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    one liner hiaku 2

    2.. a number .. a group... more than 1 but not greater

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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    Ok. Ok then lol.
    I get it. Just wish there was more to draw from though Elegant Elephant.
    You've stated something clean and crisp but it's something we already know.
    How about hitting us with something that's new to our imagination in a way that's fresh.
    I like the basic aspect of what you've said, but it's not abstract, it's not worded in a poetic way imo,
    it's purely a fact.

    come on....hit me with some poetic grace. Hit me with some imagery. Hit me with some golden nuggets of wisdom.
    I know you've got it in you. So ..... bring it and let's read it.

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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    ... it's a hiaku.. what more do you expect?

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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Elegant Elephant View Post
    ... it's a hiaku.. what more do you expect?
    me personally, something a little less one dimensional.
    But that's just me.

    Others have their own opinions.

    To each...their own.


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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    and too you

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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Elegant Elephant View Post
    2.. a number .. a group... more than 1 but not greater
    It may just be the weed, but I actually dig that line! It's not a Haiku, though I think you're aware of that and just trying to piss Emily off! It's a clever delivery of the notion of independence and self determination, as well as the idea that though humans need other humans for survival and 'happiness' that the individual is often regarded as secondary, hence fashion, religion, education propagating uniformed opinion and even so far as physical expectations in our aesthetics or haicuts etc...

    My point being, even though you were trying to be a cunt, you ACCIDENTALLY wrote something profound haha
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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    ^You're like those people that find jesus in burnt toast.

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    Re: one liner hiaku 2

    ^ LMAO it was him I tell you! HIM!
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