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    Cool My Original Piece: Supernatural Lovers

    Supernatural Lovers

    I have this feeling
    Iíve known you before
    That we once traveled
    On the oceans floor
    It was divine you and I
    Exploring different spheres
    I lighting and you thunder
    Exploring new frontiers
    Together burning through time
    Oppositeís fire and ice
    I singed you, you chilled me
    I was your perfect vice
    We lit up the skies
    We brought down mountains
    Venturing through every crevice
    We bathed in lusts fountains
    I a soft sweet Juliet Rose
    You a blend of bubinga and bocote
    Writing our name through galaxies
    Histories and Hieroglyphics we wrote
    Dancing on stars light as a feather
    Dining on planets unknown to man
    I electricity and you water
    I a cloud and you the rain
    You sipped me as Krug champagne
    I gorged on you as Wagyu Steak
    We feasted on each other over decades
    Long after our bodies ached
    We laid in the midst of sunsets
    Making love on the clouds
    Roaring through the ages
    In passionate electrifying shrouds
    Conjoined by unseen frequencies
    Dismantling lifeís mysteries
    Together an unstoppable force
    Tangoing over seas
    I lava and you smoke
    You disintegrate at my touch
    I smolder at yours
    So powerful combustion and such
    Never really destroyed
    Two energies from long ago
    Entrapped now by flesh
    My once liberated Romeo
    No longer allowed to
    Prance across the constellations
    Etching our names on Saturnís rings
    Musical notes donít flow anymore
    From underneath our wings
    We no longer skip across deserts
    Or ride the avalanches
    Nor make love in the canyons
    Once supernatural extraordinary companions
    I day and you night
    I brightened your inner being
    You shadowed the dark side of me
    Taking on obstacles unforeseen
    Doubtless to say until this day
    We were phenomenal extraterrestrial pioneers
    A force to be reckoned with
    Who blazed our way through atmospheres

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    Re: My Original Piece: Supernatural Lovers

    I gotta ask if these are personal feelings here? The poem seem based on actual events that happened. Again like the other two, emotions are front and center, carnal though this time other than the preceding two. After reading all that you have posted this seems to be your lane. You know how to transform and maximize the simplistically of feeling and add depth so that what the reader reads is fathomless. This is definitely on par with the rest of them. I am looking forward to seeing more of your writing and more of a different direction as well. Keep that pen moving....


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    Re: My Original Piece: Supernatural Lovers

    @Jukon Pretty sure this and probably everything this person has posted is bitten from https://seeingthingsuniquelythroughm...atural-lovers/
    She's not on RB
    A few achievements here and there

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    Re: My Original Piece: Supernatural Lovers

    Quote Originally Posted by Laureate View Post
    @Jukon Pretty sure this and probably everything this person has posted is bitten from https://seeingthingsuniquelythroughm...atural-lovers/
    She's not on RB

    Damn smh

    Thanks laur

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    Re: My Original Piece: Supernatural Lovers

    the weird thing is, the girl on that website, looks like the girl in this avy.
    that might just be her website. If it's not then she flogged the avy too.
    Last edited by Emily; December 2nd, 2016 at 12:58 AM


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