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    meaninglessness

    I nearly fell
    down the stairs
    at the lie
    bury
    when eye
    saw a
    caution
    sign
    in
    your
    slippery
    eyes.

    Like everything
    depended
    on
    the
    black
    coughin'
    mummy
    that
    cuts
    me
    width
    words
    entombed.

    Blue eyes
    bruised skies
    as the
    day
    dies
    we
    arise
    in the
    end
    times.

    Unicorns
    are mirages
    that
    frequent
    the
    arid
    gold
    mind
    in time.

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    Re: meaninglessness

    Clever, I gotta say that I was trying to follow where this was going then taking a second read it's moving everywhere and nowhere at the same time. I like the style and structure of it as it keeps you in bounds reading this. This make you think about where did things change up but then going a few words later it revert back to the original thought. Dope shit...


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