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Thread: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin [OG Wins]

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    50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin [OG Wins]

    Putting up 50 points.
    10 line limit.
    due 11:59PM EST.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin

    Check.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin

    Yup.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin

    Goin 12. I'm pretty much ready, lil Caesar.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin

    He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
    Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
    This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
    Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
    He's a grown man but,
    I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
    I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
    With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
    But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
    I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
    When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin


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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    Originally Posted by OG Maestro View Post

    10 lines due tonight 11:59PM CDT. any later will be a no show.
    I'll put up 50 points.

    No feeding (replying to my verse directly), no biting (stealing). If you plagiarize or steal bars, I will know btw. So don't try me please
    He 0-4 in LLL
    I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage ya
    Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
    He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
    its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
    and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
    so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
    tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
    and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
    So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
    kicked, pushed, n stomped...
    .................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    vote OG ..

    Charles just wasnt effective with getting his point across.. though both needed work, CD just didnt do it for me


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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    Quote Originally Posted by OG Maestro View Post
    He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
    Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
    Ehh was not feeling this opener 4/10
    This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
    Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
    Once again ehhh 4/10
    He's a grown man but,
    I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
    I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
    Better than the first two, decent 5/10
    With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
    But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
    Lol funny not too hard hitting though 5/10
    I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
    When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
    best bar of your verse, solid closer 6/10
    24/50


    Quote Originally Posted by Authentic. View Post
    I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage ya
    Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
    cool opener, not crazy hard hitting but okay 5/10
    He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
    its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
    solid, liked the set up to the punch 6/10
    and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
    so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
    [B] generic bar here, but it was decent 5/10 [B]
    tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
    and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
    think the second punch coulda been more effective, but the wording fell through a little for me here 5/10
    So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
    kicked, pushed, n stomped...
    .................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with
    decent closer, wasn't the best but not bad 5/10

    26/50

    Not the best I've seen from either of you, expected this battle to be much better than it was.
    However it was still about as close as I thought. Authentic didn't come as hard as I've seen him come but was pretty much on a consistent pace throughout the battle....OG came much weaker than I've seen in current battles and had the better closing bar of the two but wasn't as consistent throughout the entire verse

    MVGT : Authentic by a tiny margin

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    OG

    Rodent line was cool nice flip
    Charles Charge nameplay was dope
    Smog picture reference line was cool direct hit

    Authentic

    Click line was dope nice similie

    Basically thats,it man most punches lacked due to your wording.

    V/Maestro overall he was more consistent. Authentic has to work on that execution.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    Bump for vote. This been up for 2 week now. Lets get it closed.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    Votes... Lets get em.

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin[open for votes]

    He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
    Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
    naw this was real lame imo
    This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
    Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
    lite bar. aight jab
    He's a grown man but,
    I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
    I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
    coulda been hard if worded better in the second line
    With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
    But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
    naw this was too basic.
    I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
    When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
    nice




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    I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage ya
    Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
    felt this was too much of a reach
    He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
    its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
    ehh nothing hard bout this bar
    and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
    so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
    aight played but aight
    tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
    and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
    see where u were going but wording was off here
    So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
    kicked, pushed, n stomped...
    .................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with
    didn't really connect the scheme well here




    overall felt CD didn't drop his hardest here. seen more polished work from him before. the closer and slow lean woulda been flames if worded better but fell flat. OG didn't do much better. the closer was pretty solid but the rest was key'd up and sloppy for him especially after reading his champ match bars. don't dumb it down bro.


    v. OG

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Damn this is a tough one to vote on cuz both verses suck. Im only voting on this bc i have too.



    He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
    Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
    ^no
    This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
    Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
    ^nope
    He's a grown man but,
    I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
    I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
    ^ehh
    With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
    But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
    ^nah
    I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
    When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
    ^ok


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    I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage ya
    Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
    ^nahh
    He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
    its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
    ^ehh
    and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
    so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
    ^just another variation of a put a can to his ear bar
    tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
    and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
    ^ok
    So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
    kicked, pushed, n stomped...
    .................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with
    ^nope lazy




    Going to vote against whoever had the worst misses

    V/ og

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    Re: 50 Pt. Battle: OG Maestro vs. Charles Darwin [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Says a nigga 1-5. Bump meh.. Need to get this done. Damn.

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