Authentic. vs Boyznblack [Boyz wins]

**KnowP** · October 28th, 2016, 01:30 PM

FRONTLINES PRESENTS:
CHAMP MATCH

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@Authentic

vs

@Boyznblack

House Rules
Check-in by Wednesday 11:59pm EST
Verses due by Friday 11:59pm EST
One 24 hr extension available upon request
16 lines min.
20 lines max.

good luck!!

**GrimmZReaper** · October 28th, 2016, 02:04 PM

Check...verses are due tonight?

**KnowP** · October 28th, 2016, 06:49 PM

Originally Posted by Boyznblack

Check...verses are due tonight?

Due next Friday the 4 th

**Authentic.** · October 28th, 2016, 10:37 PM

Check

**Authentic.** · October 29th, 2016, 06:46 PM

I got 12. Guage for you...

**Authentic.** · November 4th, 2016, 10:23 AM

Keystyle.

With my hands round ya neck, Im bringin the snap-back
while this mitchell be in Atlanta...
n couldn't 'ness w.the top if you wore u a fitted cap
S'why I had ya bitch legs up... Like when Jordan score
Now she bussin the whole team, like we had her on tour
Gemini! Split personalities.. so I don't need the homies
Fight w.u then turn around n sock ya manz like Mick Foley
Bring the flame, 'cause u neva brought fire, on no degree
so do like him n Wade ya options, 'cause you got no Heat
N the cases I keep. We pop-cans til we're feelin it hurt
while u wouldn't beer cans if you had the Steel Reserved
Turn u into one of The Shadows, but u no Batman, dude
I lea' boy body covered in black...
for tryn assassinate my character, like I'm Ra's Al Ghul..
Ya whole verse is like this punch... wtf are you doing??
ya bars unflavored like eating a clock... time consuming
I'm champ, n comin for my spot i'll have u bent up quicker
than a group of drunk gmynasts attempting to play Twister
The shells expose the truth, so when he open up.. peep it!
put a whole in black so big, u'd think it was a dark secret
Like Carl you got a L in the end, ima keep ya winslow after
voters see you got a rare condition...
that you can't manage in this day-n-age, like Family Matters

**GrimmZReaper** · November 4th, 2016, 11:28 AM

Boyznblack]BoyzNblack vs Authentic AKA Charles Darwin....

...listen Grandpa....

Originally Posted by Authentic.

.. Had a death in the family. Thats why I aint been active..

Originally Posted by Authentic.

He aint never wronged nobody.. Drunk driver hit him.

my condolensces, but boyz been poppin' lately , so u goin have to get USED TO THE BLOOD
stay in ya lane..or BOTH ya autopsys goin' read the same,..." killed by a DUDE WITH A BUZZ"!!

if you aint get what that reference is, check ya rear view & see what these gun PELLETS DID
i'll have this bitch shakin, lookin over the shoulder...u could stunt double as CHEMIST SIG

(new avi?.... nice, but)
won the belt and the picture changed, u can throw shade but i'll DO BETTER
cause letting that bull go to ya head...will only get you cap 'n to a NEW ERA

you had a decade long dry spell, so how could top tier ever be where this POOR BASTARDS AT/
...only to reign for a week, but anyone...whether man or woman coulda FORECASTED THAT

Originally Posted by KnowP

hey, Authentic dropped 20 lines and you only dropped 14. you need 6 more

P, you should know Blacks method by now, its all planned but if you SURELY WONDER
I purposely left out room, the other 6 will get filled by the FEET HE'S BURIED UNDER

I keep serving these poor souls and this scene seems so familiar when the MISSIONS DONE/
oh I get it, every thanksgiving,... its the same old soup kitchen, just a DIFFERENT BUM

fuck your nursery rhymes, one more ring around the rosey & this PRICK GETTIN DEALT
nope, they put boyz in the ring with Ronda Rousey, a manly BITCH WITH A BELT

an old bitch tryin to fuck with young boyz, such a cougar,,,& what u BRING FOR THE FIGHT?
I do all my talking with 2 straps on me, BnB .....A.K.A the Larry KING 'O THE SITE

i'll go gorilla if this monkey swings, you'll see saw'd offs as i slide with a CARNAL ATTACK/
i can put charles in that chair or get professor X'd and let ya'll MARVEL AT THAT

it's too easy,...no?... then read that last bar again if i left Y'ALL IN THE DARK
monkey swings? see saw? slide?...fuck a battle, that was a WALK IN THE PARK

