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    Basic M vs. Sour Joog[open for votes]

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    verses due Sunday, September 17
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    @Basic M @Sour Joog

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    I can do 16

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    Basic M sent 16.

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    cool. check

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M View Post
    @Sour Joog aint ready for this massacre



    Dog talk a big one but i'm gone leave him in casket, why?
    Embark n no bite..this just the start of ya journey to the afterlife
    Dude you in grave danger,Try box n you smacked aside
    You wont even get past my guard n get buried at the back of mine
    This just fate playing out, you die today I'm calling it nerd
    Doomed since birthright now u get the beating you always deserved
    His wifey a hoe, gone for days and she hand out that pussy,
    If she ever go back to basic's, it's simple..She just ran out of money
    Ya Head in in the clouds thinking u can stunt on the kid
    S'why I'm taking out this Dreamer, that's some trump politics
    Violence my flavor of the month, try test i devour cats
    Screw ya face up in bad taste bud tryna step on sour patch
    Ya fam droppin one by one, as each bullet rip the flesh away
    After i send ya Antennae, watch ya bug out at the mess i made
    I gave dude fair warning i'll put a round in his face
    Em braced for the kill shot, his fam can hug it out at the wake

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    I promise... This wont end well for you.

    Your a Quick Meal in my hood, u'd definitely get stabbed in the trap,
    The shank'll make Sour Patch his wounds before my homies leave em ate like a snack.
    This character is laughable, just an Actor...im making it clear,
    This Clowns a pretender, i'd call him Pennywise but he's never had a drop w/ somethin to fear.
    I dont care if ya Hotel, fuck these hands, my glock'll leave this dude stinkin,
    I'll spray till he's leanin, then leave his corpse in the freezer for hours...Kenneka Jenkins.
    This niggas beyond pussy, i'll crack his grill if he even thinks that im bluffin,
    He aint tryna throw fists...he's just an NC head thats ALLLLL about discussion.
    You cant Weather this Storm, Its all hell when me and my boys meet ya,
    Thats 3 uzis ready to wet ya crib n blow it allllll away...Jose, Irma, and Katia.
    Joog means to Hustle. LOL, this fairies "hood cred" is soooo tragic,
    Even if ur in the trap shavin crack, it just further proves your a faggot.
    I dont wanna see a "tough guy" verse, its SO annoying, that garbage aint sick to me,
    If he tries it, my knifes leavin Sow Gutted worse than a fresh package of chitterlings.
    Ur bitch sleeps w/ my cock in her mouth. She's in love w/ my bone,
    In fact she wakes up to rubber rise n her mouth cause she knows its time to give dome.

    Damn.

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M View Post
    I promise... This wont end well for you.

    Your a Quick Meal in my hood, u'd definitely get stabbed in the trap,
    The shank'll make Sour Patch his wounds before my homies leave em ate like a snack.

    ☆☆☆☆☆ nice

    This character is laughable, just an Actor...im making it clear,
    This Clowns a pretender, i'd call him Pennywise but he's never had a drop w/ somethin to fear.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    I dont care if ya Hotel, fuck these hands, my glock'll leave this dude stinkin,
    I'll spray till he's leanin, then leave his corpse in the freezer for hours...Kenneka Jenkins.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    This niggas beyond pussy, i'll crack his grill if he even thinks that im bluffin,
    He aint tryna throw fists...he's just an NC head thats ALLLLL about discussion.

    ☆☆☆☆☆ lmao

    You cant Weather this Storm, Its all hell when me and my boys meet ya,
    Thats 3 uzis ready to wet ya crib n blow it allllll away...Jose, Irma, and Katia.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Joog means to Hustle. LOL, this fairies "hood cred" is soooo tragic,
    Even if ur in the trap shavin crack, it just further proves your a faggot.

    ☆☆☆

    I dont wanna see a "tough guy" verse, its SO annoying, that garbage aint sick to me,
    If he tries it, my knifes leavin Sow Gutted worse than a fresh package of chitterlings.

