WK 5: King (0-0) Vs WhiskeyJ(0-0)[open for votes]

[Spree]

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@King @WhiskeyJ

[King]

12?

[WhiskeyJ]

wonderful

[WhiskeyJ]

watup Fat Boy!?

i bet youuuu sweat while you walk & can't wear grey sweaters, bud
it's fucking ridiculous... you carry moreee Bread in a Bag than Mayweather does
how doped up is you?! one shot will make this a closed up issue
boyyy you'll Disappear after the Smoke Clears, we call that the Yoshimitsu
ain't everrr win a title elsewhere. so how you try to be great?!
doggg your whole career like a Green Screen.. everything Behind you is Fake
King's down w/ the bitch shit. i'll clip the Crown witha big hit
maan it's ironic my names Whisk && YOU the one that'll Spin Around with the Quickness
Fat fuckkk; w/ the size of ya tummy u could neverrr rival me dummy
King doesn't just talk smack. he Throws Shade whenever he's outside & it's Sunny

[King]

This win's so locked up it might as well be rigged, u aint half a fight
Go politic in the chat, cuz ya only hope for votes is gettin russia to hack the site
I got dimes throwin pussy at me, u dont know what that's 'bout
Any bitch beggin for some Whiskey dick is hoping u can't get it up n black out
These cats know I'm crazy, stay with a short fuse n armed daily
Let Whiskey see the fifth ring in his face like he got bitchslapped by Tom Brady
Alias' fucking disgust me, these cowards just make the rage come out
I'll knock this flamer out, 'n KO 'em again after he quits to sign in w/ his main account
Steal ya girl w/ my lifestyle. Cars n cash make ur bitch just wanna party
Make em go Rob Kardashian when I post pics of his wifey gettin dick by a Ferrari

[King]

@Kill Spree . Edit out "sent 10"

[Easy.]

watup Fat Boy!?

i bet youuuu sweat while you walk & can't wear grey sweaters, bud
it's fucking ridiculous... you carry moreee Bread in a Bag than Mayweather does

I saw that lol. THEY'RE ALL FOOKING ONES! Assuming it's a true personal, 4/5. Good play.

how doped up is you?! one shot will make this a closed up issue
boyyy you'll Disappear after the Smoke Clears, we call that the Yoshimitsu

Nice. 4/5

ain't everrr win a title elsewhere. so how you try to be great?!
doggg your whole career like a Green Screen.. everything Behind you is Fake

I'm just not a big fan of similes. It's just too easy to tie the two things in. 3/5

King's down w/ the bitch shit. i'll clip the Crown witha big hit
maan it's ironic my names Whisk && YOU the one that'll Spin Around with the Quickness

Play on your own name? Not a fan of this either. 3/5

Fat fuckkk; w/ the size of ya tummy u could neverrr rival me dummy
King doesn't just talk smack. he Throws Shade whenever he's outside & it's Sunny

Good comedy factor, decent play, 4/5

You've got some harsh wording, and you keep it personal, it's just the wp needs a little work. Bread in a bag and throwing shade were good tho. 18.

This win's so locked up it might as well be rigged, u aint half a fight
Go politic in the chat, cuz ya only hope for votes is gettin russia to hack the site

This is aight. Current event generic bar.2/5

I got dimes throwin pussy at me, u dont know what that's 'bout
Any bitch beggin for some Whiskey dick is hoping u can't get it up n black out

Lol funny np. 4/5

These cats know I'm crazy, stay with a short fuse n armed daily
Let Whiskey see the fifth ring in his face like he got bitchslapped by Tom Brady

This was average. 3/5

Alias' fucking disgust me, these cowards just make the rage come out
I'll knock this flamer out, 'n KO 'em again after he quits to sign in w/ his main account

Self hype-ish, wasn't feeling. 2/5

Steal ya girl w/ my lifestyle. Cars n cash make ur bitch just wanna party
Make em go Rob Kardashian when I post pics of his wifey gettin dick by a Ferrari

