Wk 5 Seaon XXI Championship: Packed Graves(4-0) Vs B Dot Lesnar(4-0)[open for votes]

[Spree]

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@Packed Graves @B Dot LESNAR

[Wuxia]

Check. Going 20.

[Packed Graves]

Yup

[Packed Graves]

enough trying to portray the tough guy roll homie, it don't suit you.


you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back

[Wuxia]

These niggas don't understand real life > text life. If thy can't accept that they can all go fuck themselves tbh.

I totally agree, faggot.

Packed Graves = Nolan Delaurie
Fiancee's name = Jamie Vorobel (supposed to be married this past Sunday July 9th, 2017)
Mom = Stacie Hayes Roy (divorced)
Dad = David Allen Delaurie (divorced)
Grandma = Mary Ann Lutz
Brother = Nick Delaurie
Cousin = Kwal!ty (mid-tier dude from Netcees, Packed Graves denied he was Kwal1ty after Kwal1ty pretended to be him in pic battles)
Has 3 kids, all boys (Tyson *calls him TyTy, Brandon, and Kevin)
Has lost to God Of War, King, Aero, Unfukwitable, Karaoke, Barcotic, Galactic, Destroyer, and Smog
Mr. Elmsby is The Great Father's alias

You really opened this for feed I told @killin g Spree I'm dealing with a death in my family bruh. Y'all niggas lame either open this up or sign me out for good An delete a nigga account

He did if that's what they say

watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one

[Easy.]

you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket

Pretty hot bar, 4/5.
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head

Saw a couple of these this week. Yours had another aspect to it, L is, Ellis flip. 4/5

it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me

Didn't like this. The initial part of the second bar didn't work. 3/5
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list

Liked this a lot. Haven't seen it done before. Fire. 5/5.
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation

If you're gonna bring a simile, it's gotta be a really fresh twist. This was alright tho. 3/5

Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch

Seen the Lesbian twist just a few days ago in FL, which indicates this might be played. 4/5 for nice wording.
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days

Lol. Good play, didn't like the "reminds me of an" tho, that's five extra syllables till we get to the punch. 4/5 for the minor glitch.


you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist

Noice personal. 5/5

Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face

This scheme was pretty hot. Carried throughout the whole bar, but still couldn't predict the twist. 4/5

ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back

More clever than harsh. 3/5

40/50.

Les-

watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit

Oh shit lol. I'm a fan of personals. You've done your homework too. 4/5
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty

Fuck that was nice. 5/5 for incorporating two personals into one.
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all

This one was aight. You're working on conjecture here. 3/5
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad

Didn't like that. The whole Ricky Bobbys dad part seemed out of place. 3/5
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career

Nice and simple. Probably played, but it's personal so 4/5
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account

Lol nice. 4/5
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian

Letterman shit has to be played. Still like the bar. 4/5
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk

Another personal, 4/5
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
Lmfao, personal that's a personal and clever wp. 5/5
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one

Urn/earn is unsatisfying. 3/5.

Broke 39.
PG 39.

On the scorecard I have this a tie, but Broke did his homework. All of his punches were relevant to his opponent, while a few of PG's bars were hot, but generic. I have a preference for harsh personals, so I'm a give it to Broke.

[Art.]

ou ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back

vs

watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future

i gotta disagree with the dude above.... i kinda thought this was more one sided ... i thought broke had every punch land maybe beside that ricky bobby line... i think packed missed a bunch did think that big 3 hoop line was Fire though... i would have quoted the aaron judge line but i saw it coming like a mile away do love the concept was using that this week tbh but i didnt like parts of the set up. as far as personals broke hit with that, i do feel like he might spend too much time on it i had to read like 10 things before i got into his verse... the lines were cool but if u gotta explain every little detail, at one point i had to scroll back up to see who or what you were talking about, and dont get me wrong the punch/ word play worked but deff had to revisit. i just quoted the best lines from the verses.. coulda quoted more of brokes but just picked out his best ones... didn't wanna quote every line. but like i said i thought all of his punches hit

overall i just thought broke out did packed in every way here... cool battle but i think Broke overpowered him.


Vote Broke.

[Joe Boston]

Pg


you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it 
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
Not a bad np reference ok flip

everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
Pretty cool current event flip

it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me 
Dope harsh hit

Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed 
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
Played np

Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation 
Cool metaphore

Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
Les bien is played too

ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs 
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days 
Lol

you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Cool personal

Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate 
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
Dope

ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack 
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back
Nah was feeling this

Broke


watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
Cool reference with tyson np

ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
Lol cool personal

u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
Damn lol

now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
Lmao cool personal

i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
Cool flip

u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
Cool personal but couldve worded better

ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
David lettetman flip played af but u tied into a personal not bad

u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
Damn

seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
Cool wordplay lol

dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one
Nah

Well b dot went personal he must be umemployed and have alot of time on his hands because he actually went and reseatched pgs whole family history. I have to give this battle to him because he overall did hit him with hard impacted personals. Pg not his best verse couple played references. That judge bar was dope as fuck.

