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    Twisted Oz Collab





    Rhetorical/Tin Man

    Dreams hatch in fantasy, seems I can't unmask sanity
    Path is paved with cracks that snatched me from humanity
    Tin sheet patched to hollowed chest and rusted rivets
    Among unforgiving rain spouts, clouds, & busted spigots
    Disgusted bigot, often lust to 'feel' what love was
    Slumped under the sun with my axe slung in a tree stump
    Void thumps and echoes of creaking weak knees
    Screams go unanswered for God to beseech me
    Pleas to be free, from permanent binds and cuffs
    To pixilated pastel skies winding through nights dusk
    Musty sights seen through eye's that hinged up
    As tears slump my jaw-line, just rust, & mend shut
    Wake up to bitter mornings to cringe at liquid dew
    That slither through compartment seams, and loose screws
    For the few basic emotions I caught in empty cries
    "If only I had a heart"
    So it would stop beating and let me DIE

    bye OZ.

    Sammy/Scarecrow

    He's a grass head, if one was to mildly put it
    his smile, crooked, aligning with his wild outlook
    switch scene..
    jansport bag, filthy green..
    stressed jeans gesturing - essence of midteen
    Hookie! grunged ballad challenge establishment;
    Cobain's malcontent; he's clad up in rip tee
    "This is me!" he'd exclaim
    perhaps a glimpse, A quick peek...
    between words, were spaces,
    a verdant journey he'd beseech
    yellow brick road, purple hills, patches of green leaves
    journeyed on rocket fueled angst
    the mundane turns into mean streak
    "he's smoking his life away"
    the snapes weren't just skin deep
    ivory sentiments clamping the nape of his neck
    shaking 'til his think tank
    attains the depth of the deep sea,
    entrenched in his Mariana
    experimenting with green leaves
    "He's a straw head"
    He grins. His apathy ablaze
    "Really is a shame, Patty,
    if only he had a brain"

    SELF/The Wizard

    I'm the Great & Powerful Wizard from the mystical land of Oz
    My minons are imprisoned but they can't perceive the bars
    Cos they focus on the witches while I trick em with the fog
    All these switches and these knobs, an inventor and a fraud
    A magician, not a god, a con man at odds wit his itty bitty heart
    Who had entered a dimension that our physicists forgot!
    Yes it came as such a shock to see a flying monkey
    Or a lion that could talk! I ain't lying I was lost
    Until I met the Munchkins and decided I was boss
    They were feeble and naive, they believed anything
    Like a crooked charlatan could really be their king
    I decreed: "I'm supreme" and in honor of my greed
    The entire Emerald City was a filthy money green
    But to keep em in this dream I had to hatch a scheme
    Thus I planted poppy seeds next to iowaska trees
    So every time they breathed they be seeping in deceit
    As I secretly would meet with the Wicked Witch of East
    On the surface it would seem we were curseth enemies
    But behind my dirty curtain we were flirty as can be
    She would slurp me like a drink, it was perfect & unique
    Until a girl from Kansas caused a certain murder scene
    And stole the Rubby Slippers off of Evanora's feet
    As my paranoia peaked I had this clairvoyant dream
    That this purdy little thief was worthy of defeat
    By a sturdy guillotine; so trust me I won't sleep
    Until her head fuckin rolls & leaves a bloody streak
    Down the Yellow Brick Road!









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    Re: Twisted Oz Collab

    This whole thing is soo sick

    Sammy, your rhymes are super symbiotic and really roll nicely off the tongue. It's more than just the rhymes actually, it's the placement of syllables that makes your section so eloquent and enjoyable. Truly, the scarecrow as presented here maybe isn't mindless, maybe he's only absent-minded at times. Anyways this was great work by every author. Yours struck me as the most poetical (written) whereas I really just wanted to rap out-loud Self's & Rhetorical's part. I love that difference.

    This piece was awesome. It makes me want to get twisted and watch Oz
    greetings netizens

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    Re: Twisted Oz Collab

    this shit is dope as fuck, gave more opinions on that at the other place i read i think? if not... loved the darkness that overcasted this topic. i think the twisted aspect of it does way more justice than the actual real movie storyline and images did. if only they would have painted this sort of picture when they directed this film. thanks guise
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    Re: Twisted Oz Collab

    That was an awesome collab imagery and all and reminds me sometimes I should step my game up metaphorically cause my straight forward and most times where I lack and fall short compared to most on this site. The oz concept reminds me of walking with past friends like that bitch need a heart, that one a new brain, and that one just needs to be punch type. Good read!
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