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    Say Goodbye (letter 2)

    Say Goodbye (letter 2)


    Dear M,

    It’s been a while since I checked back in.
    Been getting my ass kicked proving I don’t have to win and not in sin
    Been getting my ass kicked sticking up for us
    Been getting my ass kicked just because... just...
    So many things I wish I can find the words to say
    But I’m going thru so many things and so deep I even forget to pray
    And it’s in any way...
    I’m not petting fighting for this or for that
    It ain’t over a man or even a tit for a tat
    It’s that...

    C

    They had no right to say that about us
    Or to make us a game like all in or bust
    They had no right to insist on my culture
    And they had no right to circle me like a vulture
    If I say it’s torture, the bitch get off
    Like some sick SNM with the freaks laughing I’m soft
    They’re making me sick and not sick like a cough
    More like I want to scream in my own skin
    Cause I don’t know how they got in or how to get them off
    I too left a lock of hair in my picture book
    So I know it’s a bait so readily took
    Forget it...

    C

    I don’t want to say too much
    Just that I realized I was always following a touch
    And I was switching and shit too
    And I’m not mad at me
    And I’m not mad at you
    I get it, it’s just that I never get much
    I always just accept what I let and such
    And just... just...

    C

    Maybe if you stop letting them block
    I can stop being the soldier marching in shock
    I walked it out enough
    And I’m tired of always having to be so tough
    And I’m tired of life always being so rough...

    I’m learning patience and how to trust again too
    And how to be less like me
    And more like me when I was with you
    Without you
    Regardless of what they say or do
    And obviously to tell you how much I miss you too...
    EVERLY

    Love me,
    C

    Link one: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...496479-Too-lit

    Link two: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...6486-Execution
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    Re: Say Goodbye (letter 2)

    Yeah man good drop but can you give more insight into this piece i was confused about what it was really like if not just forget it you dont have to tell me but yeah what did you actually mean er whatever let me know nice piece interested in this rap shit er whatever....

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    Re: Say Goodbye (letter 2)

    I feel I got enough insight , maybe as much as you as a writer wanted to give and nothing more that is up to u , I thought this was a different piece and i can tell it's more on that soft side of rhyming not putting a hundred bars together, sometimes less is better but I think I little more could of been added even with a hook and made into a soft rap track

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    Re: Say Goodbye (letter 2)

    Thanks
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