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10 lines/bars due by tomorrow (9th) before 11:59pm
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Showstopper540
Kill spree
House rules
10 lines/bars due by tomorrow (9th) before 11:59pm
Post voting links whenever you want...make sure they are with your verse if you dont pre post them.
Best of luck.
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Just gonna drop my vote links now so i dont forget later.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
Droppin now, wont have time later.
Show no weakness, laying these solo speeches,
Whats not to tell here? The show's no secret...
Bro your deep in, im sick, with a flow so quick,
Leave you sceptic-ly confused, like oh, no shit,
Dudes broke, no tricks, hoppin' on dick like a pogo stick...
Thinkin' you'll win? homies lying, even tho he's trying,
Dude still catch 8 in the chest like he's Kobe Bryant...
No rewinding, i murder you after all, this is mass assault,
Take this loss with a grain, man pass the salt...
Im primed for stoppin kids, its time for droppin this rhyme apocalypse,
Im seeing through this bitch like a gynecologist...
Thanks for reading. Good luck
See...
In this program I'm Hr's late Cos you nothin but wack, kid
U'll go "Good Night", Show...After you dead asleep I'll watch TV like Nothing had happened
this clowns a jerk, they say U down to earth so I'll shoot till ya heads gone
Ur cock sucking addiction is deeply Rooted & after this thats what ya grave'll depend on
The 60 get jiggy on ya face, red dot means this man is a mark
Trust I'll expose that Show Girl...cos this beat downs a dance in the park
fuck ya life bro, I'm phsyco, the neck up I'll do gore shit
so watch me have this Kids head in my hand the same way as Matt Borges
pussy ya garbage, easily ya lifes a dieing thing
this that Enclave sig, we'll see ya head by a string
Bitches want you to stop creepin. Leaving ya face scard
When ever we hear a girl scream STOP!..we think show gettin a rape charge
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Been-The-Same)
OM Link because everything thats open for votes is fucking closed
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Good luck man
show your use of multi's is very nice but there were no solid punches in your verse.. I felt it was very rushed.
Thinkin' you'll win? homies lying, even tho he's trying,
Dude still catch 8 in the chest like he's Kobe Bryant...
^this is straight up rust. shake that shit off.
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In this program I'm Hr's late Cos you nothin but wack, kid
U'll go "Good Night", Show...After you dead asleep I'll watch TV like Nothing had happened
fuck ya life bro, I'm phsyco, the neck up I'll do gore shit
so watch me have this Kids head in my hand the same way as Matt Borges
^best 2 bars, rest was meh.
pretty easy battle to vote on here.
vote - kill
Best Rookie of Season 13 - Poet's Society
Tss good battle will breakdown cause im worried to ruin it with a vote just so were all on the same page wiyh brwakdown count it if u want i will not cast a vote on the poll but yeah here is a breakdown anyway and yall let me know iv ypu want3d to vote on it or not... lol i know som3times breaking verses down can be difficult but here is an attempt ....
Show no weakness, laying these solo speeches,
Whats not to tell here? The show's no secret...
Ok i guess simple multi i woulda said
Bro your deep in, im sick, with a flow so quick,
Leave you sceptic-ly confused, like oh, no shit,
Didnt like the concept in the punch if u get me i see the attempt but it wasnt dope
Dudes broke, no tricks, hoppin' on dick like a pogo stick...
Didnt like yhe third rhyme plus you wrote 11 lines anyways
Thinkin' you'll win? homies lying, even tho he's trying,
Dude still catch 8 in the chest like he's Kobe Bryant...
Right this was okay i see the number and how it relates to dude in question who is actually killing spree not kobe bryant still decent reference..
No rewinding, i murder you after all, this is mass assault,
Take this loss with a grain, man pass the salt...
Ehh lets see setup started well the ending was just not good enough the grain of salt concept was weak thats what i meant about ending
Im primed for stoppin kids, its time for droppin this rhyme apocalypse,
Im seeing through this bitch like a gynecologist...
Right this was a nice ending sortve i mean i see where your going with the multi but the idea of it just kind of lacks like who gives a fuck that killing spree is a gynecologist lol although its funny it just isnt true ya know what im saying
Vs.