V/B dot

[Networth]

Graves

you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
Ok
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
Ok albeit forced
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
Mmmok! Sorry for your loss good flip here
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
Meh
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation
Nah
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
Good1
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
Ok
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Nice1
Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
Not feelin it
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back
Decent close

Vs

Lesnar


watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
Don’t like kid punches, no pun intended, decent flip tho
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
Good1
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
Meh
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
Nah
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
Ok
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
Ok
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
Nice1 here
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
Too soon? Ouch!
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
Not feelin this
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one
Blah closer


So yea, this was a battle between two familiar opponents and they both attempted some personals tryna cut into eachother, however personally, its clear that Lesnar edged that category out. Both battlers also delivered structurally appealing verses that were easy to read yet again I have Les taking this department considering he clearly has the cleanest format in the league. Each of these seasoned veterans also displayed the ability to deliver wordplay as well as witty punches that capture the readers attention for some laughable and some ahhb worthy moments. Graves seemed to force some lines like True Blood , Broke Back and the Greek Vaca attempts in relatively close succession which took lots of momentum away from his verse. Broke got so comfortable with his personals that the sting was mostly taken off his punches in lines like the Ricky Bobby Mrty Mcfly n Elimsby shots. I must say though, consistency seemed to be the key here so with a more polished verse that focused on direct hits and with fewer misses…
I have to V/ Lesnar for League Champ at this point.
Good battle from you both.

[King]

Greek vaca maybe
Clout
Maybe Judge
Refunds

Those were the highlights for me. Decent verse, not PGs best though. Some bars were under executed and one or two were tired concepts.

Vs

Tyson
Name brand maybe
Toasting u
Letterman
Struggle to live

Cool verse, i love the personal approach but the expos were too much. Shit was damn near the length of the verse, if this was a closer battle that would have made me lean the other way. Shit loses sting when u set it up like that cuz i can see it coming. Still a dope verse tho.

Vote Broke

[Spree]

you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
cool opener
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
Thought this could have been harsher W/a diff angle. Jab at best
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
Dope
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
cool wordplay punch was cool but could have made this harsher.....
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation
lol i fuck W/this generic
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
Nice
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
Dope
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Dope
Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
I fuck with this tbh
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back
nice

vs


watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
This was nice but i feel if U flipped the whole punch lin around it would have had more impact
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
Needs to be worded better tbh. light jab at best here
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
Punch is dope... But the whole I heard Ur mr elmsby is just a fake personal... So this doesnt really work
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
lol.. this was a light generic tbh.
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
nice
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
lol this was cool
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
The personals are everywhere in this bar... I just dont feel it was harsh. idk
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
Ouch.
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
nice
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one
Gawd....


Overall... I got both tied wit quoatables... Idk I wasnt feelin some of brokes wording. He could have been more harsh i felt. But the personals were there. everywhere. Packed had some nice bars. Few personals some bars could have been worded harsher but I gotta vote broke for the personal approach here. He didnt just kick PG in the head but went at his whole fam. good battle really but broke takes this for having more personals

[plethora]

you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back

Vs.

ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one




Cool battle here by both. Got it 7-6 Lesnar, but that out of pocket bar by PG was nassttyyyy

[WhiskeyJ]

You ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
This was a cool flip on a name that's near impossible to flip at this stage
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
Not a fan of the delivery here. Execution lacked but you get points for the relevance
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
Not feeling this
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
This is okay here. Probably played but I'll let it ride
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation
Connection is weak
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
Smooth delivery here. Better. Concept was light
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
Another weak connection here
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Cool personal it's true
Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
Yo this was okay
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back
Definitely played

vs


watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
Cool personal
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
Okay again
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
Weak connection
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
Nah nothing here
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
This is hot to me. Never seen it
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
Nah this wasn't good
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
Thought this was well put together actually
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
Jesus this was harsh af. Yes
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
Dope here
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one
Light closer


Not sure who won here. Not a fan of all that extra shit broke did but fuck it maybe it paid off. Reading back over it I think broke had two lines that were actually fire whereas PGS best were just decent. The personal angle have broke more to work with and he came out on top due to having different approaches each couplet. Broke was a little more consistent too

Vote broke l

[DzasteR]

PACKED GRAVES
you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
Lol dope opener
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
Flames!! I dig this bar
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
good flip
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
played..coulda flipped this better
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation
Current event..nice
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
np bland
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
lol ok
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Ouch!
Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
Not bad
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back
lol nice ender

vs

B DOT
watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
Cool
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
Personal attempt - okish but iffy with wording
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
Cool
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
lol
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
Lol dope
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
Ok
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
Ouch! Decent
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
Not bad, more light jab though
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
Nice wp.. dope shit
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one
Okish ender

