Wk 6:Barcotic(1-0) Vs WhiskeyJ(1-0)[Open for feed]

[Spree]

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@Barcotic @ WhiskeyJ


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[WhiskeyJ]

Hi bro. 10

[Barcotic]

yup
sup

[Barcotic]

ext

[WhiskeyJ]

sure thing

[Barcotic]

let's be honest fully, every broad ur pulling's rancid ..
Ice melt one's pussy & it reminded me of a thawing wooly mammoth
can't pull any dimes w/ a pale skittle dick
Wispiness aint sought after, plus he a frail little bitch
u lucky if u weigh a hundy. buddy, ur soft as shat
if I flicked u Indonesia might crumble like the country was on ya back
can't put up a fight, pussy. I would say u better lay low
i could give u 40%, Whisky.. either way u end up K.O'ed
that's a clean sweep in case ur not aware, & son...
ima smash u til the final bellends
after all, that's what they call u where ur from

[Barcotic]

@WhiskeyJ

[Spree]

Smh bar wins open for feed

[Wuxia]

let's be honest fully, every broad ur pulling's rancid ..
Ice melt one's pussy & it reminded me of a thawing wooly mammoth

☆ spent a couple minutes trying to figure out the ice melt flip, i get the misdirect, but was ice a wordplay?

can't pull any dimes w/ a pale skittle dick
Wispiness aint sought after, plus he a frail little bitch

☆☆☆☆☆

u lucky if u weigh a hundy. buddy, ur soft as shat
if I flicked u Indonesia might crumble like the country was on ya back

☆☆☆☆☆

can't put up a fight, pussy. I would say u better lay low
i could give u 40%, Whisky.. either way u end up K.O'ed

☆☆☆☆☆

that's a clean sweep in case ur not aware, & son...
ima smash u til the final bellends
after all, that's what they call u where ur from

☆

Bar didn't really put any effort into this, so if Whiskey showed he could of made a battle out of it.

[Barcotic]

lol ice melt/I smelt

[Wuxia]

lol ice melt/I smelt

lmao oh i get it now, my bad. dope bar.

[Unfukwitable]

that was flames alot of dope wordplay smoothly written, I just think that closer was the weaker point of the verse but this was def heat, props to barc for showing, its wack when u put material together for no reason. v/ Barcotic's opener

[Notti]

let's be honest fully, every broad ur pulling's rancid ..
Ice melt one's pussy & it reminded me of a thawing wooly mammoth
this shit was clever but I ain't feeling it as a punch
can't pull any dimes w/ a pale skittle dick
Wispiness aint sought after, plus he a frail little bitch
another clever WP, this one actually landed tho, short and precise
u lucky if u weigh a hundy. buddy, ur soft as shat
if I flicked u Indonesia might crumble like the country was on ya back
wordplay is on point this verse, could make the case for slightly forced but I like this
can't put up a fight, pussy. I would say u better lay low
i could give u 40%, Whisky.. either way u end up K.O'ed
decent
that's a clean sweep in case ur not aware, & son...
ima smash u til the final bellends
after all, that's what they call u where ur from
not feeling this closer

Didn't seem like you put much effort or thought into this and it was still a pretty solid verse. I liked the wordplay and the straight to the point wording you used. Good shit

[plethora]

let's be honest fully, every broad ur pulling's rancid ..
Ice melt one's pussy & it reminded me of a thawing wooly mammoth
^dope
can't pull any dimes w/ a pale skittle dick
Wispiness aint sought after, plus he a frail little bitch
^dope
u lucky if u weigh a hundy. buddy, ur soft as shat
if I flicked u Indonesia might crumble like the country was on ya back
^clever,dope
can't put up a fight, pussy. I would say u better lay low
i could give u 40%, Whisky.. either way u end up K.O'ed
^dope
that's a clean sweep in case ur not aware, & son...
ima smash u til the final bellends
after all, that's what they call u where ur from
^dope



Not bad for a mid-tier