WK 1: Bayou Vs Mimic - Blue wins

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@Bayou @Mimic

[Mimic]

hm...

[Blue Bayou]

Gluck

[Spree]

@Bayou @Mimic

Verses due tonight

[Mimic]

Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin
Snowflake. who ya murkin. I'd have his back to the closet, fuck a corner
cuz we all know we'd catch him with a dick in the ass faster than Ace Ventura
This aint no roast session, ur life get tekken, how u die? u can choose
but I'm pressing this square buttons.. I'm just combo'ing up to apply the finishing move
Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose
Easy faker. This carnage unveils nd believe aint no mercy today brother
I'm just getting in blue face.. the choke got his face turning tht shade of color

[Blue Bayou]

i don't know u, & i wanted to ensure this was checkmate dude..
so i decided to look into you.... & just as i thought, the bullet went straight thru
beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass
all u get is “ehhh” every breakdown, NO ONE is biggin ur quotes..
if u see Coo-Coo after ur lines we're just callin u CRAZY for thinkin they're dope
ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life
no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu

[Zunto]

Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin
this was cool, good opener
Snowflake. who ya murkin. I'd have his back to the closet, fuck a corner
cuz we all know we'd catch him with a dick in the ass faster than Ace Ventura
nahhh lol
This aint no roast session, ur life get tekken, how u die? u can choose
but I'm pressing this square buttons.. I'm just combo'ing up to apply the finishing move
decent but wordy
Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose
this was good, would have been dope af if you had cut out the “with dudes around” bit
Easy faker. This carnage unveils nd believe aint no mercy today brother
I'm just getting in blue face.. the choke got his face turning tht shade of color
alright

2 good
1 ok
1 Decent
1 Miss


Vs


i don't know u, & i wanted to ensure this was checkmate dude..
so i decided to look into you.... & just as i thought, the bullet went straight thru
....no
beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass
ok not bad
all u get is “ehhh” every breakdown, NO ONE is biggin ur quotes..
if u see Coo-Coo after ur lines we're just callin u CRAZY for thinkin they're dope
decent, pretty old concept
ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life
decent again
no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu
hmmm ok, bit corny but not bad

0 good
2 ok
2 Decent
1 Miss


Close battle, didn’t think minic would drop nice since he’s been away for quite some time. At first I wasn’t sure if this was actually blue but now I’m certain it is lol. You just killed Twodrop in the NBL but this seemed like a 10 min key bro. I mean I keyed mine in like 10 mins too so I feel you but yeah I think mimic caught you sleeping a bit. Could go either way, depends on preference really.


Vote Mimic

[Stranger]

mimic
Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin
eh not feeling...

Snowflake. who ya murkin. I'd have his back to the closet, fuck a corner
cuz we all know we'd catch him with a dick in the ass faster than Ace Ventura
wtf this was corny.

This aint no roast session, ur life get tekken, how u die? u can choose
but I'm pressing this square buttons.. I'm just combo'ing up to apply the finishing move
this better than previous but still light.

Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose
eh this is decent

Easy faker. This carnage unveils nd believe aint no mercy today brother
I'm just getting in blue face.. the choke got his face turning tht shade of color
this was your first attempt at getitng at him, its okay.

I don't really feel you went at bayou here, your suppose to go for your opponents throat, you had some good bars but you should be focused on bayou more, most of the bars could have been used against anyone.[/b]


bayou

i don't know u, & i wanted to ensure this was checkmate dude..
so i decided to look into you.... & just as i thought, the bullet went straight thru
this was terrible, someone already used a chess concept this week.

beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass
set up was iffy, cuz this aint a "free", plus kind of swayed.

all u get is “ehhh” every breakdown, NO ONE is biggin ur quotes..
if u see Coo-Coo after ur lines we're just callin u CRAZY for thinkin they're dope
rhyme is kind of forced at the end, i'm not really feeling overall tho

ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life
this wasn't good..

no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu
people hype mimic lol? am I missing something, I don't like this tho.

I think you could of tried harder, technically you was going after mimic more than he went at you, but most of your bars was too light, I think if they had more sting you would have got this..

