Basic M vs. Letterman[open for votes]

[Barcotic]

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@Basic M @Letterman

[Sizurp]

Im here... im doin 12-14

[Sizurp]

You give texting a really bad look, face it you cant buck
All the dope heads r suppose to band together, u've got us lookin like Big Time Rush
Your not ready for this game, M been handing out spankings
Play mellow all you want, i'll knock you down wayyyyy worse than his Espn rankings
I cant glorify a loser, ur verses always get a weak buzz
If those punches are unfukwitable, its cuz they show as much as he does
I run the streets with real G's, while all u've got is fairies around dude
If me n my goons circle jerkin, thats the kick back from the aks when we surround you
Im like canelo in the ring, i'll maul ya face then flee the scene
If u beat me it'd be the worst robbery ever, and we STILL wouldnt call u a triple G
This bum aint a real gangster, we all know he's frail and sad
Last time u pulled ur guns out in public, everybody stopped their reps to laugh
This aint a game at all, theres not a letter drop that can beat me
The only time ur skills make a tremendous jump, is when u spend ur check collecting VC

@Letterman

[Letterman]

Not sure who you are but quite frankly I don't care.

Consider dropping the girl next door persona and be a man, lettuce know who you are.

I got groupies that’ll fuck you up. Better be nice with the hands
Cuz just for saying that you hate letter, you’ll get a mean right from a fan
You’re soft in real life, all your gun bars should be known as filler
This bitch is only good for acting, we’d never believe Emma Stone faced killer
When Zelph pressed you we didn’t see this lame zealous
That beating around the bush with Glocc could prolly make The Game jealous
Nobody likes you. I’d come to ur city & get your whole hood to shoot slugs
Embrace yourself, or you’ll get surrounded with arms around u like a group hug
You bringing 4 homies along? You’ll all be lined up in my aim, fag
I’m like Barcotic with the gun - you’ll see 5 weaks get dropped from the same mag
LLL used to be for the greats. Now all these basic bars have it tainted
We’ve never seen an embargo overheads, he should be banned from sending that plane shit
Would’ve killed u last night but fuck it, cuz imma give my bitch the blade fool
Let her slice you open..
& the docs’ll have to close you up on a Sunday after my chick fil-A you

[Wuxia]

You give texting a really bad look, face it you cant buck
All the dope heads r suppose to band together, u've got us lookin like Big Time Rush

☆☆☆☆☆

Your not ready for this game, M been handing out spankings
Play mellow all you want, i'll knock you down wayyyyy worse than his Espn rankings

☆☆☆☆☆

I cant glorify a loser, ur verses always get a weak buzz
If those punches are unfukwitable, its cuz they show as much as he does

☆☆☆☆☆

I run the streets with real G's, while all u've got is fairies around dude
If me n my goons circle jerkin, thats the kick back from the aks when we surround you

☆☆☆☆☆

Im like canelo in the ring, i'll maul ya face then flee the scene
If u beat me it'd be the worst robbery ever, and we STILL wouldnt call u a triple G

☆

This bum aint a real gangster, we all know he's frail and sad
Last time u pulled ur guns out in public, everybody stopped their reps to laugh

☆☆☆☆☆

This aint a game at all, theres not a letter drop that can beat me
The only time ur skills make a tremendous jump, is when u spend ur check collecting VC

☆

@Letterman

I got groupies that’ll fuck you up. Better be nice with the hands
Cuz just for saying that you hate letter, you’ll get a mean right from a fan

☆ lmao wtf are you doing using played letter np's on yourself bro?

