WK18 knucks vs smog [smog wins]

[KnowP]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.

Bar Limit
10 lines MIN
14 Lines MAX

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LAST MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occasions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.

[Knucks]

Knucks foo....checc

[Knucks]

Do yall call this a fight ? It's dark for you. Call it a night
I mean You type swell..
but you've been on such a fucken dry spell you need water to write
I'll alter ya life ..I'm not commercial , N it's not help if I lend a hand
...Soda shit'll be music to my ears when I Rakim like pick a can
I'm different fam ...peep I get the job done , back on my biz
While your just amidst wit nothing ...
Literally - a mist wit nothing is pretty much what smog actually is
Ya shit lighter - thought you'd fight fire wit fire until u lose the match
You broke & pussy ....so why change your ways if you can use the snatch

Face in ya bitch titties is my booby trap,
You cool wit that ?

I'm fucken crack son & you wish you can play wit a star
& Your so fucken whack ..if u double back I practically gave you a bar
Faggot - I care nothin bout you . This shit is just a breeze
I joined the league to battle one week ...
Not too battle the ONE weak nigga in the league


14

[Smog]

Check.. I'll drop in the am bro..

[Smog]

My post season spots locked, TF makes u think ur a threat ta me
But Even if the rankings were loose.. Ud only be used to secure the 2'nd seed
This week is a circus, no point to write fa sump'n so seemingly worthless
Some'll say killin this clowns a reason.. In that case I'm defeatin the purpose
Ur trash, n times to precious to waste for no reason
S'why I'll beat ya ass wit little effort, n feel I did waaay more than needed
I'm movin a rig bruisin ya wig, n if u think it's wrong dude
Then I'll pull off in rest area.. N take a couple minutes to SHIT on u
Cats is listenin, so I'll get under ur skin n if ur smart, bail
I mean sincere holes r open, this humiliation I display on u'll be heartfelt
U weak AF, a true pussy hidin behind the meanest mug
But when i stand in ya face we'll see ur inner-fear... Distracting u from bein tuff..
Fat loser, ur WACK at text plus ya life'll never mean a thing
A cryin Cuztomer... bitchin about ur orders the only time ull ever be a king

[KnowP]

Do yall call this a fight ? It's dark for you. Call it a night
I mean You type swell..
but you've been on such a fucken dry spell you need water to write
I'll alter ya life ..I'm not commercial , N it's not help if I lend a hand
...Soda shit'll be music to my ears when I Rakim like pick a can


vs


This week is a circus, no point to write fa sump'n so seemingly worthless
Some'll say killin this clowns a reason.. In that case I'm defeatin the purpose
Cats is listenin, so I'll get under ur skin n if ur smart, bail
I mean sincere holes r open, this humiliation I display on u'll be heartfelt
U weak AF, a true pussy hidin behind the meanest mug
But when i stand in ya face we'll see ur inner-fear... Distracting u from bein tuff..



lite little battle. felt smog came on pretty solid at the end while knucks had the upper hand in the beggning. felt he had some played bars that didn't land well and a few worded flips that could of been executed better.


v. smog

[Core Vet]

Do yall call this a fight ? It's dark for you. Call it a night
I mean You type swell..
but you've been on such a fucken dry spell you need water to write
I'll alter ya life ..I'm not commercial , N it's not help if I lend a hand
...Soda shit'll be music to my ears when I Rakim like pick a can
Best bars

vs


Cats is listenin, so I'll get under ur skin n if ur smart, bail
I mean sincere holes r open, this humiliation I display on u'll be heartfelt
U weak AF, a true pussy hidin behind the meanest mug
But when i stand in ya face we'll see ur inner-fear... Distracting u from bein tuff..
Fat loser, ur WACK at text plus ya life'll never mean a thing
A cryin Cuztomer... bitchin about ur orders the only time ull ever be a king

Yea.. I agree with KnowP. I was expecting to see some shit from Knucks... Aint work out like that, both came a lil dry. Smog verse had more impact overall.

[mal diction]

Knucks ...I can see some linkage of wordplay but nothing too strong ...and you used the "i gave you a bar" line ... my advice is for you to practice making punchlines ...and also try writing poetry to help increase your metaphor



Some'll say killin this clowns a reason.. In that case I'm defeatin the purpose

not a bad line... but I feel Knucks had better attempts

vote Knucks

[JEM.]

On mobile so not my typical breakdown:

Knucks:

I liked the dry spell bar, I fucked with the throw away... I'm okay w blatant disrespect haha.

Smog.

Rest area I found cool, opener was pretty solid, the heartfelt was good and the purpose was solid.

Overall smog connected more, but I did enjoy knucks style... Smooth just needed a bit more impact.

V/smog

[.SiQ.]

Knuck: the rakim bar was the best bar of the whole battle hands down!! Ur smog flip was cool. Gave him a bar was ok. And ur closer was dope.

Vs.

Smog: opener was ok & the rest area bar was cool.

Vote: knucks
Overall it was an okay battle, but i felt knuck's Rakim bar was toooooo crazy for anything smog said. I def seen better frm smog. Keep bangin yall!

[Barcotic]

soda ANYTHING is played af

even better versions of the concept such as soda pressing ..

tbr knucks is waaay better than this. I feel awkward quoting anything from that verse. everything was just too simplistic or played man, no hate

vs

defeating the purpose (barely)
sincere holes (barely again)

v/smog

[Letterman]

Wasn't feeling anything from Knicks.

Vs

Defeating the purpose

Yeah I've seen better from both of these dudes. Not sure how much Knicks, has been battling so he could be rusty but Smog took this one.

v/Smog

[KnowP]

smog wins