Child-Raising Badass vs Latebloomer [CRB wins]

[Child-Raising Badass]

10 lines due in 6 hours

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[Child-Raising Badass]

pmd my verse to you.......... hope it is enough for a vote er i dont know might bury this account if it aint stoner enough of me to understand this rap thing.... anyways here i am and check in will have links coming as well

Why didn't you post your verse here silly goose

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Whatever,
I don't need to try hard, my old guard guarantees a win fool
Connecting rhythm with my structure my bars leave lil for leg room
Young Badass comes straight with the bitches that will take yo money
You have no chance at this, you should read rapbattles for dummies
My combos break this chump with haymakers to bump him
After I rob you i'll take your dough and roll through stores with a dumplin
I'm an abusive pimp, my open-back hand slap will brutalizes this hoe
This fag would strip in front of Colbert, so we could see Late's night show
Badass likes to shoot his gun so he can lve your misery in gloom
My shots will send this drag to Nirvana...so he's really in Bloom

[Late Bloom]

ehh feeling the nirvana references yo but...


Quote Originally Posted by late bloomer
Quote Originally Posted by Child-Raising Badass
When are you going to drop? I can drop now if you can



everything in your life everything your any good at...
i just reminsce times in battles you still aint keep a semi for this cat
the problem was you were taking me in all the wrong places
im like good gracious my room is a long table with two different cages
i decided to continue... the birds by alfred hitchcock
i was like fuck that my boy said he just flipped himself so ya best stay backing off
the mens room.... i was like shit i had to sucker this punk for some shit
coulda fucked ya but i still aint trying to run up on ya or fuck ya cause of a bitch...
right good thing he checked that before he decided to post it online.
fantastic he says that magic he himself voted for his realistic, kind of line up..type a guy..


stupid. u lose..

[Late Bloom]

Alright i voted on og maestro vs. Illunatic... and there were no other battles to vote on so i'll post another link to an open mic er sumn... give me 2 seconds thanks...

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And here u are.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...saac-Du-Soleil

[GrimmZReaper]

im not sure whats goin on here but...


Badass likes to shoot his gun so he can lve your misery in gloom
My shots will send this drag to Nirvana...so he's really in Bloom

vs

I don't know what latebloomer typed...u must've been high or trolling him


winner- CRB

vote will count

[Elvis Freshley]

Whatever,
I don't need to try hard, my old guard guarantees a win fool
Connecting rhythm with my structure my bars leave lil for leg room
^^ win fool/leg room mehhhh plus I’m not really seeing the punch

Young Badass comes straight with the bitches that will take yo money
You have no chance at this, you should read rapbattles for dummies
^^ Cringe man.

My combos break this chump with haymakers to bump him
After I rob you i'll take your dough and roll through stores with a dumpling
^^ dough/roll/dumpling could have been worse, not really hard hitting

I'm an abusive pimp, my open-back hand slap will brutalizes this hoe
This fag would strip in front of Colbert, so we could see Late's night show
^^ Not bad not bad wording was awkward but I can get behind it

Badass likes to shoot his gun so he can lve your misery in gloom
My shots will send this drag to Nirvana...so he's really in Bloom
^^ Nirvana punch a hair played and set up was weird “leave your misery in gloom” haha but it still connected a bit

Overall seemed either rushed or like you just didn’t take him serious. Either way the concepts could be evolved on and polished along with wording. Some extra words in most of your bars could have been cut entirely.

everything in your life everything your any good at...
i just reminsce times in battles you still aint keep a semi for this cat
^^ huh?

the problem was you were taking me in all the wrong places
im like good gracious my room is a long table with two different cages
^^ Bro, what?

i decided to continue... the birds by alfred hitchcock
i was like fuck that my boy said he just flipped himself so ya best stay backing off
^^ I get the tie in cages/birds but it doesn’t make sense in either bar, and Hitchcock/backing off is too slanted for me regardless of accent. Flat.

the mens room.... i was like shit i had to sucker this punk for some shit
coulda fucked ya but i still aint trying to run up on ya or fuck ya cause of a bitch...

