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    August Nominee Finalists

    YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...atic-amp-Jukon
    Purge Night by God Of War, Enoch Light, Illunatic and Jukon



    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...he-Raven-Flies
    As The Raven Flies by Cracka
    (2 NOMS)



    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...44#post8823644
    Tyrant, by Cracka.



    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ound-The-World
    The Flex heard Around the WOrld




    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-Natural-Order
    Natural Order




    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...74-RIP-America
    RIP America


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    Re: August Nominee Finalists

    Definite no on the purge night collab, idk why dagel nominated that

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    Also no on the Raven flies, content was there but the technical side wasn't covered as tightly as it should have been. Also I think he missed a few opportunities to use literary devices- metaphors, shit like that. It was enjoyable just not up to par

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    Re: August Nominee Finalists

    The only verse i would say yes to is Natural Order. Content galore, great story, great concept, great execution. . i had no issues with that verse.

    now on to the others. . .

    I know Cracka got a lot of nominations. Those verses are very good, but they arent without issue imo. The Raven Flies was the better of the two verses. and again, while an excellent read, it did have flow issues in some spots, and had alot of filler. Maybe im just making a push to raise the standards for HOF verses, but the blemishes should not be so apparent. His second verse Tyrant was all flow and no real content. The metaphors were thin and meaningless. People were just captivated by the rapid fire multis in the first verse i think. They will probably translate into audio well, but for me. . . i would like to see a bit more refinement before considering his work for OM HOF.

    dagel only voted in the purge collab to dickride me. im just being honest here . . same as when he nommed that other verse i wrote last month

    The flex heard around the world was a really nice written, especially for a flex joint. But im not seeing HOF worthy material there.

    and Dagels drop was cool, but again. . . its just a political statement piece and brings nothing to the table that screams HOF worthy to me.
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