You’re soft in real life, all your gun bars should be known as filler
This bitch is only good for acting, we’d never believe Emma Stone faced killer

☆☆☆☆☆

When Zelph pressed you we didn’t see this lame zealous
That beating around the bush with Glocc could prolly make The Game jealous

☆☆☆☆☆

Nobody likes you. I’d come to ur city & get your whole hood to shoot slugs
Embrace yourself, or you’ll get surrounded with arms around u like a group hug

☆ i think charlie clips used a bar similar to this

You bringing 4 homies along? You’ll all be lined up in my aim, fag
I’m like Barcotic with the gun - you’ll see 5 weaks get dropped from the same mag

☆☆☆ tbc I thought using a weeks/weaks wp to make the punch work was really amateurish for you homie, i gave you credit because i thought it was a clever concept, but how you executed it wasn't to my liking


LLL used to be for the greats. Now all these basic bars have it tainted
We’ve never seen an embargo overheads, he should be banned from sending that plane shit

☆☆☆☆☆ now I can tolerate the plain/plane wordplay because the embargo np was the primary wp, unlike before where you needed weeks/weaks to pull it off, this was NICE

Would’ve killed u last night but fuck it, cuz imma give my bitch the blade fool
Let her slice you open..
& the docs’ll have to close you up on a Sunday after my chick fil-A you


☆☆☆☆☆ I've seen a lot of Chick-Fil-A bars, especially back when they were in the news for their stance against anti-faggotry, but i liked how you incorporated them never being opened on Sundays, great way to support the concept

I have M barely edging this out. If it wasn't for me having to deduct points for Letter's weeks/weaks wp, this would of been even and Letter would have probably won the tiebreaker. But M started off with 4 bars in a row that connected with me.

v-Basic M

[plethora]

You give texting a really bad look, face it you cant buck
All the dope heads r suppose to band together, u've got us lookin like Big Time Rush
^nasty
Your not ready for this game, M been handing out spankings
Play mellow all you want, i'll knock you down wayyyyy worse than his Espn rankings
^decent
I cant glorify a loser, ur verses always get a weak buzz
If those punches are unfukwitable, its cuz they show as much as he does
^ok
I run the streets with real G's, while all u've got is fairies around dude
If me n my goons circle jerkin, thats the kick back from the aks when we surround you
^noo
Im like canelo in the ring, i'll maul ya face then flee the scene
If u beat me it'd be the worst robbery ever, and we STILL wouldnt call u a triple G
^nah man this was lazy
This bum aint a real gangster, we all know he's frail and sad
Last time u pulled ur guns out in public, everybody stopped their reps to laugh
^ok
This aint a game at all, theres not a letter drop that can beat me
The only time ur skills make a tremendous jump, is when u spend ur check collecting VC
^ok


Vs.


I got groupies that’ll fuck you up. Better be nice with the hands
Cuz just for saying that you hate letter, you’ll get a mean right from a fan
^lol nah man
You’re soft in real life, all your gun bars should be known as filler
This bitch is only good for acting, we’d never believe Emma Stone faced killer
^dope
When Zelph pressed you we didn’t see this lame zealous
That beating around the bush with Glocc could prolly make The Game jealous
^dope
Nobody likes you. I’d come to ur city & get your whole hood to shoot slugs
Embrace yourself, or you’ll get surrounded with arms around u like a group hug
^arms/group hug is played but the nameplay incorporated was a nice touch so overall ok
You bringing 4 homies along? You’ll all be lined up in my aim, fag
I’m like Barcotic with the gun - you’ll see 5 weaks get dropped from the same mag
^ehh
LLL used to be for the greats. Now all these basic bars have it tainted
We’ve never seen an embargo overheads, he should be banned from sending that plane shit
^ok
Would’ve killed u last night but fuck it, cuz imma give my bitch the blade fool
Let her slice you open..
& the docs’ll have to close you up on a Sunday after my chick fil-A you
^nope





Got Basic M in a very close one

[Lenox]

Basic: opener was gay, espn rankings was cool, unfukwitable was good. Circle jerkin was mehhhh, I didn't like the setup execution was good. Triple g wasn't hard, guns in public didn't land. 2k was decent

Vs

Lett: hate letter was creative, Emma stone was dopeee, wasn't feeling the zelph concept, group hug was wack, same mag was fire, embargo was also fire, chick fila is old tbh.

Overall: this was a dope battle. Def botw. I got lett with more punches honestly he had some heat. Not sure what y'all talkin bout.

