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    Xtermnation Xtraordinaire Genocide's Avatar
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    Geno Dumps. RIP Open Mic Section.

    The anti christian -catholic, will twist ya cap in different aspects
    Leonardo da vinci status, i bleed uncut heroin, mixed with acids
    Dark scholastics, maddness, intelect of the beast, molecular deep
    Baphomet in the streets, horns on my head are essentially steep
    In deciet, i bring death n decay, brain waves a conceptual maze
    Dove into hell like its seconds away, as i freefell heavens restraint
    Hit the ground, intense is the pain, as my wings just melt in the rain
    Turn feathers, bones and chromosones into cellular waves
    became seltzer, i drank, until my cup runneth under the brim
    S'when i sent cupid to hunt for a bitch, you cant commit lovelier sins
    had to covet the wench, birthed adam n eve with the ugliest pig
    She fell in love with the dick, its thick, demon like in the sack
    Swag, i asked forgiveness, and found out jesus christ was a fag
    Back then, was no license for that, it wasnt righteous at all
    Was aked to accept him as dad, punched him right in the jaws
    My reflexes lighting for frauds, since then i fought for my goals
    Taught you to sin hard, and roll with no regard for your souls
    Until the bible sold garbage to folks, confusing your ass
    i made music, like black sabbath, to view a more beautiful path
    until the dumb fuck chewed on a bat, i aint tell him to do it, relax
    Cant argue with the facts, some people are to stupid for math
    Gasp! hold your stomache, and fold
    While a river of humanity is flooding the road
    Lost in the alleyways, people puddle, alone
    Theres a cold world, ready for the warmest of hearts
    Best of regards..
    Ive seen better men fall, and regret what they saw
    The harsh realities of life, or the stink of disease
    The choir sings to the beat, and the sting of defeat
    Prick your finger and bleed
    Realize that this isnt a dream
    Its the life that you chose..
    decisions that u live with, your means
    They all come to an end
    Everything is born to be dead
    Only the good die young, what a fortunate trend
    We press on, never knowing what tomoro could bring
    Or who you could see..
    In the graveyard, where you usually grieve
    Rest in peace, live with stress
    The blue pill or the red
    If the good die young, im the killer instead..
    Adolf Spitler.

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    Re: Geno Dumps. RIP Open Mic Section.

    I read this over one time in my head and a second time out loud over a boom-bap beat. Shit flows for real. I respect the religious imagery here and the presentation of your outlook on such symbolism. It's tight. Your rhymes sound great together in general but there are a few sections where I think a switch up would've done the piece well. Keep being straight up like that, it's a style I can appreciate always
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    Re: Geno Dumps. RIP Open Mic Section.

    Yo thanks for the feed, Genoc. Here to return the favor.

    Man I can never get enough of flex piece. This is stupid dope. Conceotnwere well thought, scheme was signature "geno" type tightness. Imagery def held the piece together as it was thrown at us in rapid pace. I like when words and imagery blend in and out and u did a great job here. Not much to complain here bro. Def looking forward to future stuff.

    OAN, a flex collabo, por favor?

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    Re: Geno Dumps. RIP Open Mic Section.

    You know after putting no pork on my menu all week they sent the catholic missionary in to speak with me... funny you said anti Christian too cause he said that Catholic was Christian and I got really confused like wait I learned he was the son and not god like whoa wait what is Christian again? Just funny you said Catholic anti Christian too - that what I though too... who cares if I'm
    Wrong I'm neither. And that's why I respect both.... I like this peice it was bold in a lot terms could be accurate but the writing and the imagery amazing. I might come back to read it again.
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    Re: Geno Dumps. RIP Open Mic Section.

    Lol thanks for stopping by my forum and showing some "love" as far as flow goes this felt like a bootlegged self activate piece with a few long winded spots and inconsistencies and kept going on a religious tangent that wasnt much deeper than the vagueness it conveyed. No disrespect to self, hes one of my favorite writers here for sure. Definitely read some pieces from him and sculpt some deeper details to weave with your multisyllables to help bring more layers to your writing. Peace
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    Xtermnation Xtraordinaire Genocide's Avatar
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    Re: Geno Dumps. RIP Open Mic Section.

    Rite on.. Return the favor if youd like.. Swing By My OM @NCs and drop something. Aint gotta be new. Just something. Would be much abliged. Otherwise i aint mad atcha.

    At least until we meet during the intersite battle..lol.
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