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    Self Activate - Self Servin' (3)

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    Hit you wit them bars that'll crack ya fuckin' skull
    I'm the sickest wit these lyrics wat I'm spittin' is a cold
    No prescription for the dope, if you listen ya exposed
    'Til ya senses overload and ya itchin' fa sum mo'
    I'm as holy as the Pope when I bless ya wit a quote
    I'm a legend to the cults that be reppin' the occult
    Cos the messages & codes in the letters that I wrote
    Are il•leg•ible to most ... but the RO-Setta Stone
    Is embedded in the flow, press the pedal to the flo'
    If them devils wanna go, make 'em wrestle in the snow
    Melt the glaciers at the poles,'til the ocean overflows
    And the ancient Eskimos ... start escapin' on the boat
    That was frozen long ago ... back when Noah had to float
    Yeah, you know I had to gloat, I be flexin' on them hoes
    You be desperate & you don't, cos ya thirsty like a throat
    In a desert full of smoke ... this election was a joke
    Had us stressin' over votes now we mad at the result
    Cos it's just the status quo & it's neva gone change
    'Less we bang or we revolt like the Haitians on the coast
    When they had to overthrow ... the French from the throne
    Napoleon went broke ... lost his grip up on the yoke
    I can spit that Espanõl, mixed with venom, and Creole
    Santeria when I flow ... here's some Voodoo fa ya soul!
    Prolly spook a fuckin' ghost just fa lookin' at me wrong!
    Have 'em cookin' from the chrome when I light the microphone
    I'm like Michael in the post, middle fingers to Malone
    If I shoot it, I'ma swish it, I ain't never missed a goal!
    My percentage is the biggest, but I split it wit my woes
    All the bitches at my shows, they be drippin' wit the liquid
    Have 'em slippin' on the foam... from my sexy syl•la•bles
    Did I mention I'm the slickest, with this diction, on the low
    Picture Christmas in the Slopes ... I'm a Yeti & I'm deadly
    Cos I'm so Abominable, fuck ya Mummy she's a hoe
    Break them Walls like Jericho, cos she's fuckin' wit the Bull
    From the Land of Derrick Rose, I'm a Pharaoh from the 'GO
    Mississippi I'm the Goat, spent some time in M.I.Yay
    Got acquainted wit the coke, gettin blown in Costa Rica
    Smokin' reefa by the "O", if that chica is a keepa I'ma freaka
    Like J. Lo, even tho she kinda old, like a decade overdue
    But that ass still phat at the age of 42 ... but that bitch is 47!!!
    That's some marinated cooch! But I serenade and soothe
    Every crevice wit my flute, make me barricade the coupe
    Cos they aim'n fa my roof, cos they hate to see me win
    When they bettin' I'ma lose, it's a "Catch 22"
    Cos they catch 22 ... bullet holes to the dome ...
    From these brass .22's ... if they actin' like a fool
    Crackin' atoms after school, cos them teachers
    Couldn't reach me, I was Nietzsche in my youth
    If the money is the ROOT... of .. every .. single .. evil
    Then the Ego ... is the FRUIT, see this Eagle and salute
    Put ya hands on ya heads like a military troop
    Got sum literary proof ... the Messiah was inspired
    By the fire I produced -- when the climate wasn't blue
    But the nitrogen consumed every corner of the sky
    & there was life inside the Moon ... back when Isis told Atum
    That the Christ was comin' soon, I plugged a mic up to the womb
    And give him life in sonic booms ... ~~KABOOM!!!!




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    Re: Self Activate - Self Servin' (3)

    I vote in.

    very well thought out, rhyme scheme was solid to the end, good substance and have great construction and focus with the way the verbage was placed.
    @Jukon

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    Re: Self Activate - Self Servin' (3)

    i vote in also, cool flex piece but he made it more than that. he gave it direction, meaning, and didn't just write to write. he had that substance and the content that made this piece enjoyable where other pieces similar aren't as enjoyable to read.

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    we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.

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    Re: Self Activate - Self Servin' (3)

    I vote YES. Reasons are in my feed.


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    Re: Self Activate - Self Servin' (3)

    an easy yes for me. a flex piece that had much more to say then just bragging and falling back on cliches. Flow was incredible. . the attention to details and finesse were off the charts in this one
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