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    SirVent
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    Dagel & Kaotic - The Butterfly Effect

    TheButterflyEffect
    By Kaotic Theory and Kingslayer



    Japanese sensu's
    Frolicking on my days bloom
    Romantically

    Symmetrical peace,
    the hues of blue correspond.
    Like two dancing leafs.


    Its Tie Die blankets
    Wither wild performances
    Basking in sunlight

    Serenity follows
    behind tropical coattails.
    A fruitful display.


    A taste of heaven
    Angels swimming gracefully
    Mother natures toast

    Serendipity.
    Shockwaves of colorful joy
    fluttering in glee.


    It resembles hope
    In pursuit of happiness
    Civilized eye candy

    Precious remedy.
    If only the world could see
    the butterfly's wings.

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    Re: Dagel & Kaotic - The Butterfly Effect

    Not sure about this. It doesn't grab me and take control of my emotions.
    I do however respect the art involved. Lovely haiku here.
    There's just something that doesn't take over my being, which is what happens when I fall in love with a piece,
    or am floored by it. I like it, but I don't love it enough to vote yes for hof. So i'll leave it to the ones who do.


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    Re: Dagel & Kaotic - The Butterfly Effect

    Leafs? I'll leafs this one alone.

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    Re: Dagel & Kaotic - The Butterfly Effect

    I thought it was good as seen in my feed at the time, but I don't feel it's HoF worthy. Plus originally it was me and Kaotic doing the haiku form as a full cohesive poem, so fuck them for stealing my idea haha
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