Smog (6-4) vs. Basic M (3-1) - (Smog wins 4-2)

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@Smog @Basic M

[Sizurp]

12 is good man

[Smog]

I meant to sign out this week dammit.. oh well I'll get sump'n up within the hour bro.. 12's plenty

[Smog]

Iight I'm good.. 12 done @Basic M

[Sizurp]

You and ya kids gettin flamed, ya avys a shame, smog bout to get roasted w/ no love,
I know u n those hillbillies hate soap scum, but ill be cleanin ya fam blood outta my bath tub.

mannn iunno what it is about @Smog lately but IMHO he was performing a lot better a few seasons ago. basically he's lacking concept consistency, too many personals without sting. @B Dot LESNAR took this comfortably w/ a pretty dope verse. 1 of his better ones

That 09' steez will get u beat son, ur talentless so beating M? Ur dead wrong,
You've got personals by the crutches, cuz w/o em ur skills have absolutely NOTHIN to lean on.
You were Fiening for a win vs Lesnar, dropped tough n u still couldnt get it,
The way bdot left u 80's probably got u shakin worse than that crack epidemic.
I'll pop ur Lid and Spill the shit, its nothin but trouble whenever my goons hawkin,
Pussy, u're takin all these cans to the face quicker than Stone Cold Steve Austin.
This battles a beat down son, fuck ur accolades, my text is the MEANEST n its clever,
I dont give af if ur a former league champ...it was probably the most forgetable season EVER.
Chicks play u like a sucka, get a grip, every week they're bankin on ya pay day,
Its like no matter what Dameon, u can bet this pussy washin her draws faster than craig n day day.

[Smog]

U beat swordnation, got 2 no show wins, lost to pleth n DOT, do the math

Yep,

U ain't as dope as THEY make u out to be, so don't think u gon test a Don
It looks hella good to be 3-1.. courtesy of WHOEVER TF got ur record wrong
But ur lips r zipped G, cuz that's^ the best position this bitch'll get, see
loungin poolside wit a sun hat bubble shades n a martini.. is the only time ur sittin pretty
I'll tie u up n get dome from ya girl, My D be hard to take in throats
I'll make bay watch her choke on this dick... n no CPR will save the hoe
Since u came back u made some noise, but ain't nuttin the best'll fear
Yeah embarked a lot..but no bytes why Imma start endin ya text career
Ill shut ya hype up, fuck perkin pecks if what's behind the damn chest is gone
In other words to some ur Nice Butt..them same geeks judge ass when spandex is on
What u drop is clear trash bruh, so feelin ILL is awfully weird, bastard
Fuck how MC's himself.. when u don't even qualify as a bottom tier rapper

[Fresh]

basic m

You and ya kids gettin flamed, ya avys a shame, smog bout to get roasted w/ no love,
I know u n those hillbillies hate soap scum, but ill be cleanin ya fam blood outta my bath tub.
gotta work on wording, too much being written here for what's actually being said. concept was okkk but didn't execute well.
That 09' steez will get u beat son, ur talentless so beating M? Ur dead wrong,
You've got personals by the crutches, cuz w/o em ur skills have absolutely NOTHIN to lean on.
this was a jab
You were Fiening for a win vs Lesnar, dropped tough n u still couldnt get it,
The way bdot left u 80's probably got u shakin worse than that crack epidemic.
"left u eighties" does not ake sense to me... not diggin this
I'll pop ur Lid and Spill the shit, its nothin but trouble whenever my goons hawkin,
Pussy, u're takin all these cans to the face quicker than Stone Cold Steve Austin.
this is decent
This battles a beat down son, fuck ur accolades, my text is the MEANEST n its clever,
I dont give af if ur a former league champ...it was probably the most forgetable season EVER.
not very creative.
Chicks play u like a sucka, get a grip, every week they're bankin on ya pay day,
Its like no matter what Dameon, u can bet this pussy washin her draws faster than craig n day day.
The name is actually Damon not Dameon so this does not work for me