***ILLunatic*** · November 4th, 2016, 04:44 PM

With my hands round ya neck, Im bringin the snap-back
while this mitchell be in Atlanta...
n couldn't 'ness w.the top if you wore u a fitted cap

Weak, very ineffective

S'why I had ya bitch legs up... Like when Jordan score
Now she bussin the whole team, like we had her on tour

Very weak

Gemini! Split personalities.. so I don't need the homies
Fight w.u then turn around n sock ya manz like Mick Foley

Concept could have been executed way better

Bring the flame, 'cause u neva brought fire, on no degree
so do like him n Wade ya options, 'cause you got no Heat

Not feeling it

N the cases I keep. We pop-cans til we're feelin it hurt
while u wouldn't beer cans if you had the Steel Reserved

Wtf?

Turn u into one of The Shadows, but u no Batman, dude
I lea' boy body covered in black...
for tryn assassinate my character, like I'm Ra's Al Ghul..

Another concept that could have been executed better

Ya whole verse is like this punch... wtf are you doing??
ya bars unflavored like eating a clock... time consuming

Too bland

I'm champ, n comin for my spot i'll have u bent up quicker
than a group of drunk gmynasts attempting to play Twister

One of, if not the worst line so far

The shells expose the truth, so when he open up.. peep it!
put a whole in black so big, u'd think it was a dark secret

Not feeling it

Like Carl you got a L in the end, ima keep ya winslow after
voters see you got a rare condition...
that you can't manage in this day-n-age, like Family Matters

Concept was decent Theo-redically (see what I did there), but it just wasn't there for me

my condolensces, but boyz been poppin' lately so u goin have to get USED TO THE BLOOD
stay in ya lane..or ya autopsy goin' read the same,..." killed by a DUDE WITH A BUZZ"!!

Fucked up but kinda funny...

if you aint get what that reference is, check ya rear view & see what these gun PELLETS DID
i'll have this bitch shakin, lookin over the shoulder...u could stunt double as CHEMIST SIG

Weak

won the belt and the picture changed, u can throw shade but i'll DO BETTER
cause letting that bull go to ya head...will only get you cap 'n to a NEW ERA

Ok concept but it wasn't executed well here

fuck your nursery rhymes, one more ring around the rosey & this PRICK GETTIN DEALT
nope, they put boyz in the ring with Ronda Rousey, a manly BITCH WITH A BELT

Wtf, no

an old bitch tryin to fuck with young boyz, such a cougar,,,& what u BRING FOR THE FIGHT?
I do all my talking with 2 straps on me, BnB .....A.K.A the Larry KING 'O THE SITE

I get it (suspenders/straps) but it could have been better

i'll go gorilla if this monkey swings, you'll see saw'd offs as i slide with a CARNAL ATTACK/
i can put charles in that chair or get professor X'd and let ya'll MARVEL AT THAT

No... not feeling it

it's too easy,...no?... then read that last bar again if i left Y'ALL IN THE DARK
monkey swings? see saw? slide?...fuck a battle, that was a WALK IN THE PARK

Very weak ending...

Bar of the battle for me was dude with a buzz, but other than that it was nothing but decent concepts and failed executions or weak fillers.
Consistency I feel goes to Authentic but boyznblack stands out more due to his opening punch and his somewhat better wording. Very close but I edge it to Bnb

Vote - bnb

**KnowP** · November 7th, 2016, 05:26 PM

@Barcotic @Letterman @Joe Boston @OG Maestro @Cred @Jukon @Kill Spree @Unfukwitable

can you drop a good vote in here please. need this closed asap!

