Putting up 50 points.
10 line limit.
due 11:59PM EST.
OG Maestro
Authentic.
Putting up 50 points.
10 line limit.
due 11:59PM EST.
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Yup.
Goin 12. I'm pretty much ready, lil Caesar.
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He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
He's a grown man but,
I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
Last edited by OG Maestro; September 19th, 2016 at 11:20 PM
I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage yaOriginally Posted by OG Maestro View Post
10 lines due tonight 11:59PM CDT. any later will be a no show.
I'll put up 50 points.
No feeding (replying to my verse directly), no biting (stealing). If you plagiarize or steal bars, I will know btw. So don't try me please
He 0-4 in LLL
Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
kicked, pushed, n stomped...
.................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with
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vote OG ..
Charles just wasnt effective with getting his point across.. though both needed work, CD just didnt do it for me
VOTE DQ'D - NOT BROKEN DOWN
- STAFF
Last edited by KnowP; September 27th, 2016 at 05:10 PM
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
24/50
26/50
Not the best I've seen from either of you, expected this battle to be much better than it was.
However it was still about as close as I thought. Authentic didn't come as hard as I've seen him come but was pretty much on a consistent pace throughout the battle....OG came much weaker than I've seen in current battles and had the better closing bar of the two but wasn't as consistent throughout the entire verse
MVGT : Authentic by a tiny margin
OG
Rodent line was cool nice flip
Charles Charge nameplay was dope
Smog picture reference line was cool direct hit
Authentic
Click line was dope nice similie
Basically thats,it man most punches lacked due to your wording.
V/Maestro overall he was more consistent. Authentic has to work on that execution.
Bump for vote. This been up for 2 week now. Lets get it closed.
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Votes... Lets get em.
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He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
naw this was real lame imo
This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
lite bar. aight jab
He's a grown man but,
I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
coulda been hard if worded better in the second line
With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
naw this was too basic.
I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
nice
vs
I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage ya
Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
felt this was too much of a reach
He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
ehh nothing hard bout this bar
and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
aight played but aight
tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
see where u were going but wording was off here
So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
kicked, pushed, n stomped...
.................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with
didn't really connect the scheme well here
overall felt CD didn't drop his hardest here. seen more polished work from him before. the closer and slow lean woulda been flames if worded better but fell flat. OG didn't do much better. the closer was pretty solid but the rest was key'd up and sloppy for him especially after reading his champ match bars. don't dumb it down bro.
v. OG
Damn this is a tough one to vote on cuz both verses suck. Im only voting on this bc i have too.
He's a tough guy? if any of us hear him grunt and say "face it Jack"
Then he'll talkin to some gay ass nigga that he paid to make it clap
^no
This is a Doctor vs. a nasty ass animal, but that ain't what I'm mad at
Knife'll get surgical with this rodent & play with his life like he's a lab rat
^nope
He's a grown man but,
I got lil ones that'll take care of him since this fraud's at large
I'll Send 3 Little Kids To Him & we STILL won't see Charles in Charge
^ehh
With Charles? I wouldn't get my hands dirty when all my dawgs bigger
But I'll slap the shit out this white boy 'til his visor falls lower than Smog's picture
^nah
I know a bitch that'll catch him parked, grab a K & leave him laid
When I feed her Change, she'll get his Car Tagged like a Meter Maid
^ok
Vs.
I got a hollow for all points. This G' said 50 < that many shots'll damage ya
Taking the 40 across ya head 10x's fuckin so hard... I swear this cal-i-bers
^nahh
He said no feeding his verse.. but his frail bars got him lacking the protein
its no-thing, but this only da 3rd shot.. n already this "OG's" on a slow lean
^ehh
and I know the OG like to talk on the phone, he real chatty with his friends
so i put the fuckin click to his hear, n let it ring like a call on the other end
^just another variation of a put a can to his ear bar
tryn monopolize on the newbs Front lines, n can't own shit when u in LLL
and with four failed attempts at black'n males.. its not spam, you just fail!
^ok
So come with ya lame noise boi... The Charles Darwin bars been felt bitch,
kicked, pushed, n stomped...
.................. is just a few felonious assaults.. I can Maestro your death with
^nope lazy
Going to vote against whoever had the worst misses
V/ og
Says a nigga 1-5. Bump meh.. Need to get this done. Damn.
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