Vote; letterman

[Cajetan]

You give texting a really bad look, face it you cant buck
All the dope heads r suppose to band together, u've got us lookin like Big Time Rush
Umm, ok they were a boy band, but what was you're point? Where the diss or better yet, how does the league look like a band?
Your not ready for this game, M been handing out spankings
Play mellow all you want, i'll knock you down wayyyyy worse than his Espn rankings
Decent
I cant glorify a loser, ur verses always get a weak buzz
If those punches are unfukwitable, its cuz they show as much as he does
Lmao this is dope
I run the streets with real G's, while all u've got is fairies around dude
If me n my goons circle jerkin, thats the kick back from the aks when we surround you
Decent, though could have polished up the wording
Im like canelo in the ring, i'll maul ya face then flee the scene
If u beat me it'd be the worst robbery ever, and we STILL wouldnt call u a triple G
Gennedy got jerked, but anyway this is too simple imo.
This bum aint a real gangster, we all know he's frail and sad
Last time u pulled ur guns out in public, everybody stopped their reps to laugh
Lol good humor
This aint a game at all, theres not a letter drop that can beat me
The only time ur skills make a tremendous jump, is when u spend ur check collecting VC
Good closer

I got groupies that’ll fuck you up. Better be nice with the hands
Cuz just for saying that you hate letter, you’ll get a mean right from a fan
Don't like this opener tbh. write/right naaa my G
You’re soft in real life, all your gun bars should be known as filler
This bitch is only good for acting, we’d never believe Emma Stone faced killer
Decent, though ya could have done more with the concept
When Zelph pressed you we didn’t see this lame zealous
That beating around the bush with Glocc could prolly make The Game jealous
Good
Nobody likes you. I’d come to ur city & get your whole hood to shoot slugs
Embrace yourself, or you’ll get surrounded with arms around u like a group hug
Dope, wording needs polish, but this is good
You bringing 4 homies along? You’ll all be lined up in my aim, fag
I’m like Barcotic with the gun - you’ll see 5 weaks get dropped from the same mag
Nasty, this was hard
LLL used to be for the greats. Now all these basic bars have it tainted
We’ve never seen an embargo overheads, he should be banned from sending that plane shit
LOTB I really liked this joint
Would’ve killed u last night but fuck it, cuz imma give my bitch the blade fool
Let her slice you open..
& the docs’ll have to close you up on a Sunday after my chick fil-A you
Ok closer

Overall M was very consistent, but Lett had the two killer bars of the battle, I honestly can't see past that, LETTERMAN.

[Smog]

Basic m

mello, unfuckwitable, guns out, closer

Those the ones I liked most.. thought wording coulda been touched up on some of the misses

Let

Emma stone, game jealous, embrace, 5 weaks get dropped, embargo


Overall solid verse


Got it 5-4 lett plus thought he landed th harder punches..cleaner wording woulda helped M land more but still feel u dropped pretty good, let just had a couple fire joints that sealed the deal Imo.. good showing frim both tho


Vote letter

[Wuxia]

Letterman 3-2 needs votes.

[Stranger]

basic
You give texting a really bad look, face it you cant buck
All the dope heads r suppose to band together, u've got us lookin like Big Time Rush
ehh, this is a little too stretched, not really feeling this though.

Your not ready for this game, M been handing out spankings
Play mellow all you want, i'll knock you down wayyyyy worse than his Espn rankings
not feeling this, seen you do better.

I cant glorify a loser, ur verses always get a weak buzz
If those punches are unfukwitable, its cuz they show as much as he does
hhaha, this is a hitter.

I run the streets with real G's, while all u've got is fairies around dude
If me n my goons circle jerkin, thats the kick back from the aks when we surround you
not feeling this, too stretched.

Im like canelo in the ring, i'll maul ya face then flee the scene
If u beat me it'd be the worst robbery ever, and we STILL wouldnt call u a triple G
not really feeling this one either.

This bum aint a real gangster, we all know he's frail and sad
Last time u pulled ur guns out in public, everybody stopped their reps to laugh
this was soft right here.

This aint a game at all, theres not a letter drop that can beat me
The only time ur skills make a tremendous jump, is when u spend ur check collecting VC
you can do better!

