10 Lines
Lines due
hr after check in
Authentic.
Elvis Freshley
10 Lines
Lines due
hr after check in
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Oh damn an hour deadline, I like that.
Ima drop 12. Match that. Check.
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Cool I'll be ready in 20 minutes tops
Hour up
Once I slide n’ take it, Straight fire, this guy’s cremation
Dopest thing about you the sig, n that’s my creation
Why, so, serious? You’ll get your jaw bent quick, cheery kid
If they ask who’s a joke ‘er who gets the bat, man… Authentic, period
You eccentric queery bitch, pushin 40 rockin DC is not G dude
No COD but I’ll pat trick n’ get my war bird on, leave Tic(k) body blue
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He the type to roll solo n pop pills in the club, chill with his cup
Feelin real tough but makes no eye contact when he’s filling it up
Til I show up with the .33 I’m Pip with the snub
Turn this emotional drunk inside out… one shot n Auth spillin’ his guts
Dip rounds in tiger’s blood, 2 in this half man have’m Charlie sheen dirty
He not walking straight, ya write in italics but your bars hardly lean worthy
Im battlin a soldier w.no rank, but nothin aboutchu private
cuz the dont ask dont tell rule make sure u homos dont riot
Elvis.. U chose that name, and already u got me in suspense
he had ghost writers n you need em. This not a coincidence
You a Freshley... dropped piece of shit. I'll lea u for the rats
And every bar u drop is garbage... i'm just cleanin up scraps
All your verses remind me of that tower in San Francisco, E
they lack foundation, so anything u drop neva'll be concrete
U not killin me, or CRB w.unfamiliar bars, u dont Know Ps (punches)
My g.. ya concepts more forced than big asses in small jeans..
you not a animal w.bars, u more like a domesticated pet, son
making ya stretched bars overbearing like bein mauled by one
Serial Keystyle Supect.
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both were ok but i got to go with elvis his punches i felt were more effective, especially the last bar.
This Vote does not count. Needs a better explanation
-Staff
Last edited by Spree; December 12th, 2016 at 09:55 PM
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end of battle....
You eccentric queery bitch, pushin 40 rockin DC is not G dude
No COD but I’ll pat trick n’ get my war bird on, leave Tic(k) body blue
Dip rounds in tiger’s blood, 2 in this half man have’m Charlie sheen dirty
He not walking straight, ya write in italics but your bars hardly lean worthy
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Nothing.
Authentic didn't even have a solid punch so this battle is a no brainer.
Vote - Elvis .... his 'lean worthy' line won it by itself
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This is not much of a contest. Another situation where there's 2 different levels...authentic while your verse is easy to read its very basic...simple lines, tons of filler, half the time the bars didnt flow well at all...no hard punchlines, no complexity. As basic as it could be. Lots of room for improvement tho, its a good thing. EFs punches were all around more clever, they hit harder, verse flowed fairly well, and simply just outclassed his opponent. Easy win in my oppinion. Luck to you both
Although I don't agree with the rule, it is there
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