@Barcotic @Elvis Freshley can yall edit your votes and explain them so they can count.
He claims he's a soldier...but I've warred in places he can't dabble
Only time he was Pulling Rank is when he jerked KnowP off to get to the champ battle
^^ Clean punch, solid delivery
^& the champ battle is Authentic vs. Boyz...yo, I know it's too soon,
But we WILL see Boyz Get The Belt...then Authentic old ass will tell him to go to his room
^^ Dope concept, delivery was sub par imo, seemed a bit wordy
For God's sake, A LOT... can't tell if his internet gangster shit is fake or not
But with Sketchy Concepts like his, I'll pull up with a .9 & he'll pull up...with a Paper Glock
^^ Sketchy/paper was clean, didn’t like the beginning of your set-up but overall still landed.
^Tbh, I don't even got to kill him, I'll get it done without reaching for a weapon
Message the shoota & then Professor will Chalk Boyz Up when I'm Teaching Him A Lesson
^^ Meh.. unless there’s someone here named professor and there’s some side beef there in which case could be dope. As it stands this fell a bit flat
^His body will be sitting in a classroom chair, limp, while he stay leaning
So when you see a Boy' With An Empty Stare Up At The Ceiling, he's NOT Day Dreaming
^^ Sticking with the school scheme, this was pretty dope
I blame this sorry ass bitch for the reason modern-day Hip-Hop is wack as fuck
It started after the Decline Of The Geto, Boyz became Juvenile & the industry Backed It Up
^^ I’ll forgive the hip-hop is wack aspect (it’s not). This scheme could have been dope as hell if Juvi was in Geto Boys (he was hot boyz)
Then that 1-2 champ battle loss left him in his feelings + prescribed with a therapist
It was traumatic... how we saw 'Bombz Cover Up Boyz more than Teenage ISIS Terrorists
^^ Again cool concept the delivery was mediocre. teenage isis terrorists just seems so long winded.
& stop Playing Games, putting your rhymes in bold shows you're selfish within
We all know that you wish your wack ass could Cheat, Codes still won't Help You To Win
^^ I dig this, solid closer
…and ya consider HIM a vet??.., think a sec, if all that OG HYPING IS OFFICIAL
Shit, I don’t know what other magazines you subscribe to, but clearly RECYCLING IS AN ISSUE
^^ Absolute fire
so you Mod the 1-2 threads but can’t win the belt?? that just SUMS HIS FLAWS
now how the fuck you in MY league, when u ass barely even BELONGS IN YOURS
^^ flaws/yours is a slant but I’ve met plenty that say “yours” in a way that makes this work so in that case this is dope
You got heart for this title?, well its over, wait for this lynching & the HUFFIN’ STOP
Cause having guts….only means you’ll hang over the belt…..that’s a MUFFIN TOP
^^ Dope
And I’d turn everyone of your Architexts to a carcass next if they GETTIN’ RECKLESS
feed 'em the toast and put 'em to rest,... BITCH!.. BnB stands for BED 'N BREAKFAST
^^ Okay execution was lacking a bit, I read it in the Breaking Bad kid’s voice
This bodybaggin’ goin' remind me of when im fuckin ya bitch and GET THE NUT
Soon’s I bust, I’ll toss the magnum, shove this dick inside and ZIP IT UP
^^ I don’t really get the zip aspect of the analogy
Sharp shooter, it’s just dyin’ ta ring if what I blew blaze ya and got O in heart
So if ^^THAT ZIP line failed….u still die in the ring like the Blue Blazer as OWEN HART
^^ Yikes, dope
if u followed my path to the belt,..those casualties are why they had to put BLACK IN THE FINAL
see, me and ya comic book cover the same,...I left a cold trail that leads BACK TO THE TITLE
^^ Sick even if you used back in the set-up and punch
Going forward, ya goin stop matching Boyz against these regressing OLD RAPPERS
Of course ya career’s in reverse, hey dumbass….even your name is “GO” BACKWARDS!!