I don't know what the fuck is up with everyone fucking each other's wives here. You probably ain't even seen his wife. He could be gay for all you know. 2/5

13

Whiskey wins 18-13

[Art.]

i bet youuuu sweat while you walk & can't wear grey sweaters, bud
it's fucking ridiculous... you carry moreee Bread in a Bag than Mayweather does
how doped up is you?! one shot will make this a closed up issue
boyyy you'll Disappear after the Smoke Clears, we call that the Yoshimitsu
Fat fuckkk; w/ the size of ya tummy u could neverrr rival me dummy
King doesn't just talk smack. he Throws Shade whenever he's outside & it's Sunny

vs


This win's so locked up it might as well be rigged, u aint half a fight
Go politic in the chat, cuz ya only hope for votes is gettin russia to hack the site
I got dimes throwin pussy at me, u dont know what that's 'bout
Any bitch beggin for some Whiskey dick is hoping u can't get it up n black out
These cats know I'm crazy, stay with a short fuse n armed daily
Let Whiskey see the fifth ring in his face like he got bitchslapped by Tom Brad

this is a dope battle...

yoshimitsu bar was fire man... well worded as well. thought it was ur best bar.. the sunny outside when it shades actually made me lol also.
king hacking the site was cool... thought your line of the battle was the whiskey dick flip.... well put together.


didn't like whiskeys self name flip or kings Ko and Ko him again with the alias.

think I'm going king here.. put everything aside i was going back and forth line for line re reading the battle 4 times.. it came down to preference... i had the quotes tied up , so i picked the best bars, it thought the whiskey dick name play was the bar of the battle, which is a tough call cause like i said the yoshimitsu flip was dope... this is the best battle I've read so far this week..good shit to both of u

Vote King, by less than a hair .

[Wuxia]

watup Fat Boy!?

i bet youuuu sweat while you walk & can't wear grey sweaters, bud
it's fucking ridiculous... you carry moreee Bread in a Bag than Mayweather does

☆☆☆

how doped up is you?! one shot will make this a closed up issue
boyyy you'll Disappear after the Smoke Clears, we call that the Yoshimitsu

☆☆☆☆☆

ain't everrr win a title elsewhere. so how you try to be great?!
doggg your whole career like a Green Screen.. everything Behind you is Fake

☆☆☆☆☆

King's down w/ the bitch shit. i'll clip the Crown witha big hit
maan it's ironic my names Whisk && YOU the one that'll Spin Around with the Quickness

☆☆☆

Fat fuckkk; w/ the size of ya tummy u could neverrr rival me dummy
King doesn't just talk smack. he Throws Shade whenever he's outside & it's Sunny

☆☆☆☆☆

[QUOTE=King;8868125]This win's so locked up it might as well be rigged, u aint half a fight
Go politic in the chat, cuz ya only hope for votes is gettin russia to hack the site

☆☆☆☆☆

I got dimes throwin pussy at me, u dont know what that's 'bout
Any bitch beggin for some Whiskey dick is hoping u can't get it up n black out

☆☆☆☆☆

These cats know I'm crazy, stay with a short fuse n armed daily
Let Whiskey see the fifth ring in his face like he got bitchslapped by Tom Brady

☆☆☆

Alias' fucking disgust me, these cowards just make the rage come out
I'll knock this flamer out, 'n KO 'em again after he quits to sign in w/ his main account

☆☆☆ statementish but i dug it

Steal ya girl w/ my lifestyle. Cars n cash make ur bitch just wanna party
Make em go Rob Kardashian when I post pics of his wifey gettin dick by a Ferrari

☆☆☆[/QUOTE

This turned out to be a pretty decent battle where the misses weren't really that bad and the bars that impacted did so with finesse. Both guys brought some fire, but I have to give it up to Whiskey. He reminds me of Orc or another guy I know.

v-Whiskey

[Lenox]

Whiskey: mayweaTher was ok.. yoshimitsu dope. Green screen was kinda gay. Comparing him to a green screen? Oh snap. Spin around with quickness was wack. Closer was weak

Vs

King: hack site was good, whiskey dick was ok. Tom Brady was decent. Main account was meh. Rob kardashian was okay.