Overall you've got some concepts but maybe are just rushing or something cause theyre not worded as well as you could be wording them.

smog

U ain't as dope as THEY make u out to be, so don't think u gon test a Don
It looks hella good to be 3-1.. courtesy of WHOEVER TF got ur record wrong
decent
But ur lips r zipped G, cuz that's^ the best position this bitch'll get, see
loungin poolside wit a sun hat bubble shades n a martini.. is the only time ur sittin pretty
not a fan of this
I'll tie u up n get dome from ya girl, My D be hard to take in throats
I'll make bay watch her choke on this dick... n no CPR will save the hoe
could have worded better, but its decent
Since u came back u made some noise, but ain't nuttin the best'll fear
Yeah embarked a lot..but no bytes why Imma start endin ya text career
didnt like this
Ill shut ya hype up, fuck perkin pecks if what's behind the damn chest is gone
In other words to some ur Nice Butt..them same geeks judge ass when spandex is on
not diggin it..
What u drop is clear trash bruh, so feelin ILL is awfully weird, bastard
Fuck how MC's himself.. when u don't even qualify as a bottom tier rapper
ok

Seems you rushed this as you didn't tweak your conecpts to have that smog tier finish.

Not one of the best battles I've read, but you each had some hits in there. Feeling like smog was just a little more consistent tho so he's gonna get my vote.

v/smog

[Wuxia]

You and ya kids gettin flamed, ya avys a shame, smog bout to get roasted w/ no love,
I know u n those hillbillies hate soap scum, but ill be cleanin ya fam blood outta my bath tub.

☆

That 09' steez will get u beat son, ur talentless so beating M? Ur dead wrong,
You've got personals by the crutches, cuz w/o em ur skills have absolutely NOTHIN to lean on.

☆☆☆☆☆

You were Fiening for a win vs Lesnar, dropped tough n u still couldnt get it,
The way bdot left u 80's probably got u shakin worse than that crack epidemic.

☆☆☆☆☆

I'll pop ur Lid and Spill the shit, its nothin but trouble whenever my goons hawkin,
Pussy, u're takin all these cans to the face quicker than Stone Cold Steve Austin.

☆☆☆☆☆

This battles a beat down son, fuck ur accolades, my text is the MEANEST n its clever,
I dont give af if ur a former league champ...it was probably the most forgetable season EVER.

☆☆☆☆☆

Chicks play u like a sucka, get a grip, every week they're bankin on ya pay day,
Its like no matter what Dameon, u can bet this pussy washin her draws faster than craig n day day.

☆

U beat swordnation, got 2 no show wins, lost to pleth n DOT, do the math

Yep,

U ain't as dope as THEY make u out to be, so don't think u gon test a Don
It looks hella good to be 3-1.. courtesy of WHOEVER TF got ur record wrong

☆☆☆☆☆

But ur lips r zipped G, cuz that's^ the best position this bitch'll get, see
loungin poolside wit a sun hat bubble shades n a martini.. is the only time ur sittin pretty

☆☆☆☆☆

I'll tie u up n get dome from ya girl, My D be hard to take in throats
I'll make bay watch her choke on this dick... n no CPR will save the hoe

☆

Since u came back u made some noise, but ain't nuttin the best'll fear
Yeah embarked a lot..but no bytes why Imma start endin ya text career

☆☆☆☆☆

Ill shut ya hype up, fuck perkin pecks if what's behind the damn chest is gone
In other words to some ur Nice Butt..them same geeks judge ass when spandex is on

☆

What u drop is clear trash bruh, so feelin ILL is awfully weird, bastard
Fuck how MC's himself.. when u don't even qualify as a bottom tier rapper

☆☆☆☆☆

Nice battle. You guys are actually tied here. I was feeling a lot of bars from the both of you. Since it's even I'm going to base my decision on where the misses came. Basic had a miss in his opener and closer, but had 4 straight bars in the middle that were fire. Smog had a bit more trouble with momentum.

