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2 no shows you out for the fallowing week.
3 no shows you out for season.
@Art.
@B Dot LESNAR
Check. Probably going 12.
Wait, how about 16?
That's cool , I know you like to drop early Il try to do the same if I have some time
18. (realized you said 16 my b )
u usually drop asap i noticed, now ur shaking nervous its something i noted
see you normally see Dot com, but u knew u were dead soon as the site loaded
top 5? r u kidding me g? u need to climb the ranks calmly quit fidgetin b
sonnn it doesn't matter what Tyrion, youl always be a fucking midget to me
peeped ur last battle, it was THAT gay, like real bad, in an extremely wack way
i haven't seen someone rob Dzaster that bad since KOTD matched him w/ Pat Stay
I cater to the leagues animals u do tricks, ur just a servant with loose lips
ur more like a butler to the wolves, even D wade would see through ur Bull shit
u admitted you're a nerd , a damn groupie, but il let ur chicks hands do me
Me & her will be at home cumming, while ur out watchin that Spider-man movie
ur name says it all u cant write a punch, "broke" lesnars a force i didn't hype u once
u named ur self after a WWE wrestler, to show us u haven't won a real fight in months
if i inspired u anymore, ud try twinning, you need to freeze if u think les winning
Im something ull never B- Boy, these hand'l leave u upside down w/ ur head spinning
u aint Mighty with the gun chatter u wrote, Duck, or il ice dude w/o grabin the toast
Youll see this so called Gunnar Stahl, ironically hes choking when it matters the most
u saw u matched w/ me, u were beggin for change, while i was never afraid
cause after i leave you dead Broke, Im robbin ur fam for every penny they made
Goodluck homie.
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Probably going to need an extension.
@Kill Spree keep this verse, delete the other one.
Art. aka Marvelous
Originally Posted by Art.
u should do motown angles, stick with da greatest hits
who wants to see marvin gaye bars?, ask him for pics of his vegas trip
joe said ur wp's are old af, u mad that he talkin smack?
can somebody plz get this catatonic?, u STILL haven't responded back
i laughed @ ur whack vbl battles, tbh i was startled kid
didnt see any stan lee cameos, but there's a faggot in every marvel vid
u hideous borderlands creature, ur a mad ugly disgrace
so if u want us to believe ur handsome, jack his mask to cover ur face
ur soundclick page is torture, so just dream on playboy
each songs brutal cuz they fuckin reek, got me thinkin ur theon greyjoy
u flip other niggas wp's huh?, ur method isn't smart jerk
thank whoever the rightful onerous, cuz u take credit for his hard work
who u dickridin next b? it's odd to jock a dude genitals
damn u spend more time grabbin peter, than doctor octopus tentacles
u done with that gross vag?, broke let u try a dime slut
if U shared ur dirty thots professor x would be completely mindfucked
don't applaud this sorry bitch, u tout the shittiest flows
i'm positive attribute to u would be praisin a bum without any of those
I just wanna say yall both, Yall all- Everyone who dropped really DID the Damn Thang. …this battle in particular is really deserving of a Good vote!
Im dissapointed with the showing in the League tho Overall and For that reason, I refus to vote. Its been this way if yall hadnt noticed.
It hurts me on bars like these deeply too becauae I came back to compete and witness Good competitors such as those depicted here.
Props to both, sorry for the @Rant and bro… wya wit It too?? These NSs Gotta cease im sick too death of it; my Time is my everything niggas ♡ wasting it! Sorry to Waste Yalls
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top 5? r u kidding me g? u need to climb the ranks calmly quit fidgetin b
sonnn it doesn't matter what Tyrion, youl always be a fucking midget to me
I cater to the leagues animals u do tricks, ur just a servant with loose lips
ur more like a butler to the wolves, even D wade would see through ur Bull shit
u admitted you're a nerd , a damn groupie, but il let ur chicks hands do me
Me & her will be at home cumming, while ur out watchin that Spider-man movie
u aint Mighty with the gun chatter u wrote, Duck, or il ice dude w/o grabin the toast
Youll see this so called Gunnar Stahl, ironically hes choking when it matters the most
u saw u matched w/ me, u were beggin for change, while i was never afraid
cause after i leave you dead Broke, Im robbin ur fam for every penny they made
vs
u should do motown angles, stick with da greatest hits
who wants to see marvin gaye bars?, ask him for pics of his vegas trip
i laughed @ ur whack vbl battles, tbh i was startled kid
didnt see any stan lee cameos, but there's a faggot in every marvel vid
u hideous borderlands creature, ur a mad ugly disgrace
so if u want us to believe ur handsome, jack his mask to cover ur face
ur soundclick page is torture, so just dream on playboy
each songs brutal cuz they fuckin reek, got me thinkin ur theon greyjoy
who u dickridin next b? it's odd to jock a dude genitals
damn u spend more time grabbin peter, than doctor octopus tentacles
u done with that gross vag?, broke let u try a dime slut
if U shared ur dirty thots professor x would be completely mindfucked
This was a dope battle lots of impressive angles and concepts, that butler to the wolves line was heat and that handsome jack bar was hittin I feel one got this slightly with the quotables and his verse was just a bit more consistent overall. v/Broke
D O 0 O 0 M
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MUSIC VIDEO^
u usually drop asap i noticed, now ur shaking nervous its something i noted
see you normally see Dot com, but u knew u were dead soon as the site loaded
u admitted you're a nerd , a damn groupie, but il let ur chicks hands do me
Me & her will be at home cumming, while ur out watchin that Spider-man movie
ur name says it all u cant write a punch, "broke" lesnars a force i didn't hype u once
u named ur self after a WWE wrestler, to show us u haven't won a real fight in months
u aint Mighty with the gun chatter u wrote, Duck, or il ice dude w/o grabin the toast
Youll see this so called Gunnar Stahl, ironically hes choking when it matters the most
u saw u matched w/ me, u were beggin for change, while i was never afraid
cause after i leave you dead Broke, Im robbin ur fam for every penny they made
Vs.