Overall: thought this would have been better.. there wasn't a haymaker in either verse which was disappointing whiskey could have taken this ... started off good but his misses killed him

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Vote king

[DzasteR]

i bet youuuu sweat while you walk & can't wear grey sweaters, bud
it's fucking ridiculous... you carry moreee Bread in a Bag than Mayweather does
ain't everrr win a title elsewhere. so how you try to be great?!
doggg your whole career like a Green Screen.. everything Behind you is Fake
King's down w/ the bitch shit. i'll clip the Crown witha big hit
maan it's ironic my names Whisk && YOU the one that'll Spin Around with the Quickness

vs

This win's so locked up it might as well be rigged, u aint half a fight
Go politic in the chat, cuz ya only hope for votes is gettin russia to hack the site
These cats know I'm crazy, stay with a short fuse n armed daily
Let Whiskey see the fifth ring in his face like he got bitchslapped by Tom Brady

I thought Whiskey's punches were stronger. King had a few nice bars but some lacked better wording. Some were light jabs. King was inconsistent imo - coulda been better but overall I think Whiskey came out stronger, more consistent with some decent punches.

v/ Whiskey

[Smog]

Whiskey

Opener was good
Yoshimistu was dope
Green screen was ok
I thought the whisk joint was good
Closer was solid

King

Opener was solid
lol whiskey dick was good
Fifth ring was good
I fuck with the main account joint.. good hit
Closer was ehh


Close af, good battle innocent personally I felt whiskey barley edged this n it came down to kings closer vs the green screen joint n the green screen was a tad better then kings closer.. its tough to beat an alias that knows u but yeah I got whisk by a thin margin.. tough call but

Vote whiskey

[Barcotic]

yoshimistu
green screen

vs

whiskey dick
5th ring

comes down to nonquotes for me, n personally I think king had the wider misses
v/orc

[Joe Boston]

Whiskey


i bet youuuu sweat while you walk & can't wear grey sweaters, bud
it's fucking ridiculous... you carry moreee Bread in a Bag than Mayweather does
Lmao good humor

how doped up is you?! one shot will make this a closed up issue
boyyy you'll Disappear after the Smoke Clears, we call that the Yoshimitsu
Good play i just dont like metaphores worded like this

ain't everrr win a title elsewhere. so how you try to be great?!
doggg your whole career like a Green Screen.. everything Behind you is Fake
Nice

King's down w/ the bitch shit. i'll clip the Crown witha big hit
maan it's ironic my names Whisk && YOU the one that'll Spin Around with the Quickness
Didnt like this

Fat fuckkk; w/ the size of ya tummy u could neverrr rival me dummy
King doesn't just talk smack. he Throws Shade whenever he's outside & it's Sunny
Old saying but funny because hes large

King

This win's so locked up it might as well be rigged, u aint half a fight
Go politic in the chat, cuz ya only hope for votes is gettin russia to hack the site
Not bad here ive had a russian hacker concept before this,was played ok

I got dimes throwin pussy at me, u dont know what that's 'bout
Any bitch beggin for some Whiskey dick is hoping u can't get it up n black out
Lol good np

These cats know I'm crazy, stay with a short fuse n armed daily
Let Whiskey see the fifth ring in his face like he got bitchslapped by Tom Brady
Rhyme scheme off but dope metaphore on finish

Alias' fucking disgust me, these cowards just make the rage come out
I'll knock this flamer out, 'n KO 'em again after he quits to sign in w/ his main account
Nah wording off

Steal ya girl w/ my lifestyle. Cars n cash make ur bitch just wanna party
Make em go Rob Kardashian when I post pics of his wifey gettin dick by a Ferrari
Funny but damn the worded faultered here

King had whiskey dick np and brady flip. Whiskey had opener green screen and closer. I have whiskey here for slightly more consistency

V/Whiskey

[Spree]

6-2 whiskey wins