wk 6: Joe Boston(1-4) Vs Unfukwitable(2-3) [open for votes]

[Spree]

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@Joe Boston @Unfukwitable

[Joe Boston]

Check how many? @Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

14........

[Joe Boston]

Damn respected as an underdog battler and been recycling the whole time SMFH


Last night gave his bitch the best orgasms, she shut her eyes and was in heaven
I put in work  giving that G OT, we even fucked  during the first episode of season seven
Arms, legs and head im severing, bitch prepare for a long night
This'll be an Eziekil for me, i want you dead so fuck a bar fight
The site of you is unbearing, u even traumatize ur own spouse
So if u see a bitch ride Witable shes usually drunk at a Texas Roadhouse
I'll douse him in his own blood his fam will witness such hurt
Think UnTuckIt in the waist? yall wont be able to count the ammount of holes ill leave in his dress shirt
Im alert that hes recycles verses im just hoping its not going to be consistent
He couldnt even stand to face Letter, dumb fuck said his Relatives always been distant
I'll dead you in an instant check my resume thats more proof to the pudding
Fuck if your innocent when u get shot in cold blood youll resemble a Minneapolis Woman
You ruin ur reputation on these streets you were never on that real shit
You claim you Firestick and when u reused it couldnt find the amazon box to reconceal it


@Kill Spree 14 dropped

[Unfukwitable]

hide his verse @killin g spree I need an ext.

[Spree]

@Joe Boston do you grant fuk a ext

[Joe Boston]

@Joe Boston do you grant fuk a ext

Yeah thats cool

[Spree]

Verse hidden

[Unfukwitable]

Im working 16 hr shifts all week man iim lucky i even wrote something

His verse is comedy, 16hr shifts and $0.. tell Joe quit workin, honesty;
being brokes a dzaster & he keeps losin his champ match versus poverty.
U wasn't well 'rounded from the jump' & I put the culture behind me;
So any ideas you should Skip-It, cos even ya losses is over the 90s.
Catch u while u doin Video Mags in ya Car, I got attachments on the heat;
1shot & Joey Wheeler pop.... u'll see everything Red Dragon in the street.
who's tryin to amp B, his delivery trash guess his rhymes need a Plan B;
& everytime this bum rush a bar we just hope u die in a stampede.
I purchased a case of .45 revolvers... that'll bring ya block to a hault;
& these bald heads ain't singin R-Kelly songs But U can get 16 out of the cult.
Heard ya bae helps w/ ya craft but then u add some trashy flips;
maybe u should take A rest, development this season will help u match Hurwitz.
cos tryna put ya spin on weak concepts in a sloppy way... Not today
It's Ballet practice, he's gettin leaned after puttin a twist on it til bodies raise.

[GrimmZReaper]

His verse is comedy, 16hr shifts and $0.. tell Joe quit workin, honesty;
being brokes a dzaster & he keeps losin his champ match versus poverty.
U wasn't well 'rounded from the jump' & I put the culture behind me;
So any ideas you should Skip-It, cos even ya losses is over the 90s. (LMAOOOO....dirty)
Heard ya bae helps w/ ya craft but then u add some trashy flips;
maybe u should take A rest, development this season will help u match Hurwitz.
cos tryna put ya spin on weak concepts in a sloppy way... Not today
It's Ballet practice, he's gettin leaned after puttin a twist on it til bodies raise.

vs

Arms, legs and head im severing, bitch prepare for a long night
This'll be an Eziekil for me, i want you dead so fuck a bar fight

Joe to his detriment or commendable ( depends of point of view) refuses to take advice...namedrops in your bars that come off as just shock placement.. they don't relate to your opponent and they don't have impact...eziekiel and easy kill don't sound the same no matter HOW u say it ( not even with a boston accent). the untuckit in the waist had potential but u kinda fizzled on the landing...
unfucks first 2 bars kinda ended the battle though... I think u should kinda peep the verbiage and wit in those first 4 bars Boston...some people do this and some don't, but u should look at the level of those who can do this compared to the level of those who cant... its saying more by saying less... when u read a bar and in your head u can complete whats being said with the person not saying it in their bar, then u are elevating ,....keep at it Joe, ive seen u grasp some concepts ....

v- UNFuk

[Wuxia]

Damn respected as an underdog battler and been recycling the whole time SMFH


Last night gave his bitch the best orgasms, she shut her eyes and was in heaven
I put in work  giving that G OT, we even fucked  during the first episode of season seven

☆ this was probably the laziest game of thrones reference i've read

Arms, legs and head im severing, bitch prepare for a long night
This'll be an Eziekil for me, i want you dead so fuck a bar fight