Yea I definately seen you do better, the punches where kind of basic and your bars are too long sometimes.

letter
I got groupies that’ll fuck you up. Better be nice with the hands
Cuz just for saying that you hate letter, you’ll get a mean right from a fan
okay, this was coo

You’re soft in real life, all your gun bars should be known as filler
This bitch is only good for acting, we’d never believe Emma Stone faced killer
not liking this.

When Zelph pressed you we didn’t see this lame zealous
That beating around the bush with Glocc could prolly make The Game jealous
nah this is a miss.

Nobody likes you. I’d come to ur city & get your whole hood to shoot slugs
Embrace yourself, or you’ll get surrounded with arms around u like a group hug
not my style, but I liked the group hug part.

You bringing 4 homies along? You’ll all be lined up in my aim, fag
I’m like Barcotic with the gun - you’ll see 5 weaks get dropped from the same mag
this is a miss.

LLL used to be for the greats. Now all these basic bars have it tainted
We’ve never seen an embargo overheads, he should be banned from sending that plane shit
okay, this is better.. I like it.

Would’ve killed u last night but fuck it, cuz imma give my bitch the blade fool
Let her slice you open..
& the docs’ll have to close you up on a Sunday after my chick fil-A you
the chick fil a has been done to death, not feeling this at all.

spamming gun bars a lot, and even had abar complaining about your opponents usage of gun bars lmao, any way, you can do better to, but you had a few bars that stood out for me, like group hug, and right from a fan.

mvgt: letter.

[Enbombz]

ou give texting a really bad look, face it you cant buck
All the dope heads r suppose to band together, u've got us lookin like Big Time Rush
okay bad wording with the end rhymes though **
Your not ready for this game, M been handing out spankings
Play mellow all you want, i'll knock you down wayyyyy worse than his Espn rankings
gave it a google but didn't help, i 'll give you the benefit it works but stil woding could've been better**
I cant glorify a loser, ur verses always get a weak buzz
If those punches are unfukwitable, its cuz they show as much as he does
okay***
I run the streets with real G's, while all u've got is fairies around dude
If me n my goons circle jerkin, thats the kick back from the aks when we surround you
no*
Im like canelo in the ring, i'll maul ya face then flee the scene
If u beat me it'd be the worst robbery ever, and we STILL wouldnt call u a triple G
pkay***
This bum aint a real gangster, we all know he's frail and sad
Last time u pulled ur guns out in public, everybody stopped their reps to laugh
okay***
This aint a game at all, theres not a letter drop that can beat me
The only time ur skills make a tremendous jump, is when u spend ur check collecting VC
okay closer ***

vs

I got groupies that’ll fuck you up. Better be nice with the hands
Cuz just for saying that you hate letter, you’ll get a mean right from a fan
meh**
You’re soft in real life, all your gun bars should be known as filler
This bitch is only good for acting, we’d never believe Emma Stone faced killer
lol****
When Zelph pressed you we didn’t see this lame zealous
That beating around the bush with Glocc could prolly make The Game jealous
okay***
Nobody likes you. I’d come to ur city & get your whole hood to shoot slugs
Embrace yourself, or you’ll get surrounded with arms around u like a group hug
done anembrace before this was cool though***
You bringing 4 homies along? You’ll all be lined up in my aim, fag
I’m like Barcotic with the gun - you’ll see 5 weaks get dropped from the same mag
lol fuck it needed the set up but it was alright***
LLL used to be for the greats. Now all these basic bars have it tainted
We’ve never seen an embargo overheads, he should be banned from sending that plane shit
good****
Would’ve killed u last night but fuck it, cuz imma give my bitch the blade fool
Let her slice you open..
& the docs’ll have to close you up on a Sunday after my chick fil-A you
okay closer***

I got Let here fairly clearly. Basics wording let him down at times and just felt he was coming up short concept wise compared to Let.

V/Letterman

[Late Bloom]

Aye i also got letterman here everyones already kind of said what had to be said... but anyways heres my vote and it goes to letterman..... if u need a better breakdown ask but i mean letterman was clearly the better verse here.... yeah so vote the letter man...