October WOTM Challenge
Register

User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 14 of 14
  1. #1
    Revolution II OG Maestro's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2013
    Posts
    8,741
    Streak
    1
    Battle Record
    91-46
    Blog Entries
    1
    Awards SS Season Champion Haiku Season Champion 75+ Wins Haiku Champion FL Champion 1-2 League Champion - 1-2 Champion OM HOF PC HOF SS Champion

    Lightbulb October WOTM Challenge

    Regulations:

    Only one verse submitted per user.
    16 line limit
    Must be submitted by October 31st 11:59 EST.

    Rewards:

    +1 win added to your battle record
    Cypher award medal
    One of your pieces featured and stickied



    This weeks topic:

    Last edited by KnowP; October 14th, 2016 at 10:11 AM

  2. #2
    ::..VOCABULUS..:: 143's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Location
    The Desert
    Posts
    2,162
    Battle Record
    8-9
    Awards SS Champion PC HOF OM HOF

    Re: OM October Topical Cypher Challenge

    Fire of metal, spits of opposition
    Singing of hollowed throats of fallen ammunition
    Glistening the rhetoric, contraband from the just
    Poised in the present to meld with the dust
    You could here a singular voice, foreign to my ears
    Was he employing us to desist or let the devil swipe
    Shadows of hijabs persist to slow war's gears
    Then cast beveled pipes in the name of nestled life
    Light shows are countered, now the singular voice struck
    His background blood splattered, the grizzled body slumped
    We advance, attention defies deficit, double in savings
    Caution leads the dogs among the shells and the slayings
    3 feet from a floored window, cries of innocence's fear
    Safety cleared, we stand ready 5, persistence moves near
    A dirt covered child with an AR pointed in futile
    Then Sargent Cransome lets off a projectile.......


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    Best Topical Writer: 143

  3. #3

    Re: OM October Topical Cypher Challenge



    IM NEW SO DON'T KNOW IF IM SUPPOSED TO POST HERE YET....

    RIP FLESH, LEAVE A CRIME SCENE FRESH, NO CONTEST
    LAVA SPILLIN ON MY CHEST, HELLA DIAMONDS ON MY CREST
    CUT A BOY THROAT, BOAT OF THEM KEYS
    GOT YA BOI RICH AS FUCK, MASK ON WITH A HANDFULL OF Gz
    THERES NO EASE LIKE THE SQUEEZE OF A TRIGGA
    BIG 40, AK BUSTIN HOLD THAT DOWN LIL NIGGA,
    I GOT GIRLS IN TWO PIECES LIKE THIS SAN JOSE
    CUP'OF PURPLE, HOP IN THE SPYDER START DOING THEM CIRCLES
    IM OUTTA HOUSTON, YOU BOYZ BETTA NOT CAP
    I FUCK YO SHAWTY DOGGYSTYLE MAKE THAT ASS CHEEK FLAP
    BACK AND FORTH WHILE IM GRABBIN THEM TITTIES
    I PUT MY SLAB ON THE CANDY COATED COMMITEE
    NAWF SIDE IM GUN RIDE FOR MY CITY,
    IM A TRILL REPRESENTA, THROWIN UP THAT H
    YOU OTHER BOYS IS BEGGINERS, EITHER THAT OR YOU FAKE
    ITS WRITTIN ALL OVER YOUR FACE LIKE A HERPES OUTBREAK

  4. #4
    Hop Off KnowP's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    AZ
    Age
    34
    Posts
    18,915
    Streak
    1
    Battle Record
    271-126
    Blog Entries
    1
    Awards Cypher Winner 1-2 League Champion FL Champion Golden Glove Champion 200+ Wins

    Re: OM October Topical Cypher Challenge

    intentions of living behind enemy decisions
    lethal precision, equal in crimson, people will listen
    once bullets start flying, the cruelest start dying
    leaving prudence in a pool of sharks hiding
    what I encompass in my compass is substance
    runnin with armed soldiers who come from nothin
    bottom of the barrel, left and forgotten
    obstacles are often the options of the rotten
    dodging our sodem to make it to the promise land
    broken bones and dreams lead us to our promises
    its obvious we are soldiers or fortune
    either loading rifles or coffins with corpses
    I know that its morbid, we never asked for this
    country to go south, now we're savages

  5. #5
    Cypher Alumni Sammy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2015
    Location
    Cambridge, MA
    Posts
    623
    Awards PC HOF

    Re: OM October Topical Cypher Challenge

    Josh cares. Good'ol country boy
    Sunday school and a cross bearer
    summer haze. mosquitoes. Lust. Not Josh.
    Fear's for people who aint scared to die
    mirage of yesteryear's vignette would declare "goodbye...."

