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@Allen Knight @IronMic
Check - 12?
yea, 12 is good.
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
You may be one of the favorites to win it all, but I certainly hope you ain't sleeping
12
This rook is gunning for one of the “kings”, the mag says I ain’t takin’ him, right?
Pop two in his chess, his bishop and ran when she saw me wasting a Knight
I’ll take ya girl’s life, too – Poker with a knife repeatedly in plain sight
Bust her up with a blackjack then twister neck – that’s game night
Think this a game, Knight? They praise you here but ya girlie lackin interest
She worships me balls and all though, did you know she was sack-religious?
I’ll carve Al’s stomach open til I’m elbow deep in his midsection
No one been this into Al gore since the 2000 election
I’m an artist with the punches – trade haymakers with Mic if you like your chances
It won’t be a Van Gogh when Knight is seeing stars on the canvas
Put the league on notice, Allen – vets will be ducking me man
I’m after all of the old heads like I’m face-fucking ya grams
Lol ur a mockery....
once i start sprayin the uzi u'll be stuck in smoke
ill shoot Irony caps out & let'em bleed death for being a fuckin joke
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
all ya slut does is sunbath & cheat, i'd lose patience quick
cuz me & that 'Tantric Sex' sessions longer than yah'll whole relationship
my blade ready to cut ya chest, it'll feed on ya holmes
i'll stab Iron Lung till he wakes in the ICU & can't breath on his own
ya tracks neva get played on air, its straight wack shit
faggot if ur music was so fuckin bomb it'd be more Radioactive
i'll stab u vicious in front of ur squad, u'll bleed in dirt
slash till Iron-On all of his boy's tees an none of'em rockin R.I.P shirts
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Originally Posted by IronMic
If I'm not mistaken, this is IronMic's first official battle and he demonstrated the capacity to formulate concepts/wordplays/nameplays in a definitive manner. He has elevated tremendously since he's been here and I think with a few more battles under his belt he will better position himself to pull off some upsets. My advice would be to carefully approach the concepts, nameplays, and wordplays you use. You want to be original and that means refraining from obvious flips. If you're battling a vet, the nameplays won't be that effective because some of us have been doing this for years. In that scenario, rely on your wordplay. Be innovative. Stay away from predictable concepts. Look at my name for example, BROKE LESNAR. You would be tempted to use a Brock Lesnar concept on me, right? Don't do it. It has already been done. Stay away from the obvious. Keep it up. Stay active. You have alot of potential.
Allen Knight took this pretty easily. He trailed off in his last 2 bars but everything above that was exceptional. Very creative stuff.
v-Allen Knight
Iron: nothing.. u got hella potential tho dawg.
Vs
Allen: knee caps lol, randy Orton was hard, iron lung
Overall: iron, u have a lotta potential tbh, The knight name plays are pretty old, but being new and not knowing that just shows me how much potential I have, because they were ALL dope. Keep it up man, trust me u will 100% be a threat if u keep at this.
Vote: AK
Put the league on notice, Allen – vets will be ducking me man
I’m after all of the old heads like I’m face-fucking ya grams
vs
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
teriible battle... Iron has good concepts but it got repetitive quick ....I think u shoulda made the bars differentiate from each other as well... they gotta just blend together and go on the same way....
Knights verse was almost equally bad...but flowed better.....if that registers
v- AK
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I’ll take ya girl’s life, too – Poker with a knife repeatedly in plain sight
Bust her up with a blackjack then twister neck – that’s game night
Vs
once i start sprayin the uzi u'll be stuck in smoke
ill shoot Irony caps out & let'em bleed death for being a fuckin joke
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
i'll stab u vicious in front of ur squad, u'll bleed in dirt
slash till Iron-On all of his boy's tees an none of'em rockin R.I.P shirts1
AK takes this clearly, he just outclassed his opponent. Lack of experience really hurt you Iron because all the nameplays you did have been done countless times. Not much more to say about it
v/AK
IronMic
This rook is gunning for one of the “kings”, the mag says I ain’t takin’ him, right?