☆ forced wp, you omitted the "e" from ezekiel, the name isn't pronounced easy kill

The site of you is unbearing, u even traumatize ur own spouse
So if u see a bitch ride Witable shes usually drunk at a Texas Roadhouse

☆ witable isn't a word and if it's a name of a texas roadhouse i did a google search and didn't find anything on it

I'll douse him in his own blood his fam will witness such hurt
Think UnTuckIt in the waist? yall wont be able to count the ammount of holes ill leave in his dress shirt

☆ i get untuckit in the waste but the follow through didn't even elaborate on it, what does leaving holes in his dress shirt have to do with your untuckit wordplay?

Im alert that hes recycles verses im just hoping its not going to be consistent
He couldnt even stand to face Letter, dumb fuck said his Relatives always been distant

☆

I'll dead you in an instant check my resume thats more proof to the pudding
Fuck if your innocent when u get shot in cold blood youll resemble a Minneapolis Woman

☆ this was an extremely simple bar and as lazy of a flip as you can find

You ruin ur reputation on these streets you were never on that real shit
You claim you Firestick and when u reused it couldnt find the amazon box to reconceal it

☆ this was a simple flip on a firestick play that unfuk flipped better


@Kill Spree 14 dropped

His verse is comedy, 16hr shifts and $0.. tell Joe quit workin, honesty;
being brokes a dzaster & he keeps losin his champ match versus poverty.

☆☆☆☆☆

U wasn't well 'rounded from the jump' & I put the culture behind me;
So any ideas you should Skip-It, cos even ya losses is over the 90s.

☆☆☆☆☆ nice

Catch u while u doin Video Mags in ya Car, I got attachments on the heat;
1shot & Joey Wheeler pop.... u'll see everything Red Dragon in the street.

☆

who's tryin to amp B, his delivery trash guess his rhymes need a Plan B;
& everytime this bum rush a bar we just hope u die in a stampede.

☆☆☆☆☆

I purchased a case of .45 revolvers... that'll bring ya block to a hault;
& these bald heads ain't singin R-Kelly songs But U can get 16 out of the cult.

☆☆☆☆☆

Heard ya bae helps w/ ya craft but then u add some trashy flips;
maybe u should take A rest, development this season will help u match Hurwitz.

☆ incomplete wordplay, arrested development, not arrest development

cos tryna put ya spin on weak concepts in a sloppy way... Not today
It's Ballet practice, he's gettin leaned after puttin a twist on it til bodies raise.

☆☆☆☆☆ lotb

Unfuk took this easily. Joe had simple concepts with no creativity, forced wordplays, confusing nameplays, and weak personals. Unfuk had nice creativity. You could tell from his opening bar that he was going to make the effort to win, and he did so in convincing fashion.

v-Unfuk

[plethora]

Joe i'll give u credit for season seven, Ezekiel, and untuckit


Unfuk had 90's, R. Kelly, Joey Wheeler


So 3 a piece but Unfuk got it on consistency

[Joe Boston]

Close it

[Smog]

J

Opener was fineshed bad
Ezeikil was forced but I just feel u gotta close the punch better
Writable was ehh
Untuckit wasn't referenced good
Stand letter wasn't much of a diss
Innocent was ehh
Closer ehh



Fuk

Opener nice
Skip it dope af
Wheeler pop ooooooook
Bum rush was ok
R Kelly was good
A rest development was ur worst joint
Closer was dope

Fuk took this pretty convincingly I just felt jb rushed n hurried up n dropped.. I seen improvement recently but u fell off the last couple weeks.. fuk dropped solid af here with mad creativity n when he's doing that plus dissin his opponents he tough af.. great verse


Fuk

[Notti]

His verse is comedy, 16hr shifts and $0.. tell Joe quit workin, honesty;
being brokes a dzaster & he keeps losin his champ match versus poverty.
U wasn't well 'rounded from the jump' & I put the culture behind me;
So any ideas you should Skip-It, cos even ya losses is over the 90s..
who's tryin to amp B, his delivery trash guess his rhymes need a Plan B;
& everytime this bum rush a bar we just hope u die in a stampede.
I purchased a case of .45 revolvers... that'll bring ya block to a hault;
& these bald heads ain't singin R-Kelly songs But U can get 16 out of the cult.

Vs

Nothing really

Not that Joe had a horrible verse, I liked a few of his concepts, the wording however fell flat on damn near every bar. Unfuk had a solid verse. Fairly consistent and a few punches that hit hard enough for the win

V/ unfuk