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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR

    Check. Going 20.

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR

    I’ll def be voting

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR

    @B Dot LESNAR I'm just gettin back from an extended vacay so could I get an extension till tomorrow? Probably by noon or so I'll have a verse

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR

    For sure.

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR

    Ur path looks nice but....

    If I'd a wrote my best 10 more often u'd a been left in ur coffin
    S'why ur road to the finals stops here..cuz top tiers leave u dead end forgotten
    U turn bitch mode n find dicks to ride to get rode..< that gay shits weak tho
    In our last battle every distended to miss me.. but u wound up w/ an inflated ego
    See u drop alotta trash that misses the eye, just wait till ur lucks gone, dufus
    it ain't bout U droppin morass than most..its when WE gon stop bein stuck on stupid
    I admit u been written wild shit w/ no impact, it be plain as day
    S'like losing 10 on an end around flea flicker.. u waste a creative play
    We was cool till I saw ur true colors, how u did pack n spree wit gay tactics
    So if ur witnessing aversion of me u ain't seen.. s'cuz I actually HATE FAGGOTS!
    givin friend requests just to stab backs, like every girl that been w/ this geek did
    To gain advantage ull throw asunder the bus.. a reflection of ur heart bein ripped into pieces
    See I'll break u down fa actin tuff, c'mon dawg on RB u the main queer
    But im still pickin u apart, faggot.. no matter what roll u choose to play here
    Tried to school u on seedings, said I'd see u in the finals n u ignored it too
    Now ill force teach u how brackets work.. when the votes show no1's supporting u
    N I don't needa use quotes for personals, known facts has my whole verse hittin
    Plus we dont discuss profit off fixer upers.. so u ain't never said shit worth flippin
    See pussy imma stop this run, a bitch holdin the title should not be done
    Id never underestimate the heart of a champ.. it's accurate to say u the softest 1

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR

    lost to klass/siq in round 1 season 20
    loss to junto in round 1 season 19
    loss to amen in round 2 year season 18
    loss to arch in round 2 season 17

    ur playoff slump is buns yo, rd:1 was type queer mate
    dude u been taking letdown hard now going on 5 years straight
    u see me troll req n krucial? real talk i'm a bad meanie
    last time u bullied a rookie class the goof humbled u mad easy
    stays flush w/ clear losses, u ain't a sworn elite clown
    cuz junto sedulous fortunate then gave u a thorough beatdown
    took grief from παmε, huh? say that my drops is weak
    i'm nicer than ominous so don't get extra when ur odds is bleak
    try not to get off track here, the kids dirt a plain speck
    thought u could railroad arch but ur shit verse was a trainwreck

    Quote Originally Posted by Smog
    If all u wants to beat me, then ya front 2 teeth needa top that wish list
    Cuz As many times as I've given Noels.. this 1's fuckin up ur god damn Christmas
    watch me top ur best work, i'm frantic to win this bitch
    n yuletide me over til the finals w/ ur stupid ass christmas flips
    fans me in his breakdowns, it's awful when he dweebs
    ur cooked andouille both know u throat my sausage in ur feeds
    u not a goon smog admit it, was real but u went funny
    i'll put tenantry wounds in ur frame then jux u for ur rent money
    dicked ur babymom proper, the dame bush was fervid
    i slipped inside then litter box up until her tame pussy squirted
    spend time w/ ur daughter, heard ur trife ass runt nag
    the peckerwood rather text than be w/ his white trash cuntbag

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Good shit dot. gl


    That roll posed to be role.. few misspells but not hard to figure out..