v-Basic M

[plethora]

You and ya kids gettin flamed, ya avys a shame, smog bout to get roasted w/ no love,
I know u n those hillbillies hate soap scum, but ill be cleanin ya fam blood outta my bath tub
^ehh
That 09' steez will get u beat son, ur talentless so beating M? Ur dead wrong,
You've got personals by the crutches, cuz w/o em ur skills have absolutely NOTHIN to lean on.
^meh
You were Fiening for a win vs Lesnar, dropped tough n u still couldnt get it,
The way bdot left u 80's probably got u shakin worse than that crack epidemic.
^dope
I'll pop ur Lid and Spill the shit, its nothin but trouble whenever my goons hawkin,
Pussy, u're takin all these cans to the face quicker than Stone Cold Steve Austin.
^stone cold/cans punches are played
This battles a beat down son, fuck ur accolades, my text is the MEANEST n its clever,
I dont give af if ur a former league champ...it was probably the most forgetable season EVER.
^too simple
Chicks play u like a sucka, get a grip, every week they're bankin on ya pay day,
Its like no matter what Dameon, u can bet this pussy washin her draws faster than craig n day day.
^lol

Vs.

U ain't as dope as THEY make u out to be, so don't think u gon test a Don
It looks hella good to be 3-1.. courtesy of WHOEVER TF got ur record wrong
^lol
But ur lips r zipped G, cuz that's^ the best position this bitch'll get, see
loungin poolside wit a sun hat bubble shades n a martini.. is the only time ur sittin pretty
^ehhhh
I'll tie u up n get dome from ya girl, My D be hard to take in throats
I'll make bay watch her choke on this dick... n no CPR will save the hoe
^bae watch punches are played but this was worded well
Since u came back u made some noise, but ain't nuttin the best'll fear
Yeah embarked a lot..but no bytes why Imma start endin ya text career
^ok
Ill shut ya hype up, fuck perkin pecks if what's behind the damn chest is gone
In other words to some ur Nice Butt..them same geeks judge ass when spandex is on
^lol
What u drop is clear trash bruh, so feelin ILL is awfully weird, bastard
Fuck how MC's himself.. when u don't even qualify as a bottom tier rapper
^no




This was really tuff to judge who won. So i'll judge by my positive reactions to bars..


Basic had 1 dope, 1 lol
Smog had 1 ok, 2 lols



V/ Smog

[Enbombz]

You and ya kids gettin flamed, ya avys a shame, smog bout to get roasted w/ no love,
I know u n those hillbillies hate soap scum, but ill be cleanin ya fam blood outta my bath tub.
decent if not a bit long though***
That 09' steez will get u beat son, ur talentless so beating M? Ur dead wrong,
You've got personals by the crutches, cuz w/o em ur skills have absolutely NOTHIN to lean on.
decent personal, personals by the crutches wasn't the best choice of words though***
You were Fiening for a win vs Lesnar, dropped tough n u still couldnt get it,
The way bdot left u 80's probably got u shakin worse than that crack epidemic.
Dope*****
I'll pop ur Lid and Spill the shit, its nothin but trouble whenever my goons hawkin,
Pussy, u're takin all these cans to the face quicker than Stone Cold Steve Austin.
meh/okay **
This battles a beat down son, fuck ur accolades, my text is the MEANEST n its clever,
I dont give af if ur a former league champ...it was probably the most forgetable season EVER.
Not terrible but too long and every season i see a bar like this**
Chicks play u like a sucka, get a grip, every week they're bankin on ya pay day,
Its like no matter what Dameon, u can bet this pussy washin her draws faster than craig n day day.
As someone pointed out that not beig his name kils it*


