WK19: Smog vs Barcotic [Bar wins]

[KnowP]

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LAST MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occasions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.
@Smog @Barcotic

[Barcotic]

busy week

10-12?

[Smog]

10's perfect

Ion know when imma have time to write this week so I'm gonna ask for an ext.

[Barcotic]

coo

[Barcotic]

dont u transport food for a living? lol

..

take a seat. ur just a lame emcee, k? u aint slick
u have THE worst delivery, man...
mcdonalds, wendeys n kfc say the same shit
u went from a tractor to a mack, I imagine life's a drag
s' like u never had a supervisor, now u wear one backwards like a fag
I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
oh & it's worth mentioning that his wife might ride for fare, guys ..
meaning anyone can have that pie-lit up for a price like private airlines
nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet

[Smog]

Listen

Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those
Pussy ur too soft, if this practice then whys ur chest beatin
Ur feelings r Teddys ligaments, I'll hurt um easy n won't see u till next season
U frontin by sayin life's sweet, what up bar? Nuttin just savin my cheese
Dawg, landscaping's a $10 an hour job.... I'll give u ur weeks pay just for rakin my leaves
Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..

FOH bruh lol

[Meth]

dont u transport food for a living? lol

..

take a seat. ur just a lame emcee, k? u aint slick
u have THE worst delivery, man...
mcdonalds, wendeys n kfc say the same shit
--wow. Come on man lol
u went from a tractor to a mack, I imagine life's a drag
s' like u never had a supervisor, now u wear one backwards like a fag
--dope lol
I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
--okay
I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
--wording seems weird to me idk. Like somethings missing.
oh & it's worth mentioning that his wife might ride for fare, guys ..
meaning anyone can have that pie-lit up for a price like private airlines
--dope never seen that
nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet
--could have been cool but you forced the wording imo

Listen

Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those
--never seen bar but but the flip was reallllly simple. Can't do that on a bar/cro flip imo
Pussy ur too soft, if this practice then whys ur chest beatin
Ur feelings r Teddys ligaments, I'll hurt um easy n won't see u till next season
--could have done more but ok
U frontin by sayin life's sweet, what up bar? Nuttin just savin my cheese
Dawg, landscaping's a $10 an hour job.... I'll give u ur weeks pay just for rakin my leaves
--lmao
Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
--kind of good but also kind of acknowledging his great text career which is kind of weird lol
Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
--ok. Once again the flip was just a bit simple. I know that's your style but just doesn't seem too harsh.
N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..
--ah ok

FOH bruh lol

Bar had the worse miss w his opener
But be also had the 2 best hits.
Kind of disappointing for you guys cuz I've seen so much better from both of you. Ok battle tho.

I got bar with the better hits. Smogs landscaping line was heat but it didn't match either of cro's
Could go either way based on preference.

Personally I have barcotic tho

Good battle bros

[Jason Voorhees]

I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet

vs

Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those
Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..


Got Smog taking this with one bar better.

[Middle Finger]

dont u transport food for a living? lol

..

take a seat. ur just a lame emcee, k? u aint slick
u have THE worst delivery, man...
mcdonalds, wendeys n kfc say the same shit

Lol cheesy bar, only good for comedic value 4/10
u went from a tractor to a mack, I imagine life's a drag
s' like u never had a supervisor, now u wear one backwards like a fag
lol 6/10
I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
Nice bar 7/10
I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
8/10 another nice bar
oh & it's worth mentioning that his wife might ride for fare, guys ..
meaning anyone can have that pie-lit up for a price like private airlines
Another nice one 8/10
nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet

Solid verse but closed coulda hit much harder 5/10

38/60

Listen

Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those

7/10 nice

Pussy ur too soft, if this practice then whys ur chest beatin
Ur feelings r Teddys ligaments, I'll hurt um easy n won't see u till next season
6/10 cool bar


U frontin by sayin life's sweet, what up bar? Nuttin just savin my cheese
Dawg, landscaping's a $10 an hour job.... I'll give u ur weeks pay just for rakin my leaves

5/10 nothing wrong with $10 an hour, gotta do what u gotta do
Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
6/10
Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
Ehhh it was an okay bar 5/10
N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..
Okay also coulda closed better 5/10

FOH bruh lol

34/60
MVGT: Barcotic

[slecht]

take a seat. ur just a lame emcee, k? u aint slick
u have THE worst delivery, man...
mcdonalds, wendeys n kfc say the same shit
---eh, I been to places where Mac got pretty good delivery. LOL. ---
u went from a tractor to a mack, I imagine life's a drag
s' like u never had a supervisor, now u wear one backwards like a fag
---okay I like this personal---
I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
---ok coool----
I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
---ha not bad here, not bad----
oh & it's worth mentioning that his wife might ride for fare, guys ..
meaning anyone can have that pie-lit up for a price like private airlines
--LOL THE PIE, eh not bad either. fresh concept tbh---
nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet
---lmfao this went over my head first time, nice--



Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those
----gotta work on that wording a little bit but this is nice---
Pussy ur too soft, if this practice then whys ur chest beatin
Ur feelings r Teddys ligaments, I'll hurt um easy n won't see u till next season
--nah wasnt liking this here, kinda soft, ----
U frontin by sayin life's sweet, what up bar? Nuttin just savin my cheese
Dawg, landscaping's a $10 an hour job.... I'll give u ur weeks pay just for rakin my leaves
---eh okay, ok---
Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
---but nc's a dif story but okay personal---
Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
---ehh not liking this personal here--
N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..
----allright closer---


man smog was nice with it but he had more misses tbh. barcotic came with some fresh concepts that edged it more. I prefered the originality over some decent personals

vote barcotic

[mal diction]

nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet

aight or iight... this line was..is.. the highlight of this fucking battle ... in fact this, in my mind, is the line of the the fucking week

smog your verse versus Bar needs work...i saw so sunlight in the lines but the arrangement of words could have been better..

vote bar

[.SiQ.]

take a seat. ur just a lame emcee, k? u aint slick
u have THE worst delivery, man...
mcdonalds, wendeys n kfc say the same shit
>>NO

u went from a tractor to a mack, I imagine life's a drag
s' like u never had a supervisor, now u wear one backwards like a fag
>>LMFAO!!! nice

I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
>>Decent

I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
>>OK

oh & it's worth mentioning that his wife might ride for fare, guys ..
meaning anyone can have that pie-lit up for a price like private airlines
>>Light

nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet
>>No
_______________

Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those
>>Light

Pussy ur too soft, if this practice then whys ur chest beatin
Ur feelings r Teddys ligaments, I'll hurt um easy n won't see u till next season
>>Light

U frontin by sayin life's sweet, what up bar? Nuttin just savin my cheese
Dawg, landscaping's a $10 an hour job.... I'll give u ur weeks pay just for rakin my leaves
>>LoL

Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
>>No

Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
>>No

N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..
>>Miss

Vote- Bar
Reason: overall consistency, more bars hit & connected better than smog's did. Bar started off ok but then fell off from his middle to the end of this verse. Def heard better frm smog. Bar's supervisor bar was the funniest bars of the whole battle lmfao.

[Lemaitre]

take a seat. ur just a lame emcee, k? u aint slick
u have THE worst delivery, man...
mcdonalds, wendeys n kfc say the same shit
Aight, didn't find it hard hitting but cool enough
u went from a tractor to a mack, I imagine life's a drag
s' like u never had a supervisor, now u wear one backwards like a fag
Really well worded, funny
I headhunt all weaklings w/ lead pumped, not bb's
but if I Gundam, Wings would fall out of his truck n it'd end up on TV
I didn't get this, Don't know whatever you're referencing here, sorry bruh
I beat u how many times? just holster ur flips, roll over and quit
been racking ur losses long enough to dislocate their shoulders n hips
pretty cool
oh & it's worth mentioning that his wife might ride for fare, guys ..
meaning anyone can have that pie-lit up for a price like private airlines
Nice wordplay here, I liked it
nerd is a rat. word, it's a fact. my purpose is acting solid
while I'm at court, he's out gettin his persecute matching wallet
Decent

Vs

Bitch sticks his nose in every convo, meaning that emotional force gonna blow
But next time Barbut in where he unwanted, A head shot'll make u wish u wore 1 of those
Aight
Pussy ur too soft, if this practice then whys ur chest beatin
Ur feelings r Teddys ligaments, I'll hurt um easy n won't see u till next season
Ehh wasn't a huge fan of this personally
U frontin by sayin life's sweet, what up bar? Nuttin just savin my cheese
Dawg, landscaping's a $10 an hour job.... I'll give u ur weeks pay just for rakin my leaves
meh
Faggot, dr's a thing of the past, s'why we're witnessing u havin less success, queer
Cuz including NC, u got more L's the last 2 months than uve had ur whole text career
Decent personal if true
Claimin u a fighter? Man U just a fan n I got my facts straight, cuz
fighters have fucked up features, n judgin by ur pics u ain't never had ur face touched
This seems more like a backhanded compliment than a punch
N u posin holding a piece, like we need more reasons to see the bitch in u
Ur that studio gangsta on posters pointin a gun, the 1 Real G's will never listen too..
Little weak on the close

Not a bad battle... Kinda expected more from both - I've seen both of you drop fire in the past but this was a little timid. Bar definitely had the consistency, and i prefer his short-bar style so
v/Bar

[KnowP]

bar wins