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    If I'd a wrote my best 10 more often u'd a been left in ur coffin
    S'why ur road to the finals stops here..cuz top tiers leave u dead end forgotten
    diggin it
    U turn bitch mode n find dicks to ride to get rode..< that gay shits weak tho
    In our last battle every distended to miss me.. but u wound up w/ an inflated ego
    cool
    See u drop alotta trash that misses the eye, just wait till ur lucks gone, dufus
    it ain't bout U droppin morass than most..its when WE gon stop bein stuck on stupid
    not feelin this
    I admit u been written wild shit w/ no impact, it be plain as day
    S'like losing 10 on an end around flea flicker.. u waste a creative play
    didn't like how u executed this
    We was cool till I saw ur true colors, how u did pack n spree wit gay tactics
    So if ur witnessing aversion of me u ain't seen.. s'cuz I actually HATE FAGGOTS!
    nah
    givin friend requests just to stab backs, like every girl that been w/ this geek did
    To gain advantage ull throw asunder the bus.. a reflection of ur heart bein ripped into pieces
    seen asunder done better than this, not feelin it
    See I'll break u down fa actin tuff, c'mon dawg on RB u the main queer
    But im still pickin u apart, faggot.. no matter what roll u choose to play here
    cool
    Tried to school u on seedings, said I'd see u in the finals n u ignored it too
    Now ill force teach u how brackets work.. when the votes show no1's supporting u
    nah..
    N I don't needa use quotes for personals, known facts has my whole verse hittin
    Plus we dont discuss profit off fixer upers.. so u ain't never said shit worth flippin
    cool
    See pussy imma stop this run, a bitch holdin the title should not be done
    Id never underestimate the heart of a champ.. it's accurate to say u the softest 1
    didn;t like this

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    ur playoff slump is buns yo, rd:1 was type queer mate
    dude u been taking letdown hard now going on 5 years straight
    didn;t like how this was executed.. letdown could have been more effective
    u see me troll req n krucial? real talk i'm a bad meanie
    last time u bullied a rookie class the goof humbled u mad easy
    nah..
    stays flush w/ clear losses, u ain't a sworn elite clown
    cuz junto sedulous fortunate then gave u a thorough beatdown
    diggin it
    took grief from παmε, huh? say that my drops is weak
    i'm nicer than ominous so don't get extra when ur odds is bleak
    reach..
    try not to get off track here, the kids dirt a plain speck
    thought u could railroad arch but ur shit verse was a trainwreck
    this isn't the usual b dot im used to seein
    watch me top ur best work, i'm frantic to win this bitch
    n yuletide me over til the finals w/ ur stupid ass christmas flips
    lmao nice
    fans me in his breakdowns, it's awful when he dweebs
    ur cooked andouille both know u throat my sausage in ur feeds
    reach.. I'm assuming ur going for "and dude we"
    u not a goon smog admit it, was real but u went funny
    i'll put tenantry wounds in ur frame then jux u for ur rent money
    nah..
    dicked ur babymom proper, the dame bush was fervid
    i slipped inside then litter box up until her tame pussy squirted
    ok
    spend time w/ ur daughter, heard ur trife ass runt nag
    the peckerwood rather text than be w/ his white trash cuntbag
    not feelin it man.

    i thought smog had the overall better verse. B dot had the lotb w/ yuletide but smog was a bit more consistent.

    v/smog

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ur path looks nice but....

    If I'd a wrote my best 10 more often u'd a been left in ur coffin
    S'why ur road to the finals stops here..cuz top tiers leave u dead end forgotten
    nah didnít like this
    U turn bitch mode n find dicks to ride to get rode..< that gay shits weak tho
    In our last battle every distended to miss me.. but u wound up w/ an inflated ego
    alright not bad
    See u drop alotta trash that misses the eye, just wait till ur lucks gone, dufus
    it ain't bout U droppin morass than most..its when WE gon stop bein stuck on stupid
    nah this wasnít done good, miss
    I admit u been written wild shit w/ no impact, it be plain as day
    S'like losing 10 on an end around flea flicker.. u waste a creative play
    this had potential but didnít turn out well
    We was cool till I saw ur true colors, how u did pack n spree wit gay tactics
    So if ur witnessing aversion of me u ain't seen.. s'cuz I actually HATE FAGGOTS!
    meh, I think this is another one that had potential but wasnít done right
    givin friend requests just to stab backs, like every girl that been w/ this geek did
    To gain advantage ull throw asunder the bus.. a reflection of ur heart bein ripped into pieces
    Man nah
    See I'll break u down fa actin tuff, c'mon dawg on RB u the main queer
    But im still pickin u apart, faggot.. no matter what roll u choose to play here
    decent
    Tried to school u on seedings, said I'd see u in the finals n u ignored it too
    Now ill force teach u how brackets work.. when the votes show no1's supporting u
    negative sir
    N I don't needa use quotes for personals, known facts has my whole verse hittin
    Plus we dont discuss profit off fixer upers.. so u ain't never said shit worth Flippin
    ok
    See pussy imma stop this run, a bitch holdin the title should not be done
    Id never underestimate the heart of a champ.. it's accurate to say u the softest 1
    no

