WK 5: Lenny(1-2) Vs Joe Boston(1-3)[open for votes]

[Spree]

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@Lenny @Joe Boston

[Joe Boston]

Check

[Lenox]

Hey

[Joe Boston]

@Lenny got 10 for you let me know when ur ready ill drop

[Joe Boston]

10 @Lenny

Fuck if they say u progressed,trust me i go in for the kill
Funny how u didnt show on Net, broke fucks excuse hes behind on his Xfinity Bill
U talk online shit to start a thrill but in reality u proceed with caution
In the chat said everything is Fine Art,these two fags planned a trip to that Museum in Boston
In pictures plotting like ur gang affiliated,u never witnessed what hell is
If u thinking ur True Blood,ill make that fucking heart stop like Nelsan Ellis
Tuck the heat by the pelvis Joe always carry something real heavy
Ride by ur block shots screamimg out the window like ur moms yelling "Suppers Ready!"
Your beyond Petty a fucking easy target just to get bullied quicker
People told u Brush it Off,you came with a comb over for Freshmen school pictures

[Lenox]

It's week 5 and u should already give up...everyone's been snuffin dweeb,
the league hasn't seen Boston fadeaway this quick since tatum in the summer league.
My crew show up to ya job looking like rambo, No hesitation when my team shoot,
Leave everyone in the mall deceased.. with enough corpses to start up dawn of the dead's reboot.
Mall cop? Lol... who u chasing faggot?? Ur a fat queer,
He already signed a clause for this ass whoopin... & ironically got fired from that job last year.
Ur styles utter shit.. that flow never leaves readers speechless,
Even ur wordings bad... which goes to prove ones who talk most are usually the weakest.
I attack with combos faggot, plus I got shells for ur torso,
strikes to ya face as well... leave joey lookin something like Isreal del toro

[Easy.]

Joe-

Fuck if they say u progressed,trust me i go in for the kill
Funny how u didnt show on Net, broke fucks excuse hes behind on his Xfinity Bill

I liked this, but the concept is light. It's a Net/net flip. 3/5

U talk online shit to start a thrill but in reality u proceed with caution
In the chat said everything is Fine Art,these two fags planned a trip to that Museum in Boston

Didn't like this one. Planning a trip to a museum isn't really an inherently gay thing. Art/art flip too. 2/5

In pictures plotting like ur gang affiliated,u never witnessed what hell is
If u thinking ur True Blood,ill make that fucking heart stop like Nelsan Ellis

Saw a couple True Blood bars, but I fuck with this one too. 4/5

Tuck the heat by the pelvis Joe always carry something real heavy
Ride by ur block shots screamimg out the window like ur moms yelling "Suppers Ready!

All over the place. Feel like I'm missing something. 2/5

Your beyond Petty a fucking easy target just to get bullied quicker
People told u Brush it Off,you came with a comb over for Freshmen school pictures

All over the place again. 2/5

Work on your wording, make it sound harsher. A lot of these bars don't make me think "damn!" They're just decent concepts without harsh wording.

Len-

It's week 5 and u should already give up...everyone's been snuffin dweeb,
the league hasn't seen Boston fadeaway this quick since tatum in the summer league.

Fadeaway/fade away flip. Made it personal. I fucks with this, 4/5

My crew show up to ya job looking like rambo, No hesitation when my team shoot,
Leave everyone in the mall deceased.. with enough corpses to start up dawn of the dead's reboot.

Deceased/diseased? Just self hype tho. Can't give a bar over a 3 without an actual diss. 2/5


Mall cop? Lol... who u chasing faggot?? Ur a fat queer,
He already signed a clause for this ass whoopin... & ironically got fired from that job last year


True personal? If so this shit goes hard. 4/5 as it stands.


Ur styles utter shit.. that flow never leaves readers speechless,
Even ur wordings bad... which goes to prove ones who talk most are usually the weakest.

Dude, your bar was pretty wordy. I didn't like this. 2/5

I attack with combos faggot, plus I got shells for ur torso,
strikes to ya face as well... leave joey lookin something like Isreal del toro

3/5.

Mvgt Len. Joe has some decent concepts but he can't word them into actual insults. Lenox has decent concepts but phrases them so they're directed towards his opponent.

[Art.]

It's week 5 and u should already give up...everyone's been snuffin dweeb,
the league hasn't seen Boston fadeaway this quick since tatum in the summer league.
Mall cop? Lol... who u chasing faggot?? Ur a fat queer,
He already signed a clause for this ass whoopin... & ironically got fired from that job last year


vs

In pictures plotting like ur gang affiliated,u never witnessed what hell is
If u thinking ur True Blood,ill make that fucking heart stop like Nelsan Ellis
our beyond Petty a fucking easy target just to get bullied quicker
People told u Brush it Off,you came with a comb over for Freshmen school pictures

being generous with both quotables .. think caged had the bar of the battle even though boston celtic punches are played little twist with the current tatum flip... the mall cop was ok, the punch about his wording was actually pretty weirdly worded lol. ironic i guess.. uhm joe dude idk man you're all over the place... the fine art punch was a force, seems like u just threw my name in to make it work.. didn't work both ways at least how i read it... the comb over was cool but poorly worded...

wasnt the best battle seen better from both...was hard to pick a winner though

going with @Lenny for the LOTB imo.

vote caged.