Pop two in his chess, his bishop and ran when she saw me wasting a Knight
You showing potential with this bar - you got the idea, good job, wording could've helped make the punch hit a little bit
I’ll take ya girl’s life, too – Poker with a knife repeatedly in plain sight
Bust her up with a blackjack then twister neck – that’s game night
Nice
Think this a game, Knight? They praise you here but ya girlie lackin interest
She worships me balls and all though, did you know she was sack-religious?
Noted the wp, could've worded it better maybe - but wasn't much a good hit
I’ll carve Al’s stomach open til I’m elbow deep in his midsection
No one been this into Al gore since the 2000 election
Not bad
I’m an artist with the punches – trade haymakers with Mic if you like your chances
It won’t be a Van Gogh when Knight is seeing stars on the canvas
Nice bar here
Put the league on notice, Allen – vets will be ducking me man
I’m after all of the old heads like I’m face-fucking ya grams
Lol coulda changed it up on the 2nd line but ok
vs
Allen Knight
once i start sprayin the uzi u'll be stuck in smoke
ill shoot Irony caps out & let'em bleed death for being a fuckin joke
Nice opener
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
Another nice one
all ya slut does is sunbath & cheat, i'd lose patience quick
cuz me & that 'Tantric Sex' sessions longer than yah'll whole relationship
Ok
my blade ready to cut ya chest, it'll feed on ya holmes
i'll stab Iron Lung till he wakes in the ICU & can't breath on his own
Not bad
ya tracks neva get played on air, its straight wack shit
faggot if ur music was so fuckin bomb it'd be more Radioactive
Nah
i'll stab u vicious in front of ur squad, u'll bleed in dirt
slash till Iron-On all of his boy's tees an none of'em rockin R.I.P shirts
Good ender
This battle was really the best I've seen from IronMic. He has the potential and displayed it here. This was the mark he made, now time to elevate from here bro. Take the criticism, work on your wording and wordplay. You got the concept right, so that's a good start for you. You went up against a tough opponent but you held your own so good job. Allen had a lot of nameplay and made the most noise with that in his verse. Interesting battle, but I gotta go with the better punches and consistency here. AK had good delivery on his punches, everything just flowed through til the end. Good shit guys!
v/ Allen Knight
I think iron mic has potential to be fire, I think his concepts we're mad outdated here. a sacrilegious bar shows that, Maybe he a vet under alias just knocking off the dust, who ever you are though I hope you stick around you could be a threat. Allen had fire bars, consistency and the LOTB for me was the Iron Lung bar. that shit was raw. I got Allen taking this easily, best bar of Mics was his opener and Knight had a consistently nice verse
V/Allen Knight
This rook is gunning for one of the “kings”, the mag says I ain’t takin’ him, right?
Pop two in his chess, his bishop and ran when she saw me wasting a Knight
’ll take ya girl’s life, too – Poker with a knife repeatedly in plain sight
Bust her up with a blackjack then twister neck – that’s game night
vs
once i start sprayin the uzi u'll be stuck in smoke
ill shoot Irony caps out & let'em bleed death for being a fuckin joke
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
my blade ready to cut ya chest, it'll feed on ya holmes
i'll stab Iron Lung till he wakes in the ICU & can't breath on his own
dope battle deff better than the votes show....Iron had some cool hits started off cool i know people say the knight references are played.. but so is everyones name I'm sure everyone on the site has had the same name flip used on them just different variations , so I'm not going to hurt you for that... AK dope drop all around solid verse from start to finish didn't like the radioactive line tbh but you had more than enough that connected.... all in all both dudes dropped cool i think iron mic is on the come up i just think ak was more polished... good battle
vote allen
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Iron
This rook is gunning for one of the “kings”, the mag says I ain’t takin’ him, right?
Pop two in his chess, his bishop and ran when she saw me wasting a Knight
Good attempt but forced wordplay
I’ll take ya girl’s life, too – Poker with a knife repeatedly in plain sight
Bust her up with a blackjack then twister neck – that’s game night
Dope
Think this a game, Knight? They praise you here but ya girlie lackin interest
She worships me balls and all though, did you know she was sack-religious?