^^ hahahaha nasty
OG wasn’t “bad” by any means, I think he definitely got finessed here though.
Vote Boyz pretty handedly
He claims he's a soldier...but I've warred in places he can't dabble
Only time he was Pulling Rank is when he jerked KnowP off to get to the champ battle
^^ kinda wordy second line but relevant and personal...not bad
^& the champ battle is Authentic vs. Boyz...yo, I know it's too soon,
But we WILL see Boyz Get The Belt...then Authentic old ass will tell him to go to his room
^^ Dug the concept but wish second line were worded better...woulda hit harder
For God's sake, A LOT... can't tell if his internet gangster shit is fake or not
But with Sketchy Concepts like his, I'll pull up with a .9 & he'll pull up...with a Paper Glock
^^ a little bit of humor but concept not as strong as first two bars
^Tbh, I don't even got to kill him, I'll get it done without reaching for a weapon
Message the shoota & then Professor will Chalk Boyz Up when I'm Teaching Him A Lesson
^^I see the professor/chalk/lesson, idk much about the chalk boyz so unless there's a tie in to that or some personal shit Im missing, this was just ok
^His body will be sitting in a classroom chair, limp, while he stay leaning
So when you see a Boy' With An Empty Stare Up At The Ceiling, he's NOT Day Dreaming
^^ not bad
I blame this sorry ass bitch for the reason modern-day Hip-Hop is wack as fuck
It started after the Decline Of The Geto, Boyz became Juvenile & the industry Backed It Up
^^It coulda been fire if it was a Hot Boys ref instead of a Geto Boys ref.
Then that 1-2 champ battle loss left him in his feelings + prescribed with a therapist
It was traumatic... how we saw 'Bombz Cover Up Boyz more than Teenage ISIS Terrorists
^^ aight concept but the wording could be cleaner
& stop Playing Games, putting your rhymes in bold shows you're selfish within
We all know that you wish your wack ass could Cheat, Codes still won't Help You To Win
^^ not a bad closer...back to the quality you had in the first few bars
…and ya consider HIM a vet??.., think a sec, if all that OG HYPING IS OFFICIAL
Shit, I don’t know what other magazines you subscribe to, but clearly RECYCLING IS AN ISSUE
^^ Personal, relevant....subscribe put a decent twist on a done concept. good bar
so you Mod the 1-2 threads but can’t win the belt?? that just SUMS HIS FLAWS
now how the fuck you in MY league, when u ass barely even BELONGS IN YOURS
^^ sometimes the simplest shit hits hardest....i liked this
You got heart for this title?, well its over, wait for this lynching & the HUFFIN’ STOP
Cause having guts….only means you’ll hang over the belt…..that’s a MUFFIN TOP
^^ Great concept
And I’d turn everyone of your Architexts to a carcass next if they GETTIN’ RECKLESS
feed 'em the toast and put 'em to rest,... BITCH!.. BnB stands for BED 'N BREAKFAST
^^ wasnt feeling this one as much. execution was there but it didnt hit like first few
This bodybaggin’ goin' remind me of when im fuckin ya bitch and GET THE NUT
Soon’s I bust, I’ll toss the magnum, shove this dick inside and ZIP IT UP
^^ this was ok but magnum/bust play been done a lot
Sharp shooter, it’s just dyin’ ta ring if what I blew blaze ya and got O in heart
So if ^^THAT ZIP line failed….u still die in the ring like the Blue Blazer as OWEN HART
^^ Great tie in to the last line and the owen hart scheme was done well
if u followed my path to the belt,..those casualties are why they had to put BLACK IN THE FINAL
see, me and ya comic book cover the same,...I left a cold trail that leads BACK TO THE TITLE
^^ Bar of the battle imo
Going forward, ya goin stop matching Boyz against these regressing OLD RAPPERS
Of course ya career’s in reverse, hey dumbass….even your name is “GO” BACKWARDS!!
