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    SirVent
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    we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.

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    Re: typical

    I found
    the bottoms of bottles

    good start.

    I followed the voices
    an echo inside, a turn of the tides
    swallows me whole and throws me aside.

    I like the tides bit.

    eaten alive, I inhaled the water,
    only hoping it
    holds me down longer.

    kind of funny, actually.

    the bubbles would stop,
    my anger gets lost.
    and into the ocean
    my souls been absolved.
    dissolved and in pieces,
    i sink into the abyss,
    filling a void
    with emptiness.

    pretty good poem man, liked the weird rhythm that it had...

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