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July 20th, 2017, 06:08 PM
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Diasick - Prosper ( Feat. Self Savior )
Last edited by Stranger; July 20th, 2017 at 09:45 PM
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July 23rd, 2017, 02:26 AM
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We Are Eternal
Re: Diasick - Prosper ( Feat. Self Savior )
Lyrics are pretty decent, but you're all over the place with flow. It's not consistent. I would suggest writing less in each count until you have it down packed. Syllable cramming isn't really the style anymore, so I think you could do without it. Beat sounds pretty cool though.
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