Champion: B Dot Lesnar vs. Fresh - OPEN FOR VOTES!

[Barcotic]

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@B Dot LESNAR @Fresh

[Wuxia]

Check. Going 16.

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@Fresh sent 16 to Barcotic.

[Wuxia]

Let's make it 20.

[Fresh]

Check

[Fresh]

16 sent to barcotic @B Dot LESNAR

[Wuxia]

fresh = jesse brewer, mom = terry brewer


jesse a popular dude in ottowa, folks cheer n sing ur praises
i'm sure u were raised in a livelihood, n throated queers for measly wages
ur pic battles are awesome tho, i ♡ how fuckin cool u dress
it don't matter how skinny or fatuous, cuz u always be lookin 'stupid fresh'
watched ur show at mavericks, yup i seen it live u guys rock
u got abandon hope to get signed?, gtfoh. u tour sleazy dives n sidewalks
enough with the chatter fresh, i'm repeatedly stealin his jaw
after i put a massive dent ingestion, he'll be eating meals through a straw
wow ur mum's face an eyesore, i'd give that slut a busted lip
don't get pissed that i'm dysentery, her mug some 'bloody disgusting' shit
fresh legit soft with no muscle, for real i'm gone @ this cuck
spend more time at the jim breuer, ur a half-baked goof n scrawny as fuck
n wtf @ barc giving u VOTW, ur short of luck n bound to fold
hey congrats on ur ONE fucking win, that's more than what ur album sold
the hottest venues never book u, it's time to get sober quick
that's why u call ur band fly downs, ur obliged to suck the promoter's dick

[Fresh]

he's old as shit and not even known, but still so overrated
nobody's been able to tell historian you’d need one of those to relay it
his son died from old age, how can that be
Broke could terrace ACL sleeping, n say he fell from a balcony
n ur girl's old ass a 1 outta 20, I'm hatin the scenery
s'why she's not my type.. writin her letters n shit on ancient machinery
time to face the music, I've left higher tiered horror struck
fuck strikin a chord I'ma crush u under the weight of an orchestra
u ain't got a formula, reading his punches is a real disservice
n' if any of dots connected, it was pieced together from other peoples verses
I've got a style of my own, so I do not feel threatened
my concepts start from scratch.. u start to scratch cuz urs are NC's sloppy seconds
and bro just to spite you, there's an exception about to be unchecked
if it bugs you enough, it's cicada make ur wifey scream louder than the insect
go ahead n kiss your lady penis breath, you'll be a faggot til your death
cause every dick your honeysuckle leave their fragrance on both ur breath

[plethora]

jesse a popular dude in ottowa, folks cheer n sing ur praises
i'm sure u were raised in a livelihood, n throated queers for measly wages
^good opener
ur pic battles are awesome tho, i ♡ how fuckin cool u dress
it don't matter how skinny or fatuous, cuz u always be lookin 'stupid fresh'
^coulda been worded better
watched ur show at mavericks, yup i seen it live u guys rock
u got abandon hope to get signed?, gtfoh. u tour sleazy dives n sidewalks
^creative
enough with the chatter fresh, i'm repeatedly stealin his jaw
after i put a massive dent ingestion, he'll be eating meals through a straw
^dope
wow ur mum's face an eyesore, i'd give that slut a busted lip
don't get pissed that i'm dysentery, her mug some 'bloody disgusting' shit
^nice
fresh legit soft with no muscle, for real i'm gone @ this cuck
spend more time at the jim breuer, ur a half-baked goof n scrawny as fuck
^cool
n wtf @ barc giving u VOTW, ur short of luck n bound to fold
hey congrats on ur ONE fucking win, that's more than what ur album sold
^ehh
the hottest venues never book u, it's time to get sober quick
that's why u call ur band fly downs, ur obliged to suck the promoter's dick
^lol nah


Vs.


he's old as shit and not even known, but still so overrated
nobody's been able to tell historian you’d need one of those to relay it
^dope
his son died from old age, how can that be
Broke could terrace ACL sleeping, n say he fell from a balcony
^lol
n ur girl's old ass a 1 outta 20, I'm hatin the scenery
s'why she's not my type.. writin her letters n shit on ancient machinery
^ok
time to face the music, I've left higher tiered horror struck
fuck strikin a chord I'ma crush u under the weight of an orchestra
^light
u ain't got a formula, reading his punches is a real disservice
n' if any of dots connected, it was pieced together from other peoples verses
^ugh borderline miss
I've got a style of my own, so I do not feel threatened
my concepts start from scratch.. u start to scratch cuz urs are NC's sloppy seconds
^nooo
and bro just to spite you, there's an exception about to be unchecked
if it bugs you enough, it's cicada make ur wifey scream louder than the insect
^ok
go ahead n kiss your lady penis breath, you'll be a faggot til your death
cause every dick your honeysuckle leave their fragrance on both ur breath
^good