^^ nice closer
Good battle.....one just was more consistently harder hitting.
Vote: Bnb
He claims he's a soldier...but I've warred in places he can't dabble
Only time he was Pulling Rank is when he jerked KnowP off to get to the champ battle
this was aight...kind of weak tbh. jerked knowp off is a childish diss
^& the champ battle is Authentic vs. Boyz...yo, I know it's too soon,
But we WILL see Boyz Get The Belt...then Authentic old ass will tell him to go to his room
this was wordy as fuck but i liked the play. so this was ajab
For God's sake, A LOT... can't tell if his internet gangster shit is fake or not
But with Sketchy Concepts like his, I'll pull up with a .9 & he'll pull up...with a Paper Glock
No this was gay as fuck
^Tbh, I don't even got to kill him, I'll get it done without reaching for a weapon
Message the shoota & then Professor will Chalk Boyz Up when I'm Teaching Him A Lesson
again wordy as fuck the concepts nice but poorly executed
^His body will be sitting in a classroom chair, limp, while he stay leaning
So when you see a Boy' With An Empty Stare Up At The Ceiling, he's NOT Day Dreaming
lol this was nice. savage
I blame this sorry ass bitch for the reason modern-day Hip-Hop is wack as fuck
It started after the Decline Of The Geto, Boyz became Juvenile & the industry Backed It Up
not a fan of this at all. to much cramed into one bar. plus its really not a diss
Then that 1-2 champ battle loss left him in his feelings + prescribed with a therapist
It was traumatic... how we saw 'Bombz Cover Up Boyz more than Teenage ISIS Terrorists
another BOYZ play? getting old bro...the personal is cool concepts cool.
& stop Playing Games, putting your rhymes in bold shows you're selfish within
We all know that you wish your wack ass could Cheat, Codes still won't Help You To Win
basic play here. miss for me
vs
…and ya consider HIM a vet??.., think a sec, if all that OG HYPING IS OFFICIAL
Shit, I don’t know what other magazines you subscribe to, but clearly RECYCLING IS AN ISSUE
This was dope
so you Mod the 1-2 threads but can’t win the belt?? that just SUMS HIS FLAWS
now how the fuck you in MY league, when u ass barely even BELONGS IN YOURS
decent flip...bit light tho
You got heart for this title?, well its over, wait for this lynching & the HUFFIN’ STOP
Cause having guts….only means you’ll hang over the belt…..that’s a MUFFIN TOP
Dope
And I’d turn everyone of your Architexts to a carcass next if they GETTIN’ RECKLESS
feed 'em the toast and put 'em to rest,... BITCH!.. BnB stands for BED 'N BREAKFAST
nah...Concepts cool the punch is wack tho
This bodybaggin’ goin' remind me of when im fuckin ya bitch and GET THE NUT
Soon’s I bust, I’ll toss the magnum, shove this dick inside and ZIP IT UP
miss. bar is just basic
Sharp shooter, it’s just dyin’ ta ring if what I blew blaze ya and got O in heart
So if ^^THAT ZIP line failed….u still die in the ring like the Blue Blazer as OWEN HART
this was cool. i've seen the blue blazer/heard it before.
if u followed my path to the belt,..those casualties are why they had to put BLACK IN THE FINAL
see, me and ya comic book cover the same,...I left a cold trail that leads BACK TO THE TITLE
cool
Going forward, ya goin stop matching Boyz against these regressing OLD RAPPERS
Of course ya career’s in reverse, hey dumbass….even your name is “GO” BACKWARDS!!
dope
Overall - OG was a bit lazy on wording his bars and 80% of his verse was name plays. BNB had some nice personals with only a few misses. I got BNB with the all around doper verse
v/BNB
4-1 BNB upppin for more votes.
will close Monday regardless and winner will be announced.
Last edited by KnowP; November 28th, 2016 at 11:33 AM
BNB is the FLT6 champion. Congrats slime!