This whole battle was definitely something you'd wanna see for the champ match. Def one to remember - flames.. PG you had some dope bars, wording was good. You had more consistent bars than misses. Your verse was solid overall. Very little personals compared to B Dot - B Dot flamed his opponent. He did his homework. Came with crazy personals and flipped them all in to some dope bars. Nice battle, B Dot, your verse was overall solid as well. But you did the most work for the W. Creativity with personals, wp, and np. B had misses too, but B Dot came well prepared and had more harsh connects with his punches. DOPE BATTLE GUYS.

v/ B DOT

- - - Updated - - -

PACKED GRAVES
you ain't got shit in store for me actin tough homie just stop it
you'll be on ya best behavior, it's ironic that no one expects Broke to get out of pocket
Lol dope opener
everyone knows your an Actor Broke- now I'm showing your dead
you knew the Ellis in ya future & im just making it True.. Blood leaks from every hole in ya head
Flames!! I dig this bar
it's an Art how I craft verses trust it g- faggit you got here luckily
last week my brother took his own life, now you get to be the one that says what's up for me
good flip
Dude is shit, feel bad for ya dad if you was my son id be truely pissed
just to prove we won't see Broke Back Mountain the league, its just on his favorite movie list
played..coulda flipped this better
Champ Spots are my home, your new here faggit plz be patient
Il make sure this tourist gets beaten to death like Americans on a Greek vacation
Current event..nice
Broke we cool but you mediocre at best, let's keep this legit
cuz the only ones that see Les Bein a threat obviously need help pleasing a bitch
np bland
ya wifey loves gettin gang banged, can't imagine how that truth weighs
looks forward to Big 3 so much reminds me of an old dude remembering his hoop days
lol ok
you steal ideas, I been doing this longer an proudly say I've never bit
ppl get @Clout for concepts, you on the other hand go out & use his with a clever twist
Ouch!
Rookies weak, an im Aaron this queer when I bring facts to the Plate
If only god can Judge you - he must've sent me to give you a baseball bat to the face
Not bad
ya champ runs done cat, how he made it when he's dumb whack
Voters ain't feeling Broke no more, that's struggling families with their refunds back
lol nice ender

vs

B DOT
watch me rough kevin up, bad enough to snuff da bitch
then mash tyson's face with a combo, that's some buster douglas shit
Cool
ur older boy don't resemble u, i'm thinkin he's an oddity
it's so fuckin ironic his name brand, cuz ur sorry ass ain't even kwal!ty
Personal attempt - okish but iffy with wording
u ignore ur family for text, ur kids want their dad to call
i heard ur alias was mr. elmsby, turns out u ain't a great father after all
Cool
now plz go sign the fuck out, bet ur chick is prolly mad
can't blame her cuz ur a deadbeat, she's engaged to ricky bobby's dad
lol
i forgot to say congrats, u proposed to a grosser queer
i won't bother to raise my glass, pros been toastin you ur whole career
Lol dope
u flop when u face vets, it ain't a biggie to sniff him out
cuz nolan a stank cunt that flounders, ur jamie's plenty of fish account
Ok
ur pops a convicted felon, time to quit the speed again
know what's even funnier than david? letterman retired this comedian
Ouch! Decent
u recently lost fam, it's either miraculous or dumb luck
i hope that faggot struggled to live as bad as u had to do against unfuk
Not bad, more light jab though
seek a new hobby nolan, hard to deny i raped this loser
just look at the mess delorean, he need marty mcfly to save his future
Nice wp.. dope shit
dupe ur mom into an affair, stuntin ratchets is kinda fun
spend every paycheck stacie earn, then dump her ashes inside of one
Okish ender

This whole battle was definitely something you'd wanna see for the champ match. Def one to remember - flames.. PG you had some dope bars, wording was good. You had more consistent bars than misses. Your verse was solid overall. Very little personals compared to B Dot - B Dot flamed his opponent. He did his homework. Came with crazy personals and flipped them all in to some dope bars. Nice battle, B Dot, your verse was overall solid as well. But you did the most work for the W. Creativity with personals, wp, and np. B had misses too, but B Dot came well prepared and had more harsh connects with his punches. DOPE BATTLE GUYS.

v/ B DOT

[Smog]

Pg

Opener dope
Ellis good
Take his life good
Broke back nah
Greek vacay was ehh
Lesbein was ooook
Big 3 I didn't like the wording
Clout was good
Judge was cool
Closer was oooooook

Broke

Opener ok
Name brand ok
Great father was tough
Dead beat was ehh
Raise my glass was fire
Stsmk cunt was ok
David letterman played to death but this was fresh with the personal.. dope
Struggled to live is harsh
Delorean was good
Closer was ehh ok


Iight good battle y'all, I felt pg was inconsistent at times with a few solid bars but overall broke went all out personal n connected heavy on several that pretty much wrapped this up.. crazy but yeah broke go it


Broke