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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR

    wow u finished ur verse quick, nobody care how fast u started
    cuz u ain't done shit temerity motion, but got some nerve to act retarded
    been on my troll bit for weeks, i gifted u mad events to nitpick
    n when u thank me forgiven u ammo, i'll excuse ur sad attempts to flip it
    ur trash whether its nc or here, ur pen game's old/lame/wack
    dawg u give the site an outdated feel, i'd rather have the homepage back
    ur win/loss total doesn't lie m, plz take a moment to end it all
    want the sad truth? ur season blowed, ur 6-6 record is sodium pentathol
    m ur past 2 wins was suspect, ur newest bars is much hated
    ur playoff runs so hard to apprehend, it even got u.s. marshals frustrated
    u drop plenty of wack gunbars, u really think ur verse mean?!
    m u ain't never brandished a peaceful, bitch u friendly as me n th1rt3een
    this kid's militant front is silly, basic used to have a gnarly pen
    turns out ur still a little green, soldier..got me toying w/ plastic army men


    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M
    Not impressed by ya gun bars, just a bunch of wack disses w/ no sting
    If i read about another Tekken in ya raps...u'll get powerbomb'd like im King

    lol he ain't no rb hall of famer, the delicate bitch smears a pro
    m it's ironic that u mentioned ur king, cuz u quit being relevant 6 yrs ago
    made the finals w/ no worries, ur effort could of proven fatal
    ur rounds could of swung both ways, the shit resemble a newton's cradle
    i ruined basic's only title shot, the wino binge drank a flask jar
    cuz ur fail was such a crucial blunder, it outdid his slim's jason mask bar
    n don't ever state ur my equal, shits absurd mate it's not to be
    cuz ur my 13th consecutive bodybag, while it's ur 3rd straight loss to me
    i chaired this league for a grip, bdot leave u vexed n defeated
    cuz it ain't a table fortuitous all mine, u lucky if ur even next to be seated
    just last month u ducked witty, real grimey how u no showed
    way basic flake when he shook hard, coward remind me of a snow globe
    n i wager ur dayjob's a gamble, u burn males in their peehole
    its obvious u suck ween for cachalot, ur paid to sperm whales at casinos
    smog's 10 bars didn't fade me, n fuck whatever u plan to say
    cuz he floored u w/ one punch, man..ur ownage rival the japanese anime

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR

    ya pedo style is so weird, n ur bromances r so queer
    ur stay here's been childs play, u've been Mr. Herbert to Lenny allllllll year
    see i always drop heavy, pussy u've never dropped anything steady
    those flips take a drastic dive, guess ur parachute cord wasnt ready
    if i catch u in the dark its over, come to ur hood n let the tech ring
    mama said run home when the street lights up, it aint just a "black thing"
    see ur hood cred is lacking, while everyday M's out here trapping
    the only time u ran opponents off the block, was at ur high school track meet
    n dude u need to improve, one slip up n dawg im lookin' to bruise
    this can end in the blink of an eye, n when im finished thats all u'll be able to do
    NBL legend edition too dope, yet u'd rather beat scrubs & some new folk
    the leagues been crying out to you, it came w/ a radio held up at ya window
    real life i'd leave u leanin', u'll get sidelined when i bring the beam in
    trust me once i red shirt Bdot, u can bet ur life he wont be back next season
    if i let that riffle sing, trust me buddy, it can be a scary thing
    i've got folks that'll clap behind u till its dark, u'd think it was the conjuring
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    using facebook to stalk ur opponents, who needs that to be a threat? YOU!
    wanna play private I like Luke Cage? well i hope these bullets bounce off ur chest too
    n ur style just isnt raw, my game makes you seem like a fraud
    every shot you take makes u look more like a bust, i though u were Lonzo Ball
    u barely scrapped by in our last battle, that to me just shows ur all hype
    he cant manage a loss from me, this ass whippin'll leave all his dick riders on strike
    bro u stay on some bitch shit, n u just arent gifted
    the only time u'll see Dot touch a target, is if its done from a distance
    bro ur threats are all wack, toughness? yeah thats the shit that u lack
    i mean we know u wouldnt say anything Krucial, he made u his bitch in the chat
    my hands could bruise u up, i dont need guns to show that im a thug
    if i air the toasters on Bdot, it'll be after i've dropped them both inside the tub
    n ur modding is so light, ur supervision just aint tight
    u'll go down in history as the 1st textcee to ruin a league, on BOTH sites