    Smog, the only bar I honestly liked here somewhat was distended, and even that wasnít a hitter like that. I feel like you rely too much solely on basic wordplays and donít actually get creative enough with it. Your setups arenít bad but your closer is literally the wordplay, then a simple explanation of what the wordplay means, which isnít a dope way to execute it. I was lower mid tier once too, and it took me some time to Final become top tier but with hard work and dedication I definitely see you becoming one of us.....youíre just not there yet. This verse could have and should have been better for an LLL semi. 5/10

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    ur playoff slump is buns yo, rd:1 was type queer mate
    dude u been taking letdown hard now going on 5 years straight
    alright
    u see me troll req n krucial? real talk i'm a bad meanie
    last time u bullied a rookie class the goof humbled u mad easy
    nah
    stays flush w/ clear losses, u ain't a sworn elite clown
    cuz junto sedulous fortunate then gave u a thorough beatdown
    decent
    took grief from παmε, huh? say that my drops is weak
    i'm nicer than ominous so don't get extra when ur odds is bleak
    ok, execution a bit lazy but not bad
    try not to get off track here, the kids dirt a plain speck
    thought u could railroad arch but ur shit verse was a Trainwreck
    nah these kinda punches been played
    Quote Originally Posted by Smog
    If all u wants to beat me, then ya front 2 teeth needa top that wish list
    Cuz As many times as I've given Noels.. this 1's fuckin up ur god damn Christmas
    watch me top ur best work, i'm frantic to win this bitch
    n yuletide me over til the finals w/ ur stupid ass christmas flips
    ok
    fans me in his breakdowns, it's awful when he dweebs
    ur cooked andouille both know u throat my sausage in ur feeds
    reach here
    u not a goon smog admit it, was real but u went funny
    i'll put tenantry wounds in ur frame then jux u for ur rent money
    nah
    dicked ur babymom proper, the dame bush was fervid
    i slipped inside then litter box up until her tame pussy squirted
    decent
    spend time w/ ur daughter, heard ur trife ass runt nag
    the peckerwood rather text than be w/ his white trash cuntbag
    nah man

    After reading smogs verse I thought Iíd read yours and see you blow him out of the waters but tbh this wasnít far from his verse quality at all. I feel like you both just said fuck it and tried throwing the battle because I can honestly and unfortunately say there was not one haymaker in this battle. Like fresh said above, this isnít the usual broke Iím used to seeing, not sure what happened here. I feel like you got lazy with this one and overdosed on wordplays that turned out to be reaches more often than not. You had a few decent lines in here, but nothing standout. Regardless of the material, you did word your bars better than smog and you can at least spell and your grammar doesnít suck. 5.5/10


