5 bars
Due Tuesday by mid night
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@late bloomer
Kill Spree
late Bloomer
5 bars
Due Tuesday by mid night
House rules
@late bloomer
Here
right holmes i dont think you ready for my shit
faggot you couldnt put shit together even if you were a paper clip
yo im dope you aint got shit on me little bitch
ive got expensive taste like robin hood only steal from the rich
go ahead faggot think you getting the win in this
ill have you feeling naustalgic way my rhymes are so vintage
go ahead faggot respond to this post if you wish
fuck you faggot you like the godfather way ya sleeping with da fish
dont even care if you think you can rhyme and ya shit is dope
holmie you must be a frog way i got ya feeling like ya about to croak.....
quick 10..
a labyrinth of power.....
Listen faggot....
do a 1-2 Step on ya head after ur face & my Knucks meet
So we wont see a RND of Bars from U like OG in the Punch League
You been garbage since birth..ya dad wants to kill & hide ya mother
But even she thinks U a bitch Late & should've got an abortion behind a dumpster
Vs me? you'll easily drown, try an stay afloat I'll make ya loins hurt
Till they find you @ the oceans floor for thinkin the world is your Oyster
wen the lead rip? they'll plant in ya head bitch, thats the 9 clap
You soft as a flower Bloom.. I'll make sure theres a service for you to shine @
Beat ya life to inches from death, guy yuh done
only close call here is the peramedics down the street when you dialed 911
Close casket
right holmes i dont think you ready for my shit
faggot you couldnt put shit together even if you were a paper clip
^^ Cookie dough soft
yo im dope you aint got shit on me little bitch
ive got expensive taste like robin hood only steal from the rich
^^ Are you implying he’s rich and you’re stealing the battle? Still weak even so.
go ahead faggot think you getting the win in this
ill have you feeling naustalgic way my rhymes are so vintage
^^ I think vintage/old would mean played out so I wouldn’t brag on that
go ahead faggot respond to this post if you wish
fuck you faggot you like the godfather way ya sleeping with da fish
^^ faggot faggot faggot one faggot two faggot red faggot blue faggot. Even if the bar wasn’t weak the excessive faggots would have ruined it
dont even care if you think you can rhyme and ya shit is dope
holmie you must be a frog way i got ya feeling like ya about to croak.....
^^ Nah man
You need to advance your material, I respect that you drop quickly and want to get a lot of battles under your belt. You remind me of someone that was new when I was last active on here Leroy or Leonard or some shit like that. Take a few less battles, read some of the other HOF battles and get an idea of what type of thing hits. Your concepts need to evolve a bunch man. I’m by no means great at this so take it with a grain of salt. We can all improve.
Listen faggot....
do a 1-2 Step on ya head after ur face & my Knucks meet
So we wont see a RND of Bars from U like OG in the Punch League
^^ Of course I say something about excessive use of faggot to start with “listen faggot” haha. I dig the personal even if it wasn’t necessarily aimed at him
You been garbage since birth..ya dad wants to kill & hide ya mother
But even she thinks U a bitch Late & should've got an abortion behind a dumpster
^^ I think you could have tied in ‘late’ a lot better. Late on her period etc. “Your mom should have aborted you” is played.
Vs me? you'll easily drown, try an stay afloat I'll make ya loins hurt
Till they find you @ the oceans floor for thinkin the world is your Oyster
^^ Kind of fed off his “sleeping with da fish” bar but a much better spin on it.
wen the lead rip? they'll plant in ya head bitch, thats the 9 clap
You soft as a flower Bloom.. I'll make sure theres a service for you to shine @
^^ Cool
Beat ya life to inches from death, guy yuh done
only close call here is the peramedics down the street when you dialed 911
^^ Concept is cool, really messed me up with the syllable count guy-yuh-done vs dy-yuled-9-1-1 but no less a nice closer
Late honestly lost this before I read Spree’s verse, dropping anything basically secured a win. The verse wasn’t anything flashy but got the job done.