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR

    wow u finished ur verse quick, nobody care how fast u started
    cuz u ain't done shit temerity motion, but got some nerve to act retarded
    to merit emotion is slick but i didn't like how u flipped it
    been on my troll bit for weeks, i gifted u mad events to nitpick
    n when u thank me forgiven u ammo, i'll excuse ur sad attempts to flip it
    for givin / forgiven is a pretty generic wp but the wording helped you out here. decent hit
    ur trash whether its nc or here, ur pen game's old/lame/wack
    dawg u give the site an outdated feel, i'd rather have the homepage back
    cool
    ur win/loss total doesn't lie m, plz take a moment to end it all
    want the sad truth? ur season blowed, ur 6-6 record is sodium pentathol
    now i gotta ave my bachelors degree in chemistry to decipher ur punches lmfao

    i like what u did here, interesting angle and it works for me

    m ur past 2 wins was suspect, ur newest bars is much hated
    ur playoff runs so hard to apprehend, it even got u.s. marshals frustrated
    u voted for him so kinda takes away from the sting of his verses being suspect lol. This was a cool angle tho i dig it
    u drop plenty of wack gunbars, u really think ur verse mean?!
    m u ain't never brandished a peaceful, bitch u friendly as me n th1rt3een
    not a fan of this one
    this kid's militant front is silly, basic used to have a gnarly pen
    turns out ur still a little green, soldier..got me toying w/ plastic army men
    lol cool
    lol he ain't no rb hall of famer, the delicate bitch smears a pro
    m it's ironic that u mentioned ur king, cuz u quit being relevant 6 yrs ago
    not sre which king ur tlking about. too vague for my liking
    made the finals w/ no worries, ur effort could of proven fatal
    ur rounds could of swung both ways, the shit resemble a newton's cradle
    not feeling this one
    i ruined basic's only title shot, the wino binge drank a flask jar
    cuz ur fail was such a crucial blunder, it outdid his slim's jason mask bar
    lol aight
    n don't ever state ur my equal, shits absurd mate it's not to be
    cuz ur my 13th consecutive bodybag, while it's ur 3rd straight loss to me
    statementish
    i chaired this league for a grip, bdot leave u vexed n defeated
    cuz it ain't a table fortuitous all mine, u lucky if ur even next to be seated
    i get for two it is but who ever says table fortuitous. the double entendre doesn't work for me
    just last month u ducked witty, real grimey how u no showed
    way basic flake when he shook hard, coward remind me of a snow globe
    lmao diggin it
    n i wager ur dayjob's a gamble, u burn males in their peehole
    its obvious u suck ween for cachalot, ur paid to sperm whales at casinos
    i get it, cachhalot / sperm whale but who uses the term "paid to sperm whales". not a fan
    smog's 10 bars didn't fade me, n fuck whatever u plan to say
    cuz he floored u w/ one punch, man..ur ownage rival the japanese anime
    didnt like how u executed this.

    vs

    ya pedo style is so weird, n ur bromances r so queer
    ur stay here's been childs play, u've been Mr. Herbert to Lenny allllllll year
    coulda done more with childs play, the flip to me didnt make sense
    see i always drop heavy, pussy u've never dropped anything steady
    those flips take a drastic dive, guess ur parachute cord wasnt ready
    not feeling this
    if i catch u in the dark its over, come to ur hood n let the tech ring
    mama said run home when the street lights up, it aint just a "black thing"
    ehh
    see ur hood cred is lacking, while everyday M's out here trapping
    the only time u ran opponents off the block, was at ur high school track meet
    doesn't even rhyme
    n dude u need to improve, one slip up n dawg im lookin' to bruise
    this can end in the blink of an eye, n when im finished thats all u'll be able to do
    cool
    NBL legend edition too dope, yet u'd rather beat scrubs & some new folk
    the leagues been crying out to you, it came w/ a radio held up at ya window
    not a fan
    real life i'd leave u leanin', u'll get sidelined when i bring the beam in
    trust me once i red shirt Bdot, u can bet ur life he wont be back next season
    ok i dig it
    if i let that riffle sing, trust me buddy, it can be a scary thing
    i've got folks that'll clap behind u till its dark, u'd think it was the conjuring
    cool
    using facebook to stalk ur opponents, who needs that to be a threat? YOU!
    wanna play private I like Luke Cage? well i hope these bullets bounce off ur chest too
    not feelin this one
    n ur style just isnt raw, my game makes you seem like a fraud
    every shot you take makes u look more like a bust, i though u were Lonzo Ball
    not really feelin this one
    u barely scrapped by in our last battle, that to me just shows ur all hype
    he cant manage a loss from me, this ass whippin'll leave all his dick riders on strike
    not diggin it..
    bro u stay on some bitch shit, n u just arent gifted
    the only time u'll see Dot touch a target, is if its done from a distance
    i liked this
    bro ur threats are all wack, toughness? yeah thats the shit that u lack
    i mean we know u wouldnt say anything Krucial, he made u his bitch in the chat
    not really saying much here
    my hands could bruise u up, i dont need guns to show that im a thug
    if i air the toasters on Bdot, it'll be after i've dropped them both inside the tub
    nah fam
    n ur modding is so light, ur supervision just aint tight
    u'll go down in history as the 1st textcee to ruin a league, on BOTH sites
    statementish