[Spree]

Fuck if they say u progressed,trust me i go in for the kill
Funny how u didnt show on Net, broke fucks excuse hes behind on his Xfinity Bill
nah... cos he's 18. he doesnt pay bills yet.
U talk online shit to start a thrill but in reality u proceed with caution
In the chat said everything is Fine Art,these two fags planned a trip to that Museum in Boston
I get this concept... but wheres the real diss here?
In pictures plotting like ur gang affiliated,u never witnessed what hell is
If u thinking ur True Blood,ill make that fucking heart stop like Nelsan Ellis
dope
Tuck the heat by the pelvis Joe always carry something real heavy
Ride by ur block shots screamimg out the window like ur moms yelling "Suppers Ready!"
...joe this wasnt good man
Your beyond Petty a fucking easy target just to get bullied quicker
People told u Brush it Off,you came with a comb over for Freshmen school pictures
nice concept.... awful finish. this was a miss man. why the fuck we talkin bout school pictures? theres no real diss here at all.

vs


It's week 5 and u should already give up...everyone's been snuffin dweeb,
the league hasn't seen Boston fadeaway this quick since tatum in the summer league.
Dope
My crew show up to ya job looking like rambo, No hesitation when my team shoot,
Leave everyone in the mall deceased.. with enough corpses to start up dawn of the dead's reboot.
no
Mall cop? Lol... who u chasing faggot?? Ur a fat queer,
He already signed a clause for this ass whoopin... & ironically got fired from that job last year.
nope... this needed to be worded better. more direct on the play here. keep it simple
Ur styles utter shit.. that flow never leaves readers speechless,
Even ur wordings bad... which goes to prove ones who talk most are usually the weakest.
LMAO I fuck with this...
I attack with combos faggot, plus I got shells for ur torso,
strikes to ya face as well... leave joey lookin something like Isreal del toro
lazy closer. weak


Overall... nolt a good read tbh. Joey had cool concepts finished with terrible punches. Lenox had two cool bars but U could see the mood change in his bars throughout the week. had some garbage shit to. Lenox had the more harsher bars. two solid hits & personals while joe had one good bar with a gang of misses


V/Lenox

[WhiskeyJ]

if they say u progressed,trust me i go in for the kill
Funny how u didnt show on Net, broke fucks excuse hes behind on his Xfinity Bill
Can't fuck with a net play at this stage
U talk online shit to start a thrill but in reality u proceed with caution
In the chat said everything is Fine Art,these two fags planned a trip to that Museum in Boston
Weak attempt at a punch here
In pictures plotting like ur gang affiliated,u never witnessed what hell is
If u thinking ur True Blood,ill make that fucking heart stop like Nelsan Ellis
Nice relevant punch
Tuck the heat by the pelvis Joe always carry something real heavy
Ride by ur block shots screamimg out the window like ur moms yelling "Suppers Ready!"
Funny visual but lacked a real connection
Your beyond Petty a fucking easy target just to get bullied quicker
People told u Brush it Off,you came with a comb over for Freshmen school pictures
Funny because he's young still light

vs


It's week 5 and u should already give up...everyone's been snuffin dweeb,
the league hasn't seen Boston fadeaway this quick since tatum in the summer league.
Okay tighten up tighten the wording
My crew how up to ya job looking like rambo, No hesitation when my team shoot,
Leave everyone in the mall deceased.. with enough corpses to start up dawn of the dead's reboot.
Nah a miss
Mall cop? Lol... who u chasing faggot?? Ur a fat queer,
He already signed a clause for this ass whoopin... & ironically got fired from that job last year.
This was all over the fucking place bro. No
Ur styles utter shit.. that flow never leaves readers speechless,
Even ur wordings bad... which goes to prove ones who talk most are usually the weakest.
No connection here. Statementish
I attack with combos faggot, plus I got shells for ur torso,
strikes to ya face as well... leave joey lookin something like Isreal del toro
This is not a punch

2nd guy had the opener which was okay but the rest fell short. Need to sharpen the wording. Be harsher. Work on execution to connect the concept with the punch. JB had the brush it off which was a maybe and the current event line about true blood. I don't know. I think joe had a better grasp on how to deliver his punches. Going against the grain here.

Vote Joe

[DzasteR]

In pictures plotting like ur gang affiliated,u never witnessed what hell is
If u thinking ur True Blood,ill make that fucking heart stop like Nelsan Ellis

Vs
It's week 5 and u should already give up...everyone's been snuffin dweeb,
the league hasn't seen Boston fadeaway this quick since tatum in the summer league.
My crew show up to ya job looking like rambo, No hesitation when my team shoot,
Leave everyone in the mall deceased.. with enough corpses to start up dawn of the dead's reboot.
Mall cop? Lol... who u chasing faggot?? Ur a fat queer,
He already signed a clause for this ass whoopin... & ironically got fired from that job last year

This battle was ok. Boston, some of your bars were iffy. I kinda liked the xfinity bar but not so much so I didn't quote it. The True Blood was cool, I give you that one but the rest? Wasn't all that great. Some of your punches didn't really hit well enough. Lenny had some funny punches and they connected well with the setup lines too. He had the most quotables and had better consistency, and his wording was good here. Keep putting in work guys.

v/ Lenny

[Smog]

Jb

Opener was eh
Coulda done fine art dope, this fell flat
True blood hit,
Suppers ready was ehh coulda been nice too f worded different
Cluster had humor but wording made it ehh

Lenox

Fadeaway was good
Diceased was ehh
Signed a clause was ehh
Talks most was good lol
Closer was ehh


Soft from both imo n I got it 2-1 in favor of Lennox here.. wording was the biggest issue cuz some of these misses coulda been dope .. goidvread fellas

Vote Len

[Joe Boston]

5-1good shit @Lenny u can seal this up @Kill Spree

[Lenox]

5-1good shit @Lenny u can seal this up @Kill Spree

U too man, keep workin

[Spree]

len wins