LLL Wk 1: Barcotic Vs Cheescake - Bar wins

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@Barcotic @Cheese cake assassin

[Barcotic]

pics?

[Stranger]

no...

[Barcotic]

for fear of lion king punches?
k

10-12

[Barcotic]

I know what his point is.

we have had that feature for almost 2 years, and the only time I heard anything negative about it is when someone who hasn't been here almost that entire time says shit about it cuz he's in red, when he'll be in green once he wins this week.

streak is more accurate than record.

id rather have streak than record

get green, or stay red.

if I delete all the features that are to advanced for yall id have to delete everything lol, like I had to do with hidden votes, and voting points, we might as well not have a battle hack now because it's to advanced for yall.

not too advanced, u goofy mf. more like too corny, too broken n too fl

look at the facts; u refused to delete my red streak n couldnt relax
ironically U'll have a red streak for months when i put this foot in ur ass
u make the site whack, im taken quite back and cant believe u host
im rb's sidney crosby & i wanna give u a Backhand when i Read ur Posts
administration? leave it, u tard. find someone decent n smarter
or imma be forced to put a Pump to the Staff, no penis enlarger
my stuffs great ffs, but this cupcake'll bring forced jawns
no one will call it a slugfest... thats a buffet to this warthog
fatass mongoloid piece of shit, gtfoh u stupid cow
u cant run the site but theres still a chance that u cud lose some lbs.

[Stranger]

for fear of lion king punches?

barcotic wants his loss streak removed

dumb af
someone mind removing mine ..

You will never beat me bar, so you can kiss that thought goodbye.
Since ya bitch ass bounced, after I beat you, I’ll thank you for dropping by.
Some people deserve ass kickings, this faggot earned it with the most.
Bring ya best material, but Lion king punches don’t work against a goat!
If your bitch licking the icing, why she claiming she don't like cheesecake?
That bitch so fat, she hides the crumbs under her pillow as a keepsake.
Barcotic hall of fame?, he should show up once in awhile to prove it..
This “vet” had a losing streak so bad, I had to programmatically remove it.
Throwing cake at the bar, it’s not a food fight, or fucking liquor shots.
You can hush about your favorite site, cuz that aint where the victor drops.

[A. Diction]

​look at the facts; u refused to delete my red streak n couldnt relax
ironically U'll have a red streak for months when i put this foot in ur ass
--- lazy personal but connected...
u make the site whack, im taken quite back and cant believe u host
im rb's sidney crosby & i wanna give u a Backhand when i Read ur Posts
--- who tf is sidney crosby?..
administration? leave it, u tard. find someone decent n smarter
or imma be forced to put a Pump to the Staff, no penis enlarger
--- connected but came off gay af...
my stuffs great ffs, but this cupcake'll bring forced jawns
no one will call it a slugfest... thats a buffet to this warthog
--- lol...
fatass mongoloid piece of shit, gtfoh u stupid cow
u cant run the site but theres still a chance that u cud lose some lbs.
--- lazy but connected...minor lulz

Vs

You will never beat me bar, so you can kiss that thought goodbye.
Since ya bitch ass bounced, after I beat you, I’ll thank you for dropping by.
--- sounds like something off 8 mile....
Some people deserve ass kickings, this faggot earned it with the most.
Bring ya best material, but Lion king punches don’t work against a goat!
--- self hype...not bad tho...
If your bitch licking the icing, why she claiming she don't like cheesecake?
That bitch so fat, she hides the crumbs under her pillow as a keepsake.
--- self nameplay no sir...
Barcotic hall of fame?, he should show up once in awhile to prove it..
This “vet” had a losing streak so bad, I had to programmatically remove it.
--- it was 1 loss not like 10 or 15 and programmatically? Really...
Throwing cake at the bar, it’s not a food fight, or fucking liquor shots.
You can hush about your favorite site, cuz that aint where the victor drops.
--- hush/victor name plays are done to death. Bar never said NC was his favorite either. Put together well just comes off meh...


Dia wasnt as bad as I thought he would be but bar was super lazy on this verse lol but he still got it. Warthog punch won this battle.


V. Bar

[Stranger]

look at the facts; u refused to delete my red streak n couldnt relax
ironically U'll have a red streak for months when i put this foot in ur ass
v/barcotic

[Zunto]

look at the facts; u refused to delete my red streak n couldnt relax
ironically U'll have a red streak for months when i put this foot in ur ass
so when you put your foot in his ass, his ass will be red for weeks? umm no lol
u make the site whack, im taken quite back and cant believe u host
im rb's sidney crosby & i wanna give u a Backhand when i Read ur Posts
no man wtf are you doing?
administration? leave it, u tard. find someone decent n smarter
or imma be forced to put a Pump to the Staff, no penis enlarger
i get it but this was gay af and no1 calls their dick a “staff”
my stuffs great ffs, but this cupcake'll bring forced jawns
no one will call it a slugfest... thats a buffet to this warthog
not sure what you were going for here tbh
fatass mongoloid piece of shit, gtfoh u stupid cow
u cant run the site but theres still a chance that u cud lose some lbs.
decent I guess

Vs


You will never beat me bar, so you can kiss that thought goodbye.
Since ya bitch ass bounced, after I beat you, I’ll thank you for dropping by.
no lol
Some people deserve ass kickings, this faggot earned it with the most.
Bring ya best material, but Lion king punches don’t work against a goat!
decent at best but is more self hype than anything
If your bitch licking the icing, why she claiming she don't like cheesecake?
That bitch so fat, she hides the crumbs under her pillow as a keepsake.
lol funny
Barcotic hall of fame?, he should show up once in awhile to prove it..
This “vet” had a losing streak so bad, I had to programmatically remove it.
i liked it, cool personal
Throwing cake at the bar, it’s not a food fight, or fucking liquor shots.
You can hush about your favorite site, cuz that aint where the victor drops.
nah this was wack


Barcotic this may just be the worst verse I’ve read from you and believe me I did not come here to hate on anything. I don’t think you took this serious at all and it shows with the lazy wording and punches that didn’t make a lick of sense. I know you’re “supposed” to win this battle and you probably will but I think you lost this. Dia I’m surprised, I can’t really recall actually reading one of your verses but this wasn’t too bad. A few wack lines but you have pretty good wording for the most part and some funny lines. I got dia here in an unexpected victory.


