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    Emily - Free

    Hold my hand, and say
    'This’ll make you better’
    Am I looking at you now?
    ...that the needle lays deep

    Regret, pours
    out of my veins
    Dripping placid patterns
    Reminding me of you

    I’m…

    Tying tied tears to my dreams

    Oh

    The Universe sang
    When I went white and cold
    Empathy surrendered a breath, at dawn
    she said... ‘Hate hasn’t glanced her, in eons’
    Words turned to ash, and crumbled in her breeze

    My chameleon Cosmos
    Fall on me

    I'm not prepared, to save a weary soul
    Nor to ask a question of the Sky…
    “Where have we learnt to live?”
    Love is not the same
    Now I embrace a knife

    On this somber Sunday morning
    Faith remains, the colour of your eyes
    Serenading peace
    With a zephyr in the air
    And you, in my heart
    Higher and higher
    We rise


    R.I.P

    Forgive me

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    Re: Emily - Free

    no.


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    Re: Emily - Free

    I say yes to this because of layers written in this. When you write like this your essence and soul is there almost like an Adele song. So yes


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    Re: Emily - Free

    @Jukon
    vote please


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    Re: Emily - Free

    Yeah, I vote yes too. I think it's fitting, the tone of this, along with the actual words. It meshed together well

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