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    The Wind Sings TheIllyricist's Avatar
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    Hidden Stories

    There lies, in a forgotten corner
    of a forsaken wood, a necklace
    whispering with moon silver
    and the mourning light.

    The pendant shines of silk
    and memory, brushed
    by gentle hymns; wind,
    and stars, soothing keys.

    Passing canvas; shimmering
    movements of the sky,
    fluid, an elegant dance
    crafted in secret.
    “Those whom life does not cure death will. The world is quite ruthless in selecting between the dream and the reality, even where we will not. Between the wish and the thing the world lies waiting.”

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    microcosm spokenoh's Avatar
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    Re: Hidden Stories

    This isn't very good. Too unclear and there are grammar/spelling issues (morning, not mourning).

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