    Very close battle, can go either way. But vote BROKE for more consistency

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    If I'd a wrote my best 10 more often u'd a been left in ur coffin
    S'why ur road to the finals stops here..cuz top tiers leave u dead end forgotten
    U turn bitch mode n find dicks to ride to get rode..< that gay shits weak tho
    In our last battle every distended to miss me.. but u wound up w/ an inflated ego
    See u drop alotta trash that misses the eye, just wait till ur lucks gone, dufus
    it ain't bout U droppin morass than most..its when WE gon stop bein stuck on stupid
    ---NOT FEELING THE OPENER, INFLATED EGO WAS LIGHT, STUCK ON STUPID WAS OK
    I admit u been written wild shit w/ no impact, it be plain as day
    S'like losing 10 on an end around flea flicker.. u waste a creative play
    We was cool till I saw ur true colors, how u did pack n spree wit gay tactics
    So if ur witnessing aversion of me u ain't seen.. s'cuz I actually HATE FAGGOTS!
    givin friend requests just to stab backs, like every girl that been w/ this geek did
    To gain advantage ull throw asunder the bus.. a reflection of ur heart bein ripped into pieces
    ---DIDNT LIKE FLEA FLICKER, AVERSION AND ASUNDER were tight
    See I'll break u down fa actin tuff, c'mon dawg on RB u the main queer
    But im still pickin u apart, faggot.. no matter what roll u choose to play here
    Tried to school u on seedings, said I'd see u in the finals n u ignored it too
    Now ill force teach u how brackets work.. when the votes show no1's supporting u
    N I don't needa use quotes for personals, known facts has my whole verse hittin
    Plus we dont discuss profit off fixer upers.. so u ain't never said shit worth flippin
    ---DIDNT LIKE THE SEEDING BAR, THE ROLL BAR WAS PREDICTABLE, I LIKED FIXER UPPERS
    See pussy imma stop this run, a bitch holdin the title should not be done
    Id never underestimate the heart of a champ.. it's accurate to say u the softest 1
    ---NOTHIN HARD HERE MAN

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    ur playoff slump is buns yo, rd:1 was type queer mate
    dude u been taking letdown hard now going on 5 years straight
    u see me troll req n krucial? real talk i'm a bad meanie
    last time u bullied a rookie class the goof humbled u mad easy
    stays flush w/ clear losses, u ain't a sworn elite clown
    cuz junto sedulous fortunate then gave u a thorough beatdown
    ---OPENER WAS HARSH, MAD EASY WAS OK, NOT FEELING BEATDOWN
    took grief from παmε, huh? say that my drops is weak
    i'm nicer than ominous so don't get extra when ur odds is bleak
    try not to get off track here, the kids dirt a plain speck
    thought u could railroad arch but ur shit verse was a trainwreck
    watch me top ur best work, i'm frantic to win this bitch
    n yuletide me over til the finals w/ ur stupid ass christmas flips
    ---DIDNT LIKE OMINOUS, RAILROAD WAS COOL, YULETIDE WAS COOL
    fans me in his breakdowns, it's awful when he dweebs
    ur cooked andouille both know u throat my sausage in ur feeds
    u not a goon smog admit it, was real but u went funny
    i'll put tenantry wounds in ur frame then jux u for ur rent money
    dicked ur babymom proper, the dame bush was fervid
    i slipped inside then litter box up until her tame pussy squirted
    ---SAUSAGE BEEF WAS COOL, WASNT FEELING RENT MONEY OR LITTER BOX
    spend time w/ ur daughter, heard ur trife ass runt nag
    the peckerwood rather text than be w/ his white trash cuntbag
    ---THIS WAS COOL

    V/BDOT...IDK MAN THIS WASNT THE BEST I'VE SEEN FROM EITHER. THOUGHT DOTS PERSONALS WERE A SMIDGE BETTER...COULD GO EITHER WAY BUT I DIDNT SEE ANYTHING JAW DROPPING FROM EITHER.

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    i didnt expect Smog to be this good, and i didnt expect Lesnar to go this light.
    but both were on the same level
    my style is more aimed at making all word references tie into one theme, double entendres, and punching off it...
    ...while u guys are more focused on flipping word and incorporating 1 reference word as your punch.
    EX : smog's distended/inflated bar /// dot's sedulous/thorough bar
    (im explaining my style so u guys have an idea of what im saying about them focusing on wordflips only)


    [[[SMOG]]]

    If I'd a wrote my best 10 more often u'd a been left in ur coffin
    S'why ur road to the finals stops here..cuz top tiers leave u dead end forgotten

    ---dead end forgotten, dead and forgotten? thats reachy to me, but i see u guys really love extreme wordplay on here. if i didnt mind that, id say the punch is cool though "stops here/dead end"---

    U turn bitch mode n find dicks to ride to get rode..< that gay shits weak tho
    In our last battle every distended to miss me.. but u wound up w/ an inflated ego