vs

U ain't as dope as THEY make u out to be, so don't think u gon test a Don
It looks hella good to be 3-1.. courtesy of WHOEVER TF got ur record wrong
lol nice opener****
But ur lips r zipped G, cuz that's^ the best position this bitch'll get, see
loungin poolside wit a sun hat bubble shades n a martini.. is the only time ur sittin pretty
meh**
I'll tie u up n get dome from ya girl, My D be hard to take in throats
I'll make bay watch her choke on this dick... n no CPR will save the hoe
decent****
Since u came back u made some noise, but ain't nuttin the best'll fear
Yeah embarked a lot..but no bytes why Imma start endin ya text career
it's okay but seen an embark pay this week already **
Ill shut ya hype up, fuck perkin pecks if what's behind the damn chest is gone
In other words to some ur Nice Butt..them same geeks judge ass when spandex is on
meh**
What u drop is clear trash bruh, so feelin ILL is awfully weird, bastard
Fuck how MC's himself.. when u don't even qualify as a bottom tier rapper
okay closer ***

Close battle. Seen both drop better. I though basic had the clear line of the battle. Smog didn't have as bad a miss as basic in equal measure. I feel like smog executed his better. The played forgettable line and the dameon name attempt just tilting it by a cunt hair to Smog.This could go either way though, decent showing from both.

V/Smog

[Cajetan]

You and ya kids gettin flamed, ya avys a shame, smog bout to get roasted w/ no love,
I know u n those hillbillies hate soap scum, but ill be cleanin ya fam blood outta my bath tub.
Naaah don't like this opener
That 09' steez will get u beat son, ur talentless so beating M? Ur dead wrong,
You've got personals by the crutches, cuz w/o em ur skills have absolutely NOTHIN to lean on.
Should've worded this different, but it's OK
You were Fiening for a win vs Lesnar, dropped tough n u still couldnt get it,
The way bdot left u 80's probably got u shakin worse than that crack epidemic.
"ate he's" yea it's works
I'll pop ur Lid and Spill the shit, its nothin but trouble whenever my goons hawkin,
Pussy, u're takin all these cans to the face quicker than Stone Cold Steve Austin.
Nope, played
This battles a beat down son, fuck ur accolades, my text is the MEANEST n its clever,
I dont give af if ur a former league champ...it was probably the most forgetable season EVER.
Too straight forward
Chicks play u like a sucka, get a grip, every week they're bankin on ya pay day,
Its like no matter what Dameon, u can bet this pussy washin her draws faster than craig n day day.
Damon, not Dameon. Mediocre

U ain't as dope as THEY make u out to be, so don't think u gon test a Don
It looks hella good to be 3-1.. courtesy of WHOEVER TF got ur record wrong
Lol decent opener
But ur lips r zipped G, cuz that's^ the best position this bitch'll get, see
loungin poolside wit a sun hat bubble shades n a martini.. is the only time ur sittin pretty
Mediocre
I'll tie u up n get dome from ya girl, My D be hard to take in throats
I'll make bay watch her choke on this dick... n no CPR will save the hoe
Naaah different wording would have made this work
Since u came back u made some noise, but ain't nuttin the best'll fear
Yeah embarked a lot..but no bytes why Imma start endin ya text career
Not feeling this
Ill shut ya hype up, fuck perkin pecks if what's behind the damn chest is gone
In other words to some ur Nice Butt..them same geeks judge ass when spandex is on
This deserves a strong PAUSE
What u drop is clear trash bruh, so feelin ILL is awfully weird, bastard
Fuck how MC's himself.. when u don't even qualify as a bottom tier rapper
This was OK

Overall weak showings from both battlers tbh, M had some good concepts that he didn't execute well, while Smog had a really mediocre concepts, so that made this tough to call. Comparing the two I edged it to BASIC M, even though I've read better verses from both.

[Spree]

3-2 smog

[Barcotic]

basic m

opener was wack
nothin to lean on was a good jab
80's was dope
cans to the face played af
former champ was weak
pay day/day day? naa

vs

smog

3-1 lol ok
sittin pretty was wack
bay watch was wordy n played
embarked was coo
nice butt was wack
closer, u needed this bar to be decent.. it was

v/smog