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Thread: Showstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

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    Showstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    4 line battle. Very simple. Due before midnight tonight.

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley

    No good service where i am at. Gonna drop new. Good luck if you make it..

    Im sick, raping this skell, kid your taking the L,
    You couldn't find bars slamming your face in a cell...
    Perplex and quick, burst necks and shit,
    You aint seein the Show on dish, direct, or your Netflix bitch...

    Thanks for reading

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley

    Same deal...id rather win fair instead of by no show...ill give him 24 hours

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley

    Know what? This show sucks, I'll bet he's trolling
    Head exploding, put an end to Show like credits rolling
    Waiting on Show to Show up, no service yes I'm roaming
    So I'm stuck suffering through buffering, guess he's loading

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley

    Sweet, showed up. Good luck

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley

    Perplex and quick, burst necks and shit,
    You aint seein the Show on dish, direct, or your Netflix bitch...


    vs

    Head exploding, put an end to Show like credits rolling
    Waiting on Show to Show up, no service yes I'm roaming
    So I'm stuck suffering through buffering, guess he's loading


    nothing spectacular here... real short battle...I would've like better if u said " seein this show" instead of "the show"...just a lil nitpick on word choice.....Elvis' flow better than your joint show,,,,and had better punches


    V- EF

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley

    I liked shows face in a cell line but the credits rolling line won this for elvis easily

    Vote elv
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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    This battle is open for votes but will not count towards battle records due to 8 line minimum requirement for battle record battles.


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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    @Showstopper540 @Elvis Freshley would you like this battle to remain open? Will not count towards records, if so.

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    Re: owstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    Im sick, raping this skell, kid your taking the L,
    You couldn't find bars slamming your face in a cell...
    Ok dont get it who the hell is skell? Did u mean skeleton? The punch was weak that concept has done a million times
    Perplex and quick, burst necks and shit,
    You aint seein the Show on dish, direct, or your Netflix bitch...
    Ehh?? Where was hhr line there?? Confused.com lol



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    Know what? This show sucks, I'll bet he's trolling
    Head exploding, put an end to Show like credits rolling
    Again this has been done to death but it was worded so much better than show
    Waiting on Show to Show up, no service yes I'm roaming
    So I'm stuck suffering through buffering, guess he's loading
    Ugh that coulda have been better as well...



    Ok so i dont know any of you and this battle wasnt the best especially since you both only wrote 4 lines... anyways you wrre both played and very recycled but i guess if i had to choose i would go with elvis freshley especially because showstopper mentioned skell in his first bar and then said some shit like show on dish in his second... ehh? Who the fuck is dish? It was just random and weird...


    Vote: elvis freshley reluctantly

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    Im sick, raping this skell, kid your taking the L,
    You couldn't find bars slamming your face in a cell...
    Ok dont get it who the hell is skell? Did u mean skeleton? The punch was weak that concept has done a million times
    Perplex and quick, burst necks and shit,
    You aint seein the Show on dish, direct, or your Netflix bitch...
    Ehh?? Where was hhr line there?? Confused.com lol



    Vs.



    Know what? This show sucks, I'll bet he's trolling
    Head exploding, put an end to Show like credits rolling
    Again this has been done to death but it was worded so much better than show
    Waiting on Show to Show up, no service yes I'm roaming
    So I'm stuck suffering through buffering, guess he's loading
    Ugh that coulda have been better as well...



    Ok so i dont know any of you and this battle wasnt the best especially since you both only wrote 4 lines... anyways you wrre both played and very recycled but i guess if i had to choose i would go with elvis freshley especially because showstopper mentioned skell in his first bar and then said some shit like show on dish in his second... ehh? Who the fuck is dish? It was just random and weird...


    Vote: elvis freshley reluctantly
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    Re: Showstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    Tbh wasn't Feeling shows bars at all.. he needs to shake the rust cos the potential is there. Thought both Elvis bars were nice plays y'all need more bars fuck two bar battles

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    Re: Showstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    Regular battles are 5 bars wtf is this shit

    Anyways Show like i said in ur other battle gotta differentiate audio from text. Text u gotta be more impactable ur wording has to be more crisp and the vocab more precise. I advise u view some text battles and get a general idea on how the format is used.

    Elvis first bar was a pretty decent nice nameplay flip. Last bar i hated the setup and the finisher was more of a statement.

    V/Elvis overall his bars were formulated into text battle aspect.

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    Re: Showstopper540 vs. Elvis Freshley (Open for Votes)

    Elvis wins.

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