Nothing
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do a 1-2 Step on ya head after ur face & my Knucks meet
So we wont see a RND of Bars from U like OG in the Punch League
Vs me? you'll easily drown, try an stay afloat I'll make ya loins hurt
Till they find you @ the oceans floor for thinkin the world is your Oyster
wen the lead rip? they'll plant in ya head bitch, thats the 9 clap
You soft as a flower Bloom.. I'll make sure theres a service for you to shine @
Late Bloomer you need to read some battles, your becoming the Frontline's punching bag. V/Kill
Badass.
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right holmes i dont think you ready for my shit
faggot you couldnt put shit together even if you were a paper clip
terrible...and simple
yo im dope you aint got shit on me little bitch
ive got expensive taste like robin hood only steal from the rich
same as above
go ahead faggot think you getting the win in this
ill have you feeling naustalgic way my rhymes are so vintage
repetitive here
go ahead faggot respond to this post if you wish
fuck you faggot you like the godfather way ya sleeping with da fish
dont even care if you think you can rhyme and ya shit is dope
holmie you must be a frog way i got ya feeling like ya about to croak.....
this is bad,,,,especially as a closer
youre gonna have to get out ya comfort zone and get a little more complex... think outside the box and entice readers...in your first, 3rd & 4th bar u refer to him as a faggot... the reading becomes repetitive... instead of callin hima faggot right out, use a clever metaphor or wordplay....
do a 1-2 Step on ya head after ur face & my Knucks meet
So we wont see a RND of Bars from U like OG in the Punch League
eh.....
You been garbage since birth..ya dad wants to kill & hide ya mother
But even she thinks U a bitch Late & should've got an abortion behind a dumpster
simple.... too simple
Vs me? you'll easily drown, try an stay afloat I'll make ya loins hurt
Till they find you @ the oceans floor for thinkin the world is your Oyster
bad.,,,,loins hurt?
wen the lead rip? they'll plant in ya head bitch, thats the 9 clap
You soft as a flower Bloom.. I'll make sure theres a service for you to shine @
this is decent and probably the only decent bar in this battle
Beat ya life to inches from death, guy yuh done
only close call here is the peramedics down the street when you dialed 911
again,,, nothing marvelous here..
bad battle overall... that one decent bar from KS was enough for the win...Late,,,keep practicing and try changing some things up
v_KS
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Nothing
vs
do a 1-2 Step on ya head after ur face & my Knucks meet
So we wont see a RND of Bars from U like OG in the Punch League
easy win for spree. LB need to tighten his bars up and think outside the box for more creative concepts and be more agreesive with personals. KS I need to see more hard hitting bars from you man. lets start bring the hammer and these cats the ropes. I read two good bars in this match and that's starting to be a trend.
v. kill
right holmes i dont think you ready for my shit
faggot you couldnt put shit together even if you were a paper clip
diss, but not a good punch
yo im dope you aint got shit on me little bitch
ive got expensive taste like robin hood only steal from the rich
no punch
go ahead faggot think you getting the win in this
ill have you feeling naustalgic way my rhymes are so vintage
no punch
go ahead faggot respond to this post if you wish
fuck you faggot you like the godfather way ya sleeping with da fish
diss, no punch
dont even care if you think you can rhyme and ya shit is dope
holmie you must be a frog way i got ya feeling like ya about to croak.....
cant be serious.. no punch, and bad closer.
vs
do a 1-2 Step on ya head after ur face & my Knucks meet
So we wont see a RND of Bars from U like OG in the Punch League
ok at best
You been garbage since birth..ya dad wants to kill & hide ya mother
But even she thinks U a bitch Late & should've got an abortion behind a dumpster
harsh, but no hard punch
Vs me? you'll easily drown, try an stay afloat I'll make ya loins hurt
Till they find you @ the oceans floor for thinkin the world is your Oyster
pretty decent
wen the lead rip? they'll plant in ya head bitch, thats the 9 clap
You soft as a flower Bloom.. I'll make sure theres a service for you to shine @
nah
Beat ya life to inches from death, guy yuh done
only close call here is the peramedics down the street when you dialed 911
decent closer
Kill got this battle easily for having punches.
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