^^ Did you just say you stole his poop? Then say you could have fucked him, but won’t because you don’t fuck other men over a girl? Bro… what?

right good thing he checked that before he decided to post it online.
fantastic he says that magic he himself voted for his realistic, kind of line up..type a guy..
^^ Nah

Overall – I left similar feedback in the KnowP battle. You’ve got to reevaluate how you approach these battles man. You’re simply not hitting right now.

[Lenox]

Nothing


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Nothing

Overall: boring battle. No punches connected but the anime weirdo def had better attempts, last bar almost connected for me as well but not quite.

Vote: child. Bloomer take a look at old LLL battles for a better understanding of text

[Authentic.]

I don't need to try hard, my old guard guarantees a win fool
Connecting rhythm with my structure my bars leave lil for leg room
decent
Young Badass comes straight with the bitches that will take yo money
You have no chance at this, you should read rapbattles for dummies
nah
My combos break this chump with haymakers to bump him
After I rob you i'll take your dough and roll through stores with a dumplin
coulda worded that better
I'm an abusive pimp, my open-back hand slap will brutalizes this hoe
This fag would strip in front of Colbert, so we could see Late's night show
ok at best
Badass likes to shoot his gun so he can lve your misery in gloom
My shots will send this drag to Nirvana...so he's really in Bloom
lol ok

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everything in your life everything your any good at...
i just reminsce times in battles you still aint keep a semi for this cat
no
the problem was you were taking me in all the wrong places
im like good gracious my room is a long table with two different cages
no
i decided to continue... the birds by alfred hitchcock
i was like fuck that my boy said he just flipped himself so ya best stay backing off
no
the mens room.... i was like shit i had to sucker this punk for some shit
coulda fucked ya but i still aint trying to run up on ya or fuck ya cause of a bitch...
no
right good thing he checked that before he decided to post it online.
fantastic he says that magic he himself voted for his realistic, kind of line up..type a guy..
??


I dont even understand half of LB's verse... crazy shit. CRB got this with a better verse and way better attempts.

[Enclave]

neither of you had any quotable lines to be honest. CRB seems to have a better grip on what a text battle is supposed to be like though.. if i HAD to quote from you it would be:

I'm an abusive pimp, my open-back hand slap will brutalizes this hoe
This fag would strip in front of Colbert, so we could see Late's night show

and that was terrible...


Keep practicing.


vote - crb

[Late Bloom]

tsss lets go again holmie no one liked this... ill have something if you want to go again...

[Eessessoh]

I don't need to try hard, my old guard guarantees a win fool
Connecting rhythm with my structure my bars leave lil for leg room
i hope there aint much truth in that 1st line....this was just rhyming and not very well

Young Badass comes straight with the bitches that will take yo money
You have no chance at this, you should read rapbattles for dummies
cornball shit....no punch

My combos break this chump with haymakers to bump him
After I rob you i'll take your dough and roll through stores with a dumplin
no

I'm an abusive pimp, my open-back hand slap will brutalizes this hoe
This fag would strip in front of Colbert, so we could see Late's night show
better attempt at using a concept but didnt hit much

Badass likes to shoot his gun so he can lve your misery in gloom
My shots will send this drag to Nirvana...so he's really in Bloom
probably best bar of the battle

vs.

everything in your life everything your any good at...
i just reminsce times in battles you still aint keep a semi for this cat
not sure i get this...end rhyme really simple.

the problem was you were taking me in all the wrong places
im like good gracious my room is a long table with two different cages
doesnt feel like a battle line

i decided to continue... the birds by alfred hitchcock
i was like fuck that my boy said he just flipped himself so ya best stay backing off
this was more aggressive but not really a punch

the mens room.... i was like shit i had to sucker this punk for some shit
coulda fucked ya but i still aint trying to run up on ya or fuck ya cause of a bitch...
threatening to fuck him isnt gonna work

right good thing he checked that before he decided to post it online.
fantastic he says that magic he himself voted for his realistic, kind of line up..type a guy..
really wordy and not sure what this means

CRB wasn't good but wins here just for attempting punches. Vote:CBR

[Spree]

CRB wins