V/b dot for the harder hitting verse

[Sizurp]

STUPID FRESH, ABANDON, INGESTION, DYSENTERY, JIM BRUER
VS
HISTORIAN,ACL,CICADA,HONEYSUCKLE

V/BDOT, I HAVE HIM EDGING IT WITH 1 BAR

[Cajetan]

As always you brought a very good verse, extremely creative and original wordplay, as well as sharp personals. The only minor I find within your drops, is the punch impact never wows me. I feel like the wording of yo punches could be a whole lot harder/harsher, other than that you're one dope writer.

Decent showing, some nice punches and cool wordplay through out, it just that cconcepts like: terrace, strike a chord & cicada left something to be desired. They were good concepts/wordplay, but the execution lacked, As though you should've approached them from diiferent angles and/or with different wording to bring the punches to fruition.

Overal a nice battle, nice verses from both, yet BROKE LESNAR had more to offer his audience.

[Smog]

Broke

Opener, fatuous, abandon, dent ingestion, dysentery Jim Breuer..


Solid verse couple misses but those were dope

Opener, terrace acl, cicada, honeysuckle



Good battle, got it 6-4 dot here thought fresh slipped on a few that hurt him cuz dot was pretty consistent.. dots connected was ooook but wasn't on par with what u were landing execution wise.. pretty dope battle tho so props

Vote broke

[Enbombz]

jesse a popular dude in ottowa, folks cheer n sing ur praises
i'm sure u were raised in a livelihood, n throated queers for measly wages
okay start***
ur pic battles are awesome tho, i ♡ how fuckin cool u dress
it don't matter how skinny or fatuous, cuz u always be lookin 'stupid fresh'
plays a reach for me, could've tied in better**
watched ur show at mavericks, yup i seen it live u guys rock
u got abandon hope to get signed?, gtfoh. u tour sleazy dives n sidewalks
pretty good, alot going on but i like it ****
enough with the chatter fresh, i'm repeatedly stealin his jaw
after i put a massive dent ingestion, he'll be eating meals through a straw
a reach for me, tied in nice**
wow ur mum's face an eyesore, i'd give that slut a busted lip
don't get pissed that i'm dysentery, her mug some 'bloody disgusting' shit
dope*****
fresh legit soft with no muscle, for real i'm gone @ this cuck
spend more time at the jim breuer, ur a half-baked goof n scrawny as fuck
reach for me but would of been nice**
n wtf @ barc giving u VOTW, ur short of luck n bound to fold
hey congrats on ur ONE fucking win, that's more than what ur album sold
okay***
the hottest venues never book u, it's time to get sober quick
that's why u call ur band fly downs, ur obliged to suck the promoter's dick
okay***

vs

he's old as shit and not even known, but still so overrated
nobody's been able to tell historian you’d need one of those to relay it
good opener****
his son died from old age, how can that be
Broke could terrace ACL sleeping, n say he fell from a balcony
okay***
n ur girl's old ass a 1 outta 20, I'm hatin the scenery
s'why she's not my type.. writin her letters n shit on ancient machinery
okay pay light angle **
time to face the music, I've left higher tiered horror struck
fuck strikin a chord I'ma crush u under the weight of an orchestra
rough rhyme/strike a chord done to death*
u ain't got a formula, reading his punches is a real disservice
n' if any of dots connected, it was pieced together from other peoples verses
dope*****
I've got a style of my own, so I do not feel threatened
my concepts start from scratch.. u start to scratch cuz urs are NC's sloppy seconds
okay***
and bro just to spite you, there's an exception about to be unchecked
if it bugs you enough, it's cicada make ur wifey scream louder than the insect
good****
go ahead n kiss your lady penis breath, you'll be a faggot til your death
cause every dick your honeysuckle leave their fragrance on both ur breath
okay closer***

Pretty good battle.I got fresh here though. Alot of brokes wordplay was a reach for me. Iam a foreigner here though so dont take it to heart. Fresh had the most played bar but brokes reaches took away from his verse here for me.

v/Fresh

[Wuxia]

BROKE 4-1 needs votes.