    ☆☆☆☆☆ wow, lotb

    Ur bitch sleeps w/ my cock in her mouth. She's in love w/ my bone,
    In fact she wakes up to rubber rise n her mouth cause she knows its time to give dome.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Damn.
    This battle is fire. It's exactly what I wanted to see from a site battle. You guys were pretty much equal here. I reacted to nearly all of your bars. Very entertaining. This was real even. Basic got the lotb, and that bar helped me make my decision. It was ACES.

    v-Basic M

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sour Joog View Post
    Dog talk a big one but i'm gone leave him in casket, why?
    Embark n no bite..this just the start of ya journey to the afterlife

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Dude you in grave danger,Try box n you smacked aside
    You wont even get past my guard n get buried at the back of mine

    ☆☆☆☆☆ dope

    This just fate playing out, you die today I'm calling it nerd
    Doomed since birthright now u get the beating you always deserved

    ☆☆☆☆☆ nice

    His wifey a hoe, gone for days and she hand out that pussy,
    If she ever go back to basic's, it's simple..She just ran out of money

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Ya Head in in the clouds thinking u can stunt on the kid
    S'why I'm taking out this Dreamer, that's some trump politics

    ☆☆☆ delivery was choppy

    Violence my flavor of the month, try test i devour cats
    Screw ya face up in bad taste bud tryna step on sour patch

    ☆☆☆

    Ya fam droppin one by one, as each bullet rip the flesh away
    After i send ya Antennae, watch ya bug out at the mess i made

    ☆☆☆☆☆ mint

    I gave dude fair warning i'll put a round in his face
    Em braced for the kill shot, his fam can hug it out at the wake

    ☆☆☆☆☆



    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M View Post
    I promise... This wont end well for you.

    Your a Quick Meal in my hood, u'd definitely get stabbed in the trap,
    The shank'll make Sour Patch his wounds before my homies leave em ate like a snack.

    ☆☆☆☆☆ nice

    This character is laughable, just an Actor...im making it clear,
    This Clowns a pretender, i'd call him Pennywise but he's never had a drop w/ somethin to fear.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    I dont care if ya Hotel, fuck these hands, my glock'll leave this dude stinkin,
    I'll spray till he's leanin, then leave his corpse in the freezer for hours...Kenneka Jenkins.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    This niggas beyond pussy, i'll crack his grill if he even thinks that im bluffin,
    He aint tryna throw fists...he's just an NC head thats ALLLLL about discussion.

    ☆☆☆☆☆ lmao

    You cant Weather this Storm, Its all hell when me and my boys meet ya,
    Thats 3 uzis ready to wet ya crib n blow it allllll away...Jose, Irma, and Katia.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Joog means to Hustle. LOL, this fairies "hood cred" is soooo tragic,
    Even if ur in the trap shavin crack, it just further proves your a faggot.

    ☆☆☆

    I dont wanna see a "tough guy" verse, its SO annoying, that garbage aint sick to me,
    If he tries it, my knifes leavin Sow Gutted worse than a fresh package of chitterlings.

    ☆☆☆☆☆ wow, lotb

    Ur bitch sleeps w/ my cock in her mouth. She's in love w/ my bone,
    In fact she wakes up to rubber rise n her mouth cause she knows its time to give dome.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Damn.
    This battle is fire. It's exactly what I wanted to see from a site battle. You guys were pretty much equal here. I reacted to nearly all of your bars. Very entertaining. This was real even. Basic got the lotb, and that bar helped me make my decision. It was ACES.

    v-Basic M

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog

    Quote Originally Posted by Sour Joog View Post
    You had good concepts & wordplay, but I feel as though your wording severely over simplified all of your ideas & that robbed your punches of much of the impact. Decent overall, but the verse left your audience or me at a least, wanting more (PAUSE).
    Quote Originally Posted by Basic M View Post
    You had some good concepts, very creative, the problem in some of your bars, you weren't quite concise enough. Basically you'd ramble before getting to the point, which took away from the hard hitting harshness of those punches. Also the Kenneka Jenkins was shitty...smh, she died barely a week ago.
    Overall this was a cool, far from wack, yet merely solid verses from both; what put BASIC M over & got him my vote, was the 'all discussion' line, which from the LOTB imo.

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    Re: Basic M vs. Sour Joog[open for votes]

    CONCEPTS sour
    Wordplay sour
    Overall Basic M
    Punchlines Basic M
    Creativity Basic

    this should be tie both verses flame
    Basic a lil bit more creative compare to Sour

    Vote Basic M

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