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    KILLING ME SOFTLY

    Killing me softly


    (After intro)

    Dear Pandas,

    It was like a secret I held inside,
    To relate that strong to a strangers vibe.
    And as my curiosity grew, I didn’t remember all the things we already been thru!
    I don’t know why I wasn’t allowed to raise my babies...
    But I trust the decisions your father made for your family.

    (Over Lauryn)

    They say most are given a choice of 2... for girls there is one that makes you too excited and nervous like you’re out of place and outside of you... and then there’s the one that gives you comfort. He was everything I exert...

    “So I listened for a while”

    I didn’t invite them here, but they came... they asked if anyone in this world and I still chose the same.
    I’m powerless over their demands and accusations and in good heart bounced around with no hesitation. I wouldn’t submit cause what they said was sick and wrong... at the time I had no clue who and what they were accusing so strong.
    When I realized who and what I came back running but our family wasn’t created in sin like their stunting.

    “Telling my whole life with his words...” killing me softly

    Next...

    I’m not trying to take advantage of your emotions either
    But through it all To the Lord I am a slave and believer
    That’s not a switch up it’s an always was
    And I won’t compromise for how they does
    How they got such a strong hold over my flesh and body
    At first I thought it was Satan himself and not some has been nobody
    I don’t even know what safe feels like anymore
    And I’m tired, so tired of that encore

    There he was “strumming my pain with his finger.......” chorus

    (Over the ohs)

    But some things I learned and know to be true:

    1. Do unto others as you want others to do unto you. Be the type of friend you want back and why bother being friends if it’s just some form of sneak attack
    2. Fool me once shame on you fool me twice and the shame is on me... It took a lot to learn you don’t have to forgive so free
    3. Three.. Honesty! No one is perfect and you cant claim every guy you messed with as special especially if you’re a whore. But I ain’t never creeped in or on what was my friends man to create this tour

    (Over lauryn)

    Being good person doesn’t get you fucked I swear... No matter how sick or gross it is I’m standing strong and aware

    I was too slow to anger and too fast to understand and I justified too much and didn’t realize people don’t have the same hearts or motives and such

    BUT... What you put out comes back to you

    We will see how far a hater gets and just what it do!!!

    God already judged me and I survived them shots against incredible odds... I guess I pray he can also justify me too while I fight against all these squads

    ... snitches smmfgdh

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    Re: KILLING ME SOFTLY

    Hi Disciple,

    This seemed okay. It look to have some strong elements to a poem. I definitely believe that the intro vibes pretty well. As I looked at the parts in the parenthesis, I felt that the story continues to unfold. Furthermore, the part that shows numbers 1-3 (lessons learned section) seemed okay as well. Overall I believe that the content of the verse is put together pretty good.

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    Re: KILLING ME SOFTLY

    Thank you!!! @Slashe
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