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In this program I'm Hr's late Cos you nothin but wack, kid
U'll go "Good Night", Show...After you dead asleep I'll watch TV like Nothing had happened
It was alrihht but a tv program you were basically saying yo that cat money like a shit television program so i told him good night ehhh why does that fucking matter oh i see its a nameplay for showstopper thats fucking funny thats what showstopper didnt do lol it wasnt explained in great detail funny yho nonetheless
this clowns a jerk, they say U down to earth so I'll shoot till ya heads gone
Ur cock sucking addiction is deeply Rooted & after this thats what ya grave'll depend on
Ehh i see the multi i see the skill the setup endearing at most why whould i clown on dude and does he really suck dick i see the punch at the end but it wasnt worded correctly and came off flimsy and weak to kill the guy for that feel me
The 60 get jiggy on ya face, red dot means this man is a mark
Trust I'll expose that Show Girl...cos this beat downs a dance in the park
Right what is the 60 and would u jig him for it?? Sorry to ask questions anyways that set up was better cause a red dot doesnt mean anyyhing really and the punch was weak i mean i see multi and shit actually now the punch makes more sense the girl right connected with the dance in the park this was a better attempt
fuck ya life bro, I'm phsyco, the neck up I'll do gore shit
so watch me have this Kids head in my hand the same way as Matt Borges
That was okay set up i guess but i dont know who matt borges i suppose i could look it up 2 secs ehh it says hes a republican politician anyways having republican in the hands of yhe government have always been in their pockets thats noyhing new still i guess it was interesting at most
pussy ya garbage, easily ya lifes a dieing thing
this that Enclave sig, we'll see ya head by a string
Liked the reference to enclave will make sure to look out for that next time i see enclave online and posting
Bitches want you to stop creepin. Leaving ya face scard
When ever we hear a girl scream STOP!..we think show gettin a rape charge
Ehh i giess this was a decent ending kind of wanted more than just a nameplay but still i guess the concepts connected anyhow thanks for the read
Ok so im not saying eiyher of you were whack but that was an interesting battle and i dont want to pick either apart but it was decent battle... to me i think showstopper was an interesting read and just want to read what ive wrote so far first before voting you know what ive read now and because showstopper was the one who wrote 11 lines and came all around weaker of the two verses im going to check again and see what else it said right ive read this a third time and im going to go with killing spree and hope yall wont hate me for it.. but yeah valient effort showstopper but the one getting the v from me yhis time has got to be killing spree...
Vote: killing spree
a labyrinth of power.....
pussy ya garbage, easily ya lifes a dieing thing
this that Enclave sig, we'll see ya head by a string
vs
nothing
show...classic example of saying a lot while saying nothing... all your bars were just a regular read..absolutely zero personals and nothing aimed at your opponent..,.the Kobe Bryant/8 line was just overdone and terrible... keep trying...and focus ur rap on your opponent.... that's who u are battleling....
Im primed for stoppin kids, its time for droppin this rhyme apocalypse,
Im seeing through this bitch like a gynecologist...
lol but no.
vs
fuck ya life bro, I'm phsyco, the neck up I'll do gore shit
so watch me have this Kids head in my hand the same way as Matt Borges
only bar from kill that was legit was the Matt B bar but the rest was all rushed garbs. wish he woulda dropped some fire cause that's what we lacking in FL right now. Show has some growing to do. needs to get more creative with his bars and concepts. pretty ancient punches and concepts moving in his verse. easy win for kill spree.
v. kill spree
Show
Show no weakness, laying these solo speeches,
Whats not to tell here? The show's no secret...
More of a statement self hype bar not directed at opponent
Bro your deep in, im sick, with a flow so quick,
Leave you sceptic-ly confused, like oh, no shit,
Not bad i can vibe with this this bar in an audio battle fashion
Dudes broke, no tricks, hoppin' on dick like a pogo stick...
Thinkin' you'll win? homies lying, even tho he's trying,
Dude still catch 8 in the chest like he's Kobe Bryant...
More of a text bar here good similie its been done before but this is an example of a more correlated text bar
No rewinding, i murder you after all, this is mass assault,
Take this loss with a grain, man pass the salt...
Good flip but again just the way the rhyme scheme is setup and the overall direction of the bar its still speaking to me in an audio fashion
Im primed for stoppin kids, its time for droppin this rhyme apocalypse,
Im seeing through this bitch like a gynecologist...
Very played similie right here
KS
In this program I'm Hr's late Cos you nothin but wack, kid
U'll go "Good Night", Show...After you dead asleep I'll watch TV like Nothing had happened
Good nameplay nice flip good creativity according to impact of the bar
this clowns a jerk, they say U down to earth so I'll shoot till ya heads gone
Ur cock sucking addiction is deeply Rooted & after this thats what ya grave'll depend on
Seen this flip done before
The 60 get jiggy on ya face, red dot means this man is a mark
Trust I'll expose that Show Girl...cos this beat downs a dance in the park
Nice nameplay again man great impact good flip
fuck ya life bro, I'm phsyco, the neck up I'll do gore shit
so watch me have this Kids head in my hand the same way as Matt Borges
Nice metaphore direct hit
pussy ya garbage, easily ya lifes a dieing thing
this that Enclave sig, we'll see ya head by a string
Didnt like this reference
Bitches want you to stop creepin. Leaving ya face scard
When ever we hear a girl scream STOP!..we think show gettin a rape charge
No corny flip with the nameplay
Well show man ur whole structure and the way u formulate ur bars gave me the intention u do audio battling. Some of the bars even were original basic use of multies and the rhyme scheme. Text u have to come a little more creative its all about nameplays wordplays metaphorical comparisons the way u display the vocabulary content in ur bars. It has to have impact.
KS few nice flips u had according to wordplay n nameplay good impact overall creativity. Just more experienced here in the ways of formulating a text battle verse.
V/KS
I win by KO good battle @Showstopper540
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