    ---i see the punch here- distended/inflated, but this coulda been better,, and find dicks to ride to get rode? lol---

    See u drop alotta trash that misses the eye, just wait till ur lucks gone, dufus
    it ain't bout U droppin morass than most..its when WE gon stop bein stuck on stupid

    ---i like this bar. not gonna lie, im from the hood and we dont have that college student vocabulary that u guys got on here, lol i had no idea what morass meant so i googled it (dont judge me just bcuz im not a college nerd) lol, dope bar though, i learned a new word today lol---

    I admit u been written wild shit w/ no impact, it be plain as day
    S'like losing 10 on an end around flea flicker.. u waste a creative play

    ---kinda light, but i see what u mean. just got done playing madden18 lol---

    We was cool till I saw ur true colors, how u did pack n spree wit gay tactics
    So if ur witnessing aversion of me u ain't seen.. s'cuz I actually HATE FAGGOTS!

    ---again, light bar. seems u tend to cater to flipping the wordplay than actually connecting it to the punch completely, but its coo---

    givin friend requests just to stab backs, like every girl that been w/ this geek did
    To gain advantage ull throw asunder the bus.. a reflection of ur heart bein ripped into pieces

    ---again, another bar that was focusing on only the word flip. i get the bar, (thanks to google again lmao wtf is asunder? lmao jk i goggled it assholes) (just being honest for REALsake) asunder/ripped into pieces, okay bar---

    See I'll break u down fa actin tuff, c'mon dawg on RB u the main queer
    But im still pickin u apart, faggot.. no matter what roll u choose to play here

    ---"pick you a part like a talent agent" - loaded lux....ive heard many 'pick you a part' bars already, so its kinda played.---

    Tried to school u on seedings, said I'd see u in the finals n u ignored it too
    Now ill force teach u how brackets work.. when the votes show no1's supporting u

    ---light---

    N I don't needa use quotes for personals, known facts has my whole verse hittin
    Plus we dont discuss profit off fixer upers.. so u ain't never said shit worth flippin

    ---dope house flipping bar tbh. but as pertaining to a text battle, how does discussing profit and quoting personals go together here? other than that, i like the punch. profit off fixer uppers/flipping---

    See pussy imma stop this run, a bitch holdin the title should not be done
    Id never underestimate the heart of a champ.. it's accurate to say u the softest 1

    ---light ender imo, unless i missed something here---

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    [[[BDOT LESNAR]]]

    lost to klass/siq in round 1 season 20
    loss to junto in round 1 season 19
    loss to amen in round 2 year season 18
    loss to arch in round 2 season 17

    ur playoff slump is buns yo, rd:1 was type queer mate
    dude u been taking letdown hard now going on 5 years straight

    ---did i miss a punch? if not, light---

    u see me troll req n krucial? real talk i'm a bad meanie
    last time u bullied a rookie class the goof humbled u mad easy

    ---bullying socalled rookies is looked highly upon here? lmao being a Bad Meanie is good around here? wtf. anyway i see your doing personals, i dont see a punch here.---

    stays flush w/ clear losses, u ain't a sworn elite clown
    cuz junto sedulous fortunate then gave u a thorough beatdown

    ---this is like one of smog's bar. more catered to wordplay, and not an actual punch. EX: beatdown has no relation to sedulous, thorough does---

    took grief from παmε, huh? say that my drops is weak
    i'm nicer than ominous so don't get extra when ur odds is bleak

    ---decent bar. again, wordplay only. only the word Bleak connected to your wordplay (ominous/bleak). belooshka wasnt lying lol---

    try not to get off track here, the kids dirt a plain speck
    thought u could railroad arch but ur shit verse was a trainwreck

    ---wouldve been better if the word Arch tied into your railroad/trainwreck shit. but oh well, decent---

    [[[[[[[[[[[Quote Originally Posted by Smog
    If all u wants to beat me, then ya front 2 teeth needa top that wish list
    Cuz As many times as I've given Noels.. this 1's fuckin up ur god damn Christmas]]]]]]]]]]

    watch me top ur best work, i'm frantic to win this bitch
    n yuletide me over til the finals w/ ur stupid ass christmas flips