u should do motown angles, stick with da greatest hits
who wants to see marvin gaye bars?, ask him for pics of his vegas trip
joe said ur wp's are old af, u mad that he talkin smack?
can somebody plz get this catatonic?, u STILL haven't responded back
i laughed @ ur whack vbl battles, tbh i was startled kid
didnt see any stan lee cameos, but there's a faggot in every marvel vid
u flip other niggas wp's huh?, ur method isn't smart jerk
thank whoever the rightful onerous, cuz u take credit for his hard work
who u dickridin next b? it's odd to jock a dude genitals
damn u spend more time grabbin peter, than doctor octopus tentacles
Got this tied at 5 a piece so lotb will be the tiebreaker. Gotta go with that Onerous line, shit was mad creative.
V/b dot lesnar
Ok ok....not bad. Some nice lines in there and some ehh's, but both had some good ones. I have Broke edging it out, he really picked it up at the end. Art had some good lines too but I feel Broke's last several bars were nice. Cool battle.
3-0 let's get a few more
Art: dot com wad dope, midget was wtf. Rap battle league lines are so wack lmfao, also pat stay didn't rob disaster. Bull shit was bad, homecoming was garbage, wwe was okay. Head spinning was okay. Matter the most was good. Closer was lazy.
Vs
Broke: wasn't feeling Marvin gaye, catatonic was good. Vid vid was okay. Cover face was wack. Greyjoy was good. Onerous was also good. Doctor octopus tentacles was dope. Professor x was dope. Attribute was okay.
Overall: okay battle.. I wasn't really wowed by anything although brokes personals were good. Some of arts name play was really fucking played. Along with his wp. Decent battle. Expected a little more from both.
Vote: b
u usually drop asap i noticed, now ur shaking nervous its something i noted
see you normally see Dot com, but u knew u were dead soon as the site loaded
thought the punch was worded weird. and kinda a stretch name play...
top 5? r u kidding me g? u need to climb the ranks calmly quit fidgetin b
sonnn it doesn't matter what Tyrion, youl always be a fucking midget to me
I've used this wordplay but this was better.
peeped ur last battle, it was THAT gay, like real bad, in an extremely wack way
i haven't seen someone rob Dzaster that bad since KOTD matched him w/ Pat Stay
I fuck w/this
I cater to the leagues animals u do tricks, ur just a servant with loose lips
ur more like a butler to the wolves, even D wade would see through ur Bull shit
wasnt a fan of that set up at all.
u admitted you're a nerd , a damn groupie, but il let ur chicks hands do me
Me & her will be at home cumming, while ur out watchin that Spider-man movie
NO!
ur name says it all u cant write a punch, "broke" lesnars a force i didn't hype u once
u named ur self after a WWE wrestler, to show us u haven't won a real fight in months
Dope
if i inspired u anymore, ud try twinning, you need to freeze if u think les winning
Im something ull never B- Boy, these hand'l leave u upside down w/ ur head spinning
nah
u aint Mighty with the gun chatter u wrote, Duck, or il ice dude w/o grabin the toast
Youll see this so called Gunnar Stahl, ironically hes choking when it matters the most
i fuck wit this
u saw u matched w/ me, u were beggin for change, while i was never afraid
cause after i leave you dead Broke, Im robbin ur fam for every penny they made
this was cool to
vs
u should do motown angles, stick with da greatest hits
who wants to see marvin gaye bars?, ask him for pics of his vegas trip
Dope
joe said ur wp's are old af, u mad that he talkin smack?
can somebody plz get this catatonic?, u STILL haven't responded back
wasnt a fan of this
i laughed @ ur whack vbl battles, tbh i was startled kid
didnt see any stan lee cameos, but there's a faggot in every marvel vid
Wasnt a fan of this wording tbh...you laughed at his VBL yet you were startled? Marv'll vid? @B Dot LESNAR PM me if I'm missing something here before I vote
u hideous borderlands creature, ur a mad ugly disgrace
so if u want us to believe ur handsome, jack his mask to cover ur face
Not feeling this either
ur soundclick page is torture, so just dream on playboy
each songs brutal cuz they fuckin reek, got me thinkin ur theon greyjoy
I fuck with this
u flip other niggas wp's huh?, ur method isn't smart jerk
thank whoever the rightful onerous, cuz u take credit for his hard work
Dope
who u dickridin next b? it's odd to jock a dude genitals
damn u spend more time grabbin peter, than doctor octopus tentacles
Humour there but seemed lazy. nothing cut throat. Light bar
u done with that gross vag?, broke let u try a dime slut
if U shared ur dirty thots professor x would be completely mindfucked
I fuck wit this
don't applaud this sorry bitch, u tout the shittiest flows
i'm positive attribute to u would be praisin a bum without any of those
Nice closer
[B @B Dot LESNAR PM me before I vote...I'll edit it in here[/B]
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