    Basic had some cool hits but not nearly enough to beat B Dot here. Was a good effort though. B dot had a nice verse and in my opinion takes this one home.

    v/Bdot

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR

    Quote Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR View Post
    wow u finished ur verse quick, nobody care how fast u started
    cuz u ain't done shit temerity motion, but got some nerve to act retarded
    This was clever, one of your cleaner executed WP's. To merit emotion, is what I'm assuming was the play.
    been on my troll bit for weeks, i gifted u mad events to nitpick
    n when u thank me forgiven u ammo, i'll excuse ur sad attempts to flip it
    This was soft. Needed more of a harsher execution.
    ur trash whether its nc or here, ur pen game's old/lame/wack
    dawg u give the site an outdated feel, i'd rather have the homepage back
    Same as above, however this bar as a whole conceptually is soft.
    ur win/loss total doesn't lie m, plz take a moment to end it all
    want the sad truth? ur season blowed, ur 6-6 record is sodium pentathol
    This was wack.
    m ur past 2 wins was suspect, ur newest bars is much hated
    ur playoff runs so hard to apprehend, it even got u.s. marshals frustrated
    Good attempt, again execution soft.
    u drop plenty of wack gunbars, u really think ur verse mean?!
    m u ain't never brandished a peaceful, bitch u friendly as me n th1rt3een
    I like the concept and where it was headed but you made a sharp turn left and killed it with a horrible execution.
    this kid's militant front is silly, basic used to have a gnarly pen
    turns out ur still a little green, soldier..got me toying w/ plastic army men
    You've said how bad his pen is the last couple of bars and now his pen game WAS gnarly? Try and coordinate your setups to fit the rest of your verse, bro. Conceptually this was cool but again - the execution is soft.
    lol he ain't no rb hall of famer, the delicate bitch smears a pro
    m it's ironic that u mentioned ur king, cuz u quit being relevant 6 yrs ago
    This was ok. Mild but ok.
    made the finals w/ no worries, ur effort could of proven fatal
    ur rounds could of swung both ways, the shit resemble a newton's cradle
    I think you could have done better with the whole swung both ways concept here. Your execution sucked.
    i ruined basic's only title shot, the wino binge drank a flask jar
    cuz ur fail was such a crucial blunder, it outdid his slim's jason mask bar
    Terrible. I get the whole Kru 13 wack Jason mask bar but this was just wack to me and mostly corny - hardly an insult IMO.
    n don't ever state ur my equal, shits absurd mate it's not to be
    cuz ur my 13th consecutive bodybag, while it's ur 3rd straight loss to me
    Personal, I guess? You could have did more with this but I'll give it too you.
    i chaired this league for a grip, bdot leave u vexed n defeated
    cuz it ain't a table fortuitous all mine, u lucky if ur even next to be seated
    Clever attempt, For 2 it is play but again the execution lacked, dude. If you would just have more of an aggressive/harsher execution - these bars would land much more cleaner and effectively.
    just last month u ducked witty, real grimey how u no showed
    way basic flake when he shook hard, coward remind me of a snow globe
    I'll give you this one. Kind of an old and dated concept tho.
    n i wager ur dayjob's a gamble, u burn males in their peehole
    its obvious u suck ween for cachepot, ur paid to sperm whales at casinos
    What? I see the WP but the execution has nothing to do with the play on word? Plus this was so out of left field. Just killed it for me...
    smog's 10 bars didn't fade me, n fuck whatever u plan to say
    cuz he floored u w/ one punch, man..ur ownage rival the japanese anime
    Wack.
    Broke - I like your style, however if you could just work on more aggressive and harsher executions - you'd be straight. IMO, that is where you lack to be effective and land more cleaner punches. It's like conceptually, your verses are on point, but your struggling with transitioning those concepts to a nice mean, aggressive and effective connection. I prefer harsh executions over wit and personals over generics. You have the wit, which is clear as day just work on executing the witty concepts with harsh insults and you'd be great, dude. I also enjoy your more personal approach over this WP every bar approach you've been doing. For an example, your verse against Packed Graves, which is old - I understand that but it was personal. It was witty but not only witty - every bar was executed with harshness which made the punches that much more effective.

