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    Diasick - Prosper ( Feat. Self Savior )

    Last edited by Stranger; July 20th, 2017 at 09:45 PM

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    Re: Diasick - Prosper ( Feat. Self Savior )

    Lyrics are pretty decent, but you're all over the place with flow. It's not consistent. I would suggest writing less in each count until you have it down packed. Syllable cramming isn't really the style anymore, so I think you could do without it. Beat sounds pretty cool though.

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