    "...by two, men! don't stop here! I do NOT care!
    even if you aint breathing i want to see ur ass outta here!
    Josh, the clear!"
    "No can do, sir! Santiago's been shot near the canopy"
    "Damn it! See if you can scout a spots for air support"
    "yeah of course, sir.."

    the dance of griefs; two steps, entangled. flee.
    for all the soldiers who are not here
    remember the cost of the hot air u speak
    Josh cared; enough to put his God in a cross hair.
    Last edited by Sammy; October 31st, 2016 at 06:32 PM

  6. #6
    Revolution II OG Maestro's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2013
    Posts
    8,741
    Streak
    1
    Battle Record
    91-46
    Blog Entries
    1
    Awards SS Season Champion Haiku Season Champion 75+ Wins Haiku Champion FL Champion 1-2 League Champion - 1-2 Champion OM HOF PC HOF SS Champion

    Re: OM October Topical Cypher Challenge

    Blood, sweat, and tears...makes niggas forget their fears
    Funny they call it 'wartime' ...there's enough regret for years
    They sent my man on mission... now they say fam is missin'
    I grabbed my ammunition, & scanned positions while my hand was twitching
    Damn. I miss him. Fuck this shit, when it's all just the same...
    I swear it was Fall yesterday, when I was calling his name
    The pastor at the Fort church said it'll be resolved when you pray
    Said Jesus was larger than life...but it always feels smaller to say
    I feel a cold division of my mind becoming enlightened: solar fission
    Army contracts...I really left my soul imprisoned off a sole decision
    The TV stress me, it's slavery how they gave me PTSD; sold, conditioned
    Pills & sedative food keep me asleep...my eyes hold addiction-
    Which disguises the path to freedom, when it's actually a road to prison
    -- wait. hold it, listen...
    The enemy is approaching position. I wrap my finger 'round the trigger
    Control my breath until the cross hairs in the scope surrounds his figure

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  7. #7
    SirVent
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    Texas
    Age
    28
    Posts
    7,774
    Battle Record
    13-2
    Awards PS Champion Haiku Champion OM HOF PC HOF SOTW

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    @Emily
    which is your choice here?

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
    we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.

  8. #8
    Landed Emily's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Posts
    5,484
    Battle Record
    2-2
    Awards MOTM PC HOF

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    Quote Originally Posted by Jukon View Post
    @Emily
    which is your choice here?
    I need a bit of time for this.
    Ill check it out sometime today if I can and get back to you Jukon.


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


  9. #9
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    Detox
    Posts
    2,041
    Battle Record
    2-0
    Awards OM HOF SS Season Champion

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    @Emily @Jukon

    can someone get me up to speed.

    when i go look under the WOTM challenge winners post . . all i see is october tba

    so. A) does this still need voted on for October?

    and

    b) was there a challenge for November??
    #lifeafterrapbattles

  10. #10
    SirVent
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    Texas
    Age
    28
    Posts
    7,774
    Battle Record
    13-2
    Awards PS Champion Haiku Champion OM HOF PC HOF SOTW

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    Quote Originally Posted by Enoch Light View Post
    @Emily @Jukon

    can someone get me up to speed.

    when i go look under the WOTM challenge winners post . . all i see is october tba

    so. A) does this still need voted on for October?

    and

    b) was there a challenge for November??
    Still need to choose a winner

    No one submitted for November

    Pick your favorite @Enoch Light @Emily

    I'll pick mine when I finish my PS piece

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
    we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.

  11. #11
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    Detox
    Posts
    2,041
    Battle Record
    2-0
    Awards OM HOF SS Season Champion

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    i have to go with KnowP

    I wasnt really feeling Thug's verse at all.

    I liked sections of Sammy's verse . . . but overall, bad execution

    143, OG, and KnowP's verse was pretty even in content and execution to me, but as a topical focus, the last 4 lines of Know's verse stole it
    @Jukon @Emily
    #lifeafterrapbattles

  12. #12
    SirVent
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    Texas
    Age
    28
    Posts
    7,774
    Battle Record
    13-2
    Awards PS Champion Haiku Champion OM HOF PC HOF SOTW

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    Ok I'm narrowed down to OG and knowp

    I'll think on it a bit more

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
    we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.

  13. #13
    Landed Emily's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Posts
    5,484
    Battle Record
    2-2
    Awards MOTM PC HOF

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    I gotta pick Sammy.
    Then 143.


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


  14. #14
    SirVent
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    Texas
    Age
    28
    Posts
    7,774
    Battle Record
    13-2
    Awards PS Champion Haiku Champion OM HOF PC HOF SOTW

    Re: October WOTM Challenge

    ok i'm going with knowp as well. knowp wins.

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
    we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.

 

 

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •