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    La Costa Nostra Late Bloom's Avatar
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    Down in twenty

    Youll never get passed the last verse i wrote
    If any of yall ever come around after this right yall still too slow
    For real man im the big man yall are just some little fish
    Yo i aint really wanna write much or ruin the art of rhyming so im a let one slip
    Yo im beyond this little mindset that yall are trying to play at
    Some cats yeah rhyming art but aint even listen to half ya lame tracks
    For real man u aint taking this reality of mine from me
    You aint like me you nothing like the lines i left u for ya homies
    No man your not getting it there is no story there are no rhymes
    Nobodies trying to fuck you man its just me ripping it on a mic
    You aint even got flow that sound creative in fact u so weak u can just bereave me faggot
    Im so crazy ill have twisted sisters comeby both trying to blow me while im speaking spanish
    Your not whack though nah its not that its just im trying to think a sumn
    Cause for real you in this real rap and ya game is tight but still aint talking bout nothing
    Fuck it though i do like this shit this is a creative way to flip a bar
    I know u and ya friends freestyle its cool i get u think ur an ill emcee u just aint get that far
    Whatever im stan im gay and fat i mean what the fuck is that
    Thought we were homies boy aint want to take me for some piece of trash
    Man whats this whats that where u heading with this piece
    Aint know i was lost she said yeah cause u ran out of cheese
    Forget it man ive explained this shit before and much better than this
    You rhymes so square man i had to jump u but aint trying to go legit
    In fact here it comes if you want to go
    Cause im a do u so nice youll be wondering which time it is but i bet u already know
    a labyrinth of power.....

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    MAD! A Disciple's Avatar
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    Re: Down in twenty

    Is this like it was all a dream but not piece? You have some good points if you wanna R.I.P a mic in my opinion... going straight the strongest and the rise of spanish hip hop. Go harder!!! Separate yourself and put out your best piece ever I suggest. Good luck
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