late bloomer
Elvis Freshley
10 lines due tuesday midnight......house rules 3-0 ko and first ta 5 tko...
checkin due tonight, just so you dont no show and i cant get any credit for battle.... but aye check in tonight if you can... thanks...
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and here i am will post tomorrow night fa sure......
a labyrinth of power.....
Yep yep
right so im not sure who the fuck you even are
but holmes you like the american flag way i got you seeing stars
i know i got dope rhymes and ya shit is just pathetic
musta been jocking my shit and you aint even athletic
dog two bars and like a wrestler you already trying to tap out
you like new orleans way i gots ta put ya ass underground
faggot you dont have shit on me so dont try it bitch
ya lines aint relevant ya like chewing tabacco way ya gots ta "dip"
im like Ciara way i stay "two steps" ahead of ya hoe
got ya like a cup of joe... but fuck it u such a faggot you belong with gnomes...
10 if your showing....
a labyrinth of power.....
Read some of your battles, if I want an easy win you're the preferential selection
You lack credentials and inflection, watch this bitch get trumped... no presidential election
Mirror match, influential reflections, decided to box a heavyweight it's gon cost ya ribs
Ya lost it kid, the .50 take your hearing have you talkin' with your hands like joe boston vids
Wanna go tossin wits? If I roll with blades kid you better skate sooner, heard a great rumor
Jabs bruise ya fist lookin like eight tumors, sooner or later you'll be dope... late bloomer
Your bars worth a chuckle but fuck it I hate humor, if it's a fight I best see hands thrown soon
Or it's a damn slow doom, because some hits might miss ya Achilles, Or land on bloom (Orlando Bloom)
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I'll make you famous, strapped up ready to carve up this lame bitch
Serve him with beans, greens, potatoes, tomatoes you name it!
So this isn't going to get any votes? haha
@late bloomer you have 24 hours to post links or you will be DQ'd
*Naaaayyyy*
latebloomer didnt gave anything worth mentioning. No schemes, no name flips no personals. Freshley delivered with the name flips and personals i liked the orlando bloom line
V/Freshley
Nothing
Vs
Jos Boston vids was ill, i almost logged out once I read 'slow doom' lol.
Overall: fresh u always have one really dope punch but then everything else wack, fix that. This other nigga needs look at older 1-2 punch and LLL battles.
Vote: fresh
Late bloomer -50% for no links
right so im not sure who the fuck you even are
but holmes you like the american flag way i got you seeing stars
nah
i know i got dope rhymes and ya shit is just pathetic
musta been jocking my shit and you aint even athletic
dog two bars and like a wrestler you already trying to tap out
you like new orleans way i gots ta put ya ass underground
nah
faggot you dont have shit on me so dont try it bitch
ya lines aint relevant ya like chewing tabacco way ya gots ta "dip"
nah
im like Ciara way i stay "two steps" ahead of ya hoe
got ya like a cup of joe... but fuck it u such a faggot you belong with gnomes...
??
vs
Read some of your battles, if I want an easy win you're the preferential selection
You lack credentials and inflection, watch this bitch get trumped... no presidential election
decent
Mirror match, influential reflections, decided to box a heavyweight it's gon cost ya ribs
Ya lost it kid, the .50 take your hearing have you talkin' with your hands like joe boston vids
aight
Wanna go tossin wits? If I roll with blades kid you better skate sooner, heard a great rumor
Jabs bruise ya fist lookin like eight tumors, sooner or later you'll be dope... late bloomer
lol ok
Your bars worth a chuckle but fuck it I hate humor, if it's a fight I best see hands thrown soon
Or it's a damn slow doom, because some hits might miss ya Achilles, Or land on bloom (Orlando Bloom)
decent
I'll make you famous, strapped up ready to carve up this lame bitch
Serve him with beans, greens, potatoes, tomatoes you name it!
lol i like the closer.. You naaaaame it!!
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late bloomer I invite you to take the time to read through the closed battles area and study verses to help you get the overall concept on text battles, wordplay, and punchlines as it is much different than freestyling on the back of the short bus. Keep at it and practice the craft..
No need to kick a dead horse here.
Mirror match, influential reflections, decided to box a heavyweight it's gon cost ya ribs
Ya lost it kid, the .50 take your hearing have you talkin' with your hands like joe boston vids
^my fav
vote - authentic
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god damnit... vote - elvis
sorry no coffee
Best Rookie of Season 13 - Poet's Society
nothing
vs
Ya lost it kid, the .50 take your hearing have you talkin' with your hands like joe boston vids
Wanna go tossin wits? If I roll with blades kid you better skate sooner, heard a great rumor
wasn't feeling either verse,,, I like where Elvis is going with the direction, just cleaner executions and more clever bars...
Lb... once again...theres no substance in your verse...no creative concepts..and tired reused angles....u used the word "like" 5 times in that battle... u need to figure how to transform similes to metaphors... anyone can say "i'lll blah blah blah like blah blah"... not creative at all...
V- Elvis
Elvis wins
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