A little feedback would be dope?

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    Question A little feedback would be dope?

    Collectively certain that you're a virgin to merkin
    I'm straight savage for working up on this bitch while she twerking
    We're yearning searching for surgeons, emerging merchants we're lurking
    to purchase Persians for purging before they're urgently burning
    I think this verse needs rewording, try one that's not so disturbing
    I might purchase a version with a little more worship for cursing
    To tell the truth mate, I'm not a fan of Aussie rap
    We got those type of voices that just sound like crap
    But I'm a little different when I get up on the track
    I say fuck I say cunt and that’s a well known fact
    So fuck you cunt I'm the illest around
    I'm the only motherfucker here killing the sound
    You're the only prick in here that I wouldn’t announce
    Like you were shooting 3’s and I got all the rebounds
    Or like I was playing cat and you were the mouse
    Or like you were the jester and I was being crowned
    Or like I was mainstream and you were underground
    Sit back down you little fuck I'm the best pound for pound
    I'm that inbound battle ground blood hound you shouldn’t doubt

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    Re: A little feedback would be dope?

    Okay cool this guy gets in here keep droppin bro...
    a labyrinth of power.....

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    Re: A little feedback would be dope?

    Not a bad key Lenny...
    Try smartning up ya words.

    "Collectively certain that you're a virgin to merkin"

    I Merc (murk) virgins like fuckin in a Benz for the first time!



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