Vote Dia


And @robin I swear on everything if barcotic starts his fuckin crying bullshit I’m out frfr

[Barcotic]

lmao yo

[Greedy]

barcotic-
penis pump-gay af but decent
warthog-this was decent
closer- your best line imo

vs

not really feeling anything from cheesecake tbh
every line was super basic w little or no wit. the only bar even close to complex was the hush line. and i dont even go on n.c and can tell you thats played af

[Blue Bayou]

look at the facts; u refused to delete my red streak n couldnt relax
ironically U'll have a red streak for months when i put this foot in ur ass
lol, decent play w/ the personal tie in... good open
u make the site whack, im taken quite back and cant believe u host
im rb's sidney crosby & i wanna give u a Backhand when i Read ur Posts
LMFAO @ who is Sydney Crosby ... this was okay, the backhand play was cool & flipped well
administration? leave it, u tard. find someone decent n smarter
or imma be forced to put a Pump to the Staff, no penis enlarger
ehhhh, I get what u were going for, but staff/dick is a pretty big reach for me
my stuffs great ffs, but this cupcake'll bring forced jawns
no one will call it a slugfest... thats a buffet to this warthog
lol, this was pretty solid
fatass mongoloid piece of shit, gtfoh u stupid cow
u cant run the site but theres still a chance that u cud lose some lbs.
decent for a run/fat punch...


vs.


You will never beat me bar, so you can kiss that thought goodbye.
Since ya bitch ass bounced, after I beat you, I’ll thank you for dropping by.
hmmm, nah the impact missed imo
Some people deserve ass kickings, this faggot earned it with the most.
Bring ya best material, but Lion king punches don’t work against a goat!
other then both being animals the tie in is really weak here, this is newbish, nah
If your bitch licking the icing, why she claiming she don't like cheesecake?
That bitch so fat, she hides the crumbs under her pillow as a keepsake.
lol kinda funny but in a silly way, not an oh shit haha sort of way
Barcotic hall of fame?, he should show up once in awhile to prove it..
This “vet” had a losing streak so bad, I had to programmatically remove it.
cool personal, wording could've made it less statementish imo but punch hit
Throwing cake at the bar, it’s not a food fight, or fucking liquor shots.
You can hush about your favorite site, cuz that aint where the victor drops.
Nah, a victor/winner bar would need to be flipped realllly dope to not be stale at this point, this wasnt



Overall, decent short battle... Barc def got it, more enjoyable concepts, better wording on the whole... Cheesecake had a half hearted personal that was fine and nothing else stood out... props to both


V. Bar[/QUOTE]

[Ryno]

not too advanced, u goofy mf. more like too corny, too broken n too fl


administration? leave it, u tard. find someone decent n smarter
or imma be forced to put a Pump to the Staff, no penis enlarger
my stuffs great ffs, but this cupcake'll bring forced jawns
no one will call it a slugfest... thats a buffet to this warthog

Some people deserve ass kickings, this faggot earned it with the most.
Bring ya best material, but Lion king punches don’t work against a goat!

wasnt a huge fan of either but i thought barc did enough to win

[Clout]

look at the facts; u refused to delete my red streak n couldnt relax
ironically U'll have a red streak for months when i put this foot in ur ass

Nothing heavy, but it lands

u make the site whack, im taken quite back and cant believe u host
im rb's sidney crosby & i wanna give u a Backhand when i Read ur Posts

he does have a fast backhand shot in the goal post. but knowing you, it could've a little more intricate this seems rushed.

administration? leave it, u tard. find someone decent n smarter
or imma be forced to put a Pump to the Staff, no penis enlarger

Eh

my stuffs great ffs, but this cupcake'll bring forced jawns
no one will call it a slugfest... thats a buffet to this warthog

Lol lion king punch, They do enjoy slugs. Flip on his old alias on NC. this is light at best.


fatass mongoloid piece of shit, gtfoh u stupid cow
u cant run the site but theres still a chance that u cud lose some lbs.

lol

vs

You will never beat me bar, so you can kiss that thought goodbye.
Since ya bitch ass bounced, after I beat you, I’ll thank you for dropping by.

Nah using by twice to rhyme not a fan

Some people deserve ass kickings, this faggot earned it with the most.
Bring ya best material, but Lion king punches don’t work against a goat!

I see what you going for clever. But you're kind of hyping yourself instead. The punch could've been a setup to lead to a better shot.

If your bitch licking the icing, why she claiming she don't like cheesecake?
That bitch so fat, she hides the crumbs under her pillow as a keepsake.

eh

Barcotic hall of fame?, he should show up once in awhile to prove it..
This “vet” had a losing streak so bad, I had to programmatically remove it.

This comes off as a statement to me, you went full nerd here mr. programmatically

Throwing cake at the bar, it’s not a food fight, or fucking liquor shots.
You can hush about your favorite site, cuz that aint where the victor drops.

Personal, ok


v/ Barc got this one it wasn't his best showing. He clearly didnt care for or have any interest in really decimating dia. Dia just work on being harsher and having better concepts.