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    KILLING ME SOFTLY

    Killing me softly
    https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=H-RBJNqdnoM

    (After intro)

    Dear Pandas,

    It was like a secret I held inside,
    To relate that strong to a strangers vibe.
    And as my curiosity grew, I didnít remember all the things we already been thru!
    I donít know why I wasnít allowed to raise my babies...
    But I trust the decisions your father made for your family.

    (Over Lauryn)

    They say most are given a choice of 2... for girls there is one that makes you too excited and nervous like youíre out of place and outside of you... and then thereís the one that gives you comfort. He was everything I exert...

    ďSo I listened for a whileĒ

    I didnít invite them here, but they came... they asked if anyone in this world and I still chose the same.
    Iím powerless over their demands and accusations and in good heart bounced around with no hesitation. I wouldnít submit cause what they said was sick and wrong... at the time I had no clue who and what they were accusing so strong.
    When I realized who and what I came back running but our family wasnít created in sin like their stunting.

    ďTelling my whole life with his words...Ē killing me softly

    Next...

    Iím not trying to take advantage of your emotions either
    But through it all To the Lord I am a slave and believer
    Thatís not a switch up itís an always was
    And I wonít compromise for how they does
    How they got such a strong hold over my flesh and body
    At first I thought it was Satan himself and not some has been nobody
    I donít even know what safe feels like anymore
    And Iím tired, so tired of that encore

    There he was ďstrumming my pain with his finger.......Ē chorus

    (Over the ohs)

    But some things I learned and know to be true:

    1. Do unto others as you want others to do unto you. Be the type of friend you want back and why bother being friends if itís just some form of sneak attack
    2. Fool me once shame on you fool me twice and the shame is on me... It took a lot to learn you donít have to forgive so free
    3. Three.. Honesty! No one is perfect and you cant claim every guy you messed with as special especially if youíre a whore. But I ainít never creeped in or on what was my friends man to create this tour

    (Over lauryn)

    Being good person doesnít get you fucked I swear... No matter how sick or gross it is Iím standing strong and aware

    I was too slow to anger and too fast to understand and I justified too much and didnít realize people donít have the same hearts or motives and such

    BUT... What you put out comes back to you

    We will see how far a hater gets and just what it do!!!

    God already judged me and I survived them shots against incredible odds... I guess I pray he can also justify me too while I fight against all these squads

    ... snitches smmfgdh

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    I’ll post my links by tomorrow evening (thanks for your patience with me)
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    Why does everyone think Iím a boy?

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    Why does everyone think Iím a boy?

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    Re: KILLING ME SOFTLY

    Hi Disciple,

    This seemed okay. It look to have some strong elements to a poem. I definitely believe that the intro vibes pretty well. As I looked at the parts in the parenthesis, I felt that the story continues to unfold. Furthermore, the part that shows numbers 1-3 (lessons learned section) seemed okay as well. Overall I believe that the content of the verse is put together pretty good.

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    Re: KILLING ME SOFTLY

    Thank you!!! @Slashe
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    Why does everyone think Iím a boy?

 

 

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