    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M View Post
    ya pedo style is so weird, n ur bromances r so queer
    ur stay here's been childs play, u've been Mr. Herbert to Lenny allllllll year
    Multi rhyme scheme attempt is bad. If you are going to scheme, ensure you are using 3 or more syllable rhyme patterns. 2 are just basic and terrible. Punch was mediocre at best, tho.
    see i always drop heavy, pussy u've never dropped anything steady
    those flips take a drastic dive, guess ur parachute cord wasnt ready
    I liked this. However wording hindered the impact. "Guess your parachute wasn't ready" - the guess killed the impact a lot man. Would have landed more effectively without the word "Guess". - you know what I mean? Would have been harsher without the GUESS in there is what I am saying.
    if i catch u in the dark its over, come to ur hood n let the tech ring
    mama said run home when the street lights up, it aint just a "black thing"
    Street light concepts are pretty dated. The execution on this was soft anyways tho.
    see ur hood cred is lacking, while everyday M's out here trapping
    the only time u ran opponents off the block, was at ur high school track meet
    This was decent. Basic but direct and effective. No extra shit involved.
    n dude u need to improve, one slip up n dawg im lookin' to bruise
    this can end in the blink of an eye, n when im finished thats all u'll be able to do
    Blink of an eye correlated with being crippled is pretty dated. I've seen a lot of these concepts thrown around in my tenure man.
    I even used a blink of an eye concept back in like season 16 but my execution had more or so to do with Butterfly kisses LOL.

    NBL legend edition too dope, yet u'd rather beat scrubs & some new folk
    the leagues been crying out to you, it came w/ a radio held up at ya window
    I think you could have done better with this. Execution lacked everything... Way to open ended and was not harsh by any means,
    IMO.

    real life i'd leave u leanin', u'll get sidelined when i bring the beam in
    trust me once i red shirt Bdot, u can bet ur life he wont be back next season
    Again, multi scheme attempt game is weak. FUck 2 syllables man, step it up a little bit and challenge yourself, if that is how you are going to write your verses. Punch was weak but a good multi scheme could have helped is where I'm going.
    if i let that riffle sing, trust me buddy, it can be a scary thing
    i've got folks that'll clap behind u till its dark, u'd think it was the conjuring
    Don't like this.
    using facebook to stalk ur opponents, who needs that to be a threat? YOU!
    wanna play private I like Luke Cage? well i hope these bullets bounce off ur chest too
    This was ok but wording was shaky. "Hope these bullets bounce of........" The word HOPE killed the impact/effectiveness bro. You have to be careful how you word your punches. 1 word can throw the whole punch out the window and in this case, 2 bars were killed by words you shouldn't have used. It would have been more effective without the word "Hope".
    n ur style just isnt raw, my game makes you seem like a fraud
    every shot you take makes u look more like a bust, i though u were Lonzo Ball
    Don't like this. Sports refs have to be executed with a mean insult or else is bland to me.
    u barely scrapped by in our last battle, that to me just shows ur all hype
    he cant manage a loss from me, this ass whippin'll leave all his dick riders on strike
    Needed more of a harsher execution or witty concept. Way to simple, basic and generic.
    bro u stay on some bitch shit, n u just arent gifted
    the only time u'll see Dot touch a target, is if its done from a distance
    Simple but effective, this one was ok.
    bro ur threats are all wack, toughness? yeah thats the shit that u lack
    i mean we know u wouldnt say anything Krucial, he made u his bitch in the chat
    Nah... Simple but not effective. This type of reference needs some wit and harshness to go with it in order to land effectively.
    my hands could bruise u up, i dont need guns to show that im a thug
    if i air the toasters on Bdot, it'll be after i've dropped them both inside the tub
    Lol, this was ok.
    n ur modding is so light, ur supervision just aint tight
    u'll go down in history as the 1st textcee to ruin a league, on BOTH sites
    This was terrible.
    Basic - You seem to have the mechanics down man. Conceptually - I think you could incorporate a little more witt in to your verses. As far as executions and transitioning your concepts in to an effective punch - you also struggle there, like Broke. Some of your bars were basic which may be your style but if your going to go that way - try and be harsher with your executions. Spit and Karp do it well. They keep their punches basic but their executions are harsh for the most part. I'd prefer to read a verse where I didn't have to search google every other bar, trust me. To me, if there isn't clear enough wording with in the punch or setup to keep me having to research the concept - its more effective IMO. If I have to open up another page to search for clues - to me that kills the impact. You are better off putting expos at the top or bottom of your verse like the good old text days if your going to go that route with complexity lol. Anyways, this verse wasn't your best and I've only read a few from you. A lot of downs here and mostly with your choice of concepts and the lack to execute them in a more harsher/aggressive manner.

