Last edited by Joe Boston; July 13th, 2017 at 09:07 PM
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Not bad at all. I'm gonna say it exactly as I said my other critique. It's OK for what it is, but I feel like more can be done to make it your own. Still feels like a sample with a couple of things thrown on it. Doesn't quite sound like you made it into your own, but it's getting there. Keep it up.
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