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    The 0bserver
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    Miserable Aether

    I'm essentially
    an entity
    that's meant to be
    filled with empathy
    but entropy
    has entered me, I'm twisted to the enth degree
    a creature that has lost itself mentally
    elementally
    I've been fully
    convinced that my species detrimentally
    effects everything, but still I live on emptily
    and you'll see
    A reflection of hatred, to plant resentful seeds
    nothing but the worst is ever sent to me
    I look upon every decision regretfully
    and every human that I've ever seen as an enemy
    using psychological weaponry


    These are the things you'll find inside my brain
    My mind tortures me because it's too used to feeling pain
    my very thoughts create my chains
    dwelling on the negative is why I can't evolve or change


    Society is too ill
    humans use the word "humane" like there isn't a huge hill
    of dead creatures you killed
    Humans kill everything, including each other, and most take the blue pill
    cause' the truth will
    make you feel like a zionist jew shill

    Humans are disgusting nasty hypocritical creatures
    with pitiful features
    from conservatives to liberal leechers
    they all have flat chests and minimal weeners
    and fall for the same tricks by different political leaders
    I'm Miserable Aether
    I'm a lower version of myself, a cynical speaker
    clinical need for
    medication, but not the kind designed specifically for
    making you a docile pussy juice excreter
    who thinks and acts like all the other useless eaters


    I'm a paradoxical threat
    Humanity isn't logical yet
    I want to put needles through my optical set
    so I can't see the demonstrable wreck
    that's become of this species of prodigal pests

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    Re: Miserable Aether

    Good rhyme scheme and you seemed to stay to sequence... I’m just confused by the human referral and like what type of abstract you were in the piece - like what animal were you? It was cool, I liked it...
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