    Anyways; I really do hate leaving feedback like this because the majority ignore it and continue to do what they do and I'm just here wasting 30 minutes of my life trying to help/assist.

    Overall - This battle was pretty close. Conceptually - I think Broke edges the battle but as far as effective punches, IDK who ti give the shit too. Both were pretty even here as far as EFFECTIVE punches. Broke had 4 COMPLETE misses, which are thought were wack/terrible and Basic had 5. So I guess I'll have to edge this one to BDOT barely. 1 less miss, IMO... Ok battle... I think you 2 should have left it to 16 lines tops, and just selected your best bars - because this was kind of drawn out and both of you lost A LOT of steam here mid way. Fuck the both of you for making me waste 35 minutes of my life on this damn vote.

    BDot w/ the edge.

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    been on my troll bit for weeks, i gifted u mad events to nitpick
    n when u thank me forgiven u ammo, i'll excuse ur sad attempts to flip it
    ur trash whether its nc or here, ur pen game's old/lame/wack
    dawg u give the site an outdated feel, i'd rather have the homepage back
    u drop plenty of wack gunbars, u really think ur verse mean?!
    m u ain't never brandished a peaceful, bitch u friendly as me n th1rt3een
    lol he ain't no rb hall of famer, the delicate bitch smears a pro
    m it's ironic that u mentioned ur king, cuz u quit being relevant 6 yrs ago
    made the finals w/ no worries, ur effort could of proven fatal
    ur rounds could of swung both ways, the shit resemble a newton's cradle
    i chaired this league for a grip, bdot leave u vexed n defeated
    cuz it ain't a table fortuitous all mine, u lucky if ur even next to be seated
    just last month u ducked witty, real grimey how u no showed
    way basic flake when he shook hard, coward remind me of a snow globe


    vs


    n dude u need to improve, one slip up n dawg im lookin' to bruise
    this can end in the blink of an eye, n when im finished thats all u'll be able to do
    NBL legend edition too dope, yet u'd rather beat scrubs & some new folk
    the leagues been crying out to you, it came w/ a radio held up at ya window
    real life i'd leave u leanin', u'll get sidelined when i bring the beam in
    trust me once i red shirt Bdot, u can bet ur life he wont be back next season
    if i let that riffle sing, trust me buddy, it can be a scary thing
    i've got folks that'll clap behind u till its dark, u'd think it was the conjuring
    n ur style just isnt raw, my game makes you seem like a fraud
    every shot you take makes u look more like a bust, i though u were Lonzo Ball
    bro ur threats are all wack, toughness? yeah thats the shit that u lack
    i mean we know u wouldnt say anything Krucial, he made u his bitch in the chat


    will leave a better explanation later but felt bdot had the harsher more lyrical and creative content in a close one. looks even but basic M wasn't near as harsh and witty as bdots bars

    Vote bdot


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    fire ass battle though. cats is either recycling or missing out voting on this match.

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    I promise I’ll get to this very soon. It’s just a lot of lines lol fuck

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Lol
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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    V. Bdot

    I'm good enuff u can just take my word for it. I see some familiar lines tho ��
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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Broke


    Opener(fire),green soldier, mentioned ur king,3rd straight loss(dope),table for 2,(slick) snow globe, closer

    Those ur best lines.. not ur usual execution but overall pretty cool verse


    Basic

    Opener( ooook) drastic dive(nice),track meet, red shirt( ok),Luke cage(cool),dot touch a target was good, air the toaster



    Wow! I got this even on hits, n both were pretty even on there misses too but I felt the broke landed a few harder punches then M which is why imma edge this to him.. it's closer than it looks but dot gets it.. good job guys..


    Vote DOT

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Congrats Dot!!!

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Thanks for the votes everybody. I know it's 4-0 but I would like to keep this open out of respect to @Basic M so we can get a some more reads and votes.

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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    I promise Iíll get to this very soon. Itís just a lot of lines lol fuck


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    Re: Playoffs FINALS: Basic M vs. B Dot LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    How dare u not count my vote. Other dude was garb n u know it. This was an easy way for u to get the lll season champ medal. Just like Letterman, I'm disappointed in onslaught
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