Both need to be more creative, mimic needs to focus on going after his opponent more instead of bringing bars that could be uses against anyone, bayou had the right idea, but his bars never connected, where mimic was more consistent throughout just needs to stop with the random bars and focus on his opponent.

v/mimic

[Ryno]

Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin
Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose

beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass
ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life
no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu

thought blue had the better and more creative concepts tbh.

v/blue bayou

[Barcotic]

Mimic
Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin
cool
Snowflake. who ya murkin. I'd have his back to the closet, fuck a corner
cuz we all know we'd catch him with a dick in the ass faster than Ace Ventura
whack
This aint no roast session, ur life get tekken, how u die? u can choose
but I'm pressing this square buttons.. I'm just combo'ing up to apply the finishing move
played out
Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose
this was a reach for an arms bar, corny
Easy faker. This carnage unveils nd believe aint no mercy today brother
I'm just getting in blue face.. the choke got his face turning tht shade of color
nah, lousy wording/face twice in 1 line. also the nameflip is played

1 gd punch
0 jabs
4 misses

vs

[QUOTE=Bayou;8894362]i don't know u, & i wanted to ensure this was checkmate dude..
so i decided to look into you.... & just as i thought, the bullet went straight thru
decent. cool idea, lazy wording
beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass
ok
all u get is “ehhh” every breakdown, NO ONE is biggin ur quotes..
if u see Coo-Coo after ur lines we're just callin u CRAZY for thinkin they're dope
nah
ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life
dece
no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu
played

0 gd punches
3 jabs
2 misses

blue did what he had to, i still think its him
v/bayou

[Clout]

Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin

Cool

Snowflake. who ya murkin. I'd have his back to the closet, fuck a corner
cuz we all know we'd catch him with a dick in the ass faster than Ace Ventura

Nah, corny

This aint no roast session, ur life get tekken, how u die? u can choose
but I'm pressing this square buttons.. I'm just combo'ing up to apply the finishing move

Forced on the taken/tekken no where near similiar in pronunciation. This is kind of corny in general.

Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose

Lol

Easy faker. This carnage unveils nd believe aint no mercy today brother
I'm just getting in blue face.. the choke got his face turning tht shade of color

didn't like how the punch was worded here, could've been dope had you worded the Blue face part differently.

i don't know u, & i wanted to ensure this was checkmate dude..
so i decided to look into you.... & just as i thought, the bullet went straight thru

Eh, not feeling its like the tekken bar

beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass

Key-stir!/keester/ass is like old ppl lingo lol. Not really a damaging shot. I appreciate the wordplay i'm sure it went over Zelph's head lol.

all u get is “ehhh” every breakdown, NO ONE is biggin ur quotes..
if u see Coo-Coo after ur lines we're just callin u CRAZY for thinkin they're dope

Corny man

ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life

lol cool, this is the blue i can vibe to.

no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu

Eh, light



I mean Mim had LOTB and if this really is Blue which is a really underwhelming showing of his per usual did have more consistent lands. One good shot can't undo the multiple lands that score pts unless its a knockout. Since it was not a haymaker, i got Bayou by more consistency. Mim i remeber you being much sharper i think you're rusty.

v/ Bayou not convinced totally that your the Canadian.

[A. Diction]

Give him that dead kick. Street thuggin. Gat straight makin ya head spin
for a Band I'd show u the Stairway to Heaven.. u aint know if it's bullets or Zeppelin
--- ehh
Snowflake. who ya murkin. I'd have his back to the closet, fuck a corner
cuz we all know we'd catch him with a dick in the ass faster than Ace Ventura
--- ace never took a dick to the ass bro. Fail...
This aint no roast session, ur life get tekken, how u die? u can choose
but I'm pressing this square buttons.. I'm just combo'ing up to apply the finishing move
--- decent but nothing special...
Death on arrival. Ya bitch get it too. Mim's always down for fistin hoes
two arms between the legs w/ dudes around.. shit lookin like an OG prison pose
--- I wanna like this cuz of the wit, but it took me a min to realize u weren't referring to arms as guns cuz then the bar makes no sense. Once I seen it wasnt a double entendre I thought it was ite. Not hard hitting tho...
Easy faker. This carnage unveils nd believe aint no mercy today brother
I'm just getting in blue face.. the choke got his face turning tht shade of color
--- played obv no...

Vs

i don't know u, & i wanted to ensure this was checkmate dude..
so i decided to look into you.... & just as i thought, the bullet went straight thru
--- creative. Clean....
beat me w/ THAT free?? 5 played out concepts all lazy & trash?!
c'monn Mim... we won't see ur Keester up trouble just because it's blatantly Ass
--- good wp/personal.......
all u get is “ehhh” every breakdown, NO ONE is biggin ur quotes..
if u see Coo-Coo after ur lines we're just callin u CRAZY for thinkin they're dope
--- seems played.....
ur girls a monster, fat as fuck - face of an old dyke..
^i just had to mention ur Chick n' shit...that's what u've been called ur whole life
--- dope....
no notable wins, banned for noshows - why do they hype u dude?!
my god ur so Anti-body i bet there's Doctors tryna use ur blood to fight the Flu
--- not really feeling. Get it just not that good...


Mimics verse wasnt all that great imo. Idk how he got votes (sorry). Bayou had one fire line and was consistent throughout, 2 misses I think. Rest was good.

Chicken shit = fire



V. Bb

[A. Diction]

Need votes @Bomb Bard @Greedy @Smog @Meth @Unfukwitable @Mimic @plethora