**KnowP** · November 8th, 2016, 06:10 PM

Originally Posted by KnowP

@Barcotic @Letterman @Joe Boston @OG Maestro @Cred @Jukon @Kill Spree @Unfukwitable

can you drop a good vote in here please. need this closed asap!

hey ummmm can you muhfukkas vote!?!?!?

**Child-Raising Badass** · November 9th, 2016, 10:16 AM

S'why I had ya bitch legs up... Like when Jordan score
Now she bussin the whole team, like we had her on tour
Gemini! Split personalities.. so I don't need the homies
Fight w.u then turn around n sock ya manz like Mick Foley
Bring the flame, 'cause u neva brought fire, on no degree
so do like him n Wade ya options, 'cause you got no Heat
N the cases I keep. We pop-cans til we're feelin it hurt
while u wouldn't beer cans if you had the Steel Reserved

vs

you had a decade long dry spell, so how could top tier ever be where this POOR BASTARDS AT/
...only to reign for a week, but anyone...whether man or woman coulda FORECASTED THAT
i'll go gorilla if this monkey swings, you'll see saw'd offs as i slide with a CARNAL ATTACK/
i can put charles in that chair or get professor X'd and let ya'll MARVEL AT THAT

Overall Authentic had a good rhythm that kept you in suspense. BnB's seemed more forced and lacked delivery that would make his bars hit harder. BnB made i good effort I liked what he was trying to do.

V/ Authentic

**KnowP** · November 11th, 2016, 11:50 AM

we need votes @Chemist @Enbombz @Kill Spree @Merem @Packed Graves

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Bring the flame, 'cause u neva brought fire, on no degree
so do like him n Wade ya options, 'cause you got no Heat
Turn u into one of The Shadows, but u no Batman, dude
I lea' boy body covered in black...
for tryn assassinate my character, like I'm Ra's Al Ghul..
The shells expose the truth, so when he open up.. peep it!
put a whole in black so big, u'd think it was a dark secret

vs

my condolensces, but boyz been poppin' lately , so u goin have to get USED TO THE BLOOD
stay in ya lane..or BOTH ya autopsys goin' read the same,..." killed by a DUDE WITH A BUZZ"!!
P, you should know Blacks method by now, its all planned but if you SURELY WONDER
I purposely left out room, the other 6 will get filled by the FEET HE'S BURIED UNDER
fuck your nursery rhymes, one more ring around the rosey & this PRICK GETTIN DEALT
nope, they put boyz in the ring with Ronda Rousey, a manly BITCH WITH A BELT
i'll go gorilla if this monkey swings, you'll see saw'd offs as i slide with a CARNAL ATTACK/
i can put charles in that chair or get professor X'd and let ya'll MARVEL AT THAT
it's too easy,...no?... then read that last bar again if i left Y'ALL IN THE DARK
monkey swings? see saw? slide?...fuck a battle, that was a WALK IN THE PARK
^FIRE!!

vote. BnB (gotta run, i'll break down later)

**Merem** · November 11th, 2016, 12:00 PM

Like Carl you got a L in the end, ima keep ya winslow after
voters see you got a rare condition...
that you can't manage in this day-n-age, like Family Matters

This was my favorite bar, had me laughing. It's too wordy but it was good. It's how I felt about the majority of your verse not to mention that it hurts when you say you keystyled it.

vs.

P, you should know Blacks method by now, its all planned but if you SURELY WONDER
I purposely left out room, the other 6 will get filled by the FEET HE'S BURIED UNDER
I keep serving these poor souls and this scene seems so familiar when the MISSIONS DONE/
oh I get it, every thanksgiving,... its the same old soup kitchen, just a DIFFERENT BUM
fuck your nursery rhymes, one more ring around the rosey & this PRICK GETTIN DEALT
nope, they put boyz in the ring with Ronda Rousey, a manly BITCH WITH A BELT

these are some of the bars that hit that i also liked. I wasn't feeling some of the formatting but who cares this was well thought out as a punch and not a stretch.

V BNB