    ---i get the yuletide/finals and the christmas part. i just dont get how this is a diss, other than saying smog has stupid christmas flips. youll tide me over?---

    fans me in his breakdowns, it's awful when he dweebs
    ur cooked andouille both know u throat my sausage in ur feeds

    ---not feeling this at all. i get andouille is a sausage, but this shit is a reach to me, "ur cooked on do we..." bro this shit giving me a fuckin headache---

    u not a goon smog admit it, was real but u went funny
    i'll put tenantry wounds in ur frame then jux u for ur rent money

    ---i like the tenantry (10 entry)/rent money shit, dope. just think it can be better. again, your more worried bout wordplay, than making everything connect. EX: i woulda tried to find a different word for Wounds that goes with tenants/house/rent/etc to make it complete. but we got 2 totally diff styles i see---

    dicked ur babymom proper, the dame bush was fervid
    i slipped inside then litter box up until her tame pussy squirted

    ---funny, this bar is okay... but its technically your best bar put together here (as far as everything adding up and corelating) exept 'slipped inside'---

    spend time w/ ur daughter, heard ur trife ass runt nag
    the peckerwood rather text than be w/ his white trash cuntbag

    ---this some whiteboy ass shit lmaoooooo. im not feeling this at all, weak ass ender. u forced this bar just to make the multie syllables (trife ass cunt nag/white trash cunt bag) lmao---

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    vote/ smog
    he had less weak bars, and less reaches
    both on the same level pretty much though, both got VERY similar styles
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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Smog: wasn’t feeling dead end, good attempt though. Distended was cool wp, flames. The setup for stuck on stupid was cool but it didn’t land for me. Flea flicker was ill as fuck. Mad creative. Hate faggots was wack and sus as fuck lmao. Facebook requests was a cool personal but it really wasn’t that harsh. Rb roll was a throwaway. No1 was cool, wack wp tho. Fixer upper was fuckin gas.. closer was soft

    Vs

    Broke: wasn’t feeling opener, rookie class was rofl. Thourogh beatdown was dope. Ominous was fire, nice flip, train wreck was coo lmao. Noel’s was lotb, u just did a Christmas flip tho lol. This was executed nicely tho. This was very sus. Tenantry was botb. Shit was fireee. my nigga just said take pussy tho, lol I fux widdit cuh. Wasn’t feeling the closer.


    Overall: nice battle here. Smog had some good bars, his wp def approved but I don’t fuck with his wording, he’s got a southern twang and it’s just annoying, when I read ur shit it just sounds like a redneck dissin, lol. No hate , u had some haymakers in there for sure. I’m sure you’ll bitch about my vote but idc. I felt broke coulda used more personals. But his wp & humor was just enough imo. Dope match

    Vote: broke

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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Smog
    Opener was cool
    Distended was cool
    Morass was cool wordplay executed poorly bro. Miss
    TBH I thought the flea flicker bar was trash
    Again aversion could have been dope. Worded poorly
    Asunder could have been much better bro
    Not a fan of roll here
    Seeding no
    Fixer uppers was cool. Already thought of doper angles for this but cool
    Closer was bland

    Vs

    Broke

    Opener was ok...
    Mean was light tbh
    Not feeling beat down
    Ominous I wasn't feeling
    Train wreck was played. Seen that shit done a gang of times
    Yuletide was dope. Nice personal
    Andouille was dope to. Some will say it's a reach but say it in slang it works
    Tenantry was deff a reach tho
    Seen litter box done better. lol' @ fervid. Miss tho
    Peckerhead could have been much more harsh bro...you shoulda went cut throats with the daughter shit


    Overall
    Wasn't a fan of this battle... both had a shit load of misses. I got broke with more personal attempts taking this. Tbh it could go either way. Edging this to broke

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    BROKE LESNAR
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    Re: Playoffs SEMI-FINALS: Smog vs. BROKE LESNAR - OPEN FOR VOTES

    BROKE wins

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