Very played reference lol
I’ll carve Al’s stomach open til I’m elbow deep in his midsection
No one been this into Al gore since the 2000 election
Yeah played with np but overall the flip was nice
I’m an artist with the punches – trade haymakers with Mic if you like your chances
It won’t be a Van Gogh when Knight is seeing stars on the canvas
Nice
Put the league on notice, Allen – vets will be ducking me man
I’m after all of the old heads like I’m face-fucking ya grams
Nah
Allen
once i start sprayin the uzi u'll be stuck in smoke
ill shoot Irony caps out & let'em bleed death for being a fuckin joke
Dope direct punch
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
Dope metaphore another direct hit
all ya slut does is sunbath & cheat, i'd lose patience quick
cuz me & that 'Tantric Sex' sessions longer than yah'll whole relationship
Nice wp lol
my blade ready to cut ya chest, it'll feed on ya holmes
i'll stab Iron Lung till he wakes in the ICU & can't breath on his own
Dope np another direct hit
ya tracks neva get played on air, its straight wack shit
faggot if ur music was so fuckin bomb it'd be more Radioactive
Didnt like how u displayed the wording on this finish
i'll stab u vicious in front of ur squad, u'll bleed in dirt
slash till Iron-On all of his boy's tees an none of'em rockin R.I.P shirts
Nah
Req,had some played nps in his verse. That blackjack bar was cool. Allen was more direct had some good creativity and consistency.
V/Allen
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[QUOTE=IronMic;8864575]You may be one of the favorites to win it all, but I certainly hope you ain't sleeping
12
This rook is gunning for one of the “kings”, the mag says I ain’t takin’ him, right?
Pop two in his chess, his bishop and ran when she saw me wasting a Knight
--ok. The chess bishop knight obv the and thw knight/knight nameplay is obviously dated but the flip was relevant enough to make it not terrible at least
I’ll take ya girl’s life, too – Poker with a knife repeatedly in plain sight
Bust her up with a blackjack then twister neck – that’s game night
--this is ok too. The poker/poker thing was forced as far as tie ins goes. Ive never heard being stabbed as being poked jah feel. Soild bar just corny tie in lol
Think this a game, Knight? They praise you here but ya girlie lackin interest
She worships me balls and all though, did you know she was sack-religious?
--just been done too many times
I’ll carve Al’s stomach open til I’m elbow deep in his midsection
No one been this into Al gore since the 2000 election
--its played man. Als been around a long time the obvious name plays have been done a lot
I’m an artist with the punches – trade haymakers with Mic if you like your chances
It won’t be a Van Gogh when Knight is seeing stars on the canvas
--this cool tho
Put the league on notice, Allen – vets will be ducking me man
I’m after all of the old heads like I’m face-fucking ya grams[
--this was good/QUOTE]
This was actually a cool little battle. Mic had a lot of execution and wording issues in the first half of his verse but got it together real quick towards the end and he has some potential. Unfortunately for him it's real hard to beat a guy like allen in a short battle tho because he can get on a roll and hit u with 4 or 5 bangers out of 6 and at that point its rip and thats kind of what we saw in this one
Good read guys
Vote allen
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This rook is gunning for one of the “kings”, the mag says I ain’t takin’ him, right?
Pop two in his chess, his bishop and ran when she saw me wasting a Knight
I’ll carve Al’s stomach open til I’m elbow deep in his midsection
No one been this into Al gore since the 2000 election
vs
once i start sprayin the uzi u'll be stuck in smoke
ill shoot Irony caps out & let'em bleed death for being a fuckin joke
fuckin elbow & forearm ur face till its smashed thru
they'll be more 'Skull Traces' on my arms than a Randy Orton tattoo
my blade ready to cut ya chest, it'll feed on ya holmes
i'll stab Iron Lung till he wakes in the ICU & can't breath on his own
iron had a couple good hits but AK had the harsher flips and better execution this round.
v. ak
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