WK17 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Smog [OPEN FOR VOTES]

[KnowP]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.

Bar Limit
10 lines MIN
20 Lines MAX

No Show
If you no show you will have to battle twice in FL to get back into the league.


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- Voting -
Each week, each competitor will be required to vote on at least 3 Battles.
Championship & Contenders Matches are required to be voted on by everyone.
Failure to comply, will result in vote deductions (1 link = 1 deducted vote).


- Extension Request -
All Extension Request must be submitted no later than 24 hours before deadline.
If your opponent has already dropped their verse, they can either accept or deny your request.
If your opponent has not dropped their verse, both will be granted extension IF your opponent agrees.

LAST MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occasions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.


@Letterman @Smog

[Smog]

What up man.. Checkin

If u need ext. s'all good

[Letterman]

Might need that ext

[Smog]

If let posts I'll post if he needs more time that's cool too but u till then


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[Letterman]

Smog was a cokehead. Caused a rift between his family bout affairs
Your involvement with the base meant, your parents forced you to move out of theirs
U not tough. A penitentiary would break this punk forreal
If u step inside a prison orajel, you'd get enough shots in the mouth to permanently numb ur grill
His concepts are all weak. Can't believe that smog picked em
They're the furthest thing from groundbreaking, those shits could provide relief for Nepal victims
I killed a legend. You a contender? Well, you're always down to fight
It's no sir prize to see u here, but as far as winning? We know there's Doubt around the site
Vehicular homicide. Make a scene when I hit em & depart
Cuz when the Van Gogh's over your frame, it'll turn your body into street art
Prolly 5 foot nothing. This kid'll get decked with a right
You'll see this little mark on the wall, like the bastard was trying to measure his height
Cant view his bitch without laughter. Anakin is disaster
Cuz Smog's sister? Yoda bitch has the face of a Jedi master
Dropped the title out of fear. Came back to show you're the best?
You had to Earnhardt to get back on track, but you'll crash n burn on your road to success

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[Smog]

Listen nerd, the title isn't urs n nuttin u says gonna help it
I don't mean it's Bull He's in here.. unless I'm considered 1 for Takin that belt,bitch!
N after this body, Ur seedlings'll drop n ull prolly pout n bitch
Not only will u Fall Lower in the ranks.. Ull Copy Cats that sign out n quit
I get no love defeatin a chick so how I do it is meaningless, prick
U cud get shot wit the Steal Let O knocked off ya heels, either way Im BEATIN a bitch
Geek ull get whipped.... by ya momma if she knew u spit the shit we see
So if u mention a Cal And Her ass hears it.. Ull have a Month to get ur shit n leave
That gun talk got u far, but this time I hope u brought some barz
Cuz if there's anything that u a Wet, Pussy... Then I won't have to expose the Twat u are
Ur soft at heart, deep down a weakling but ya mind thinks ull win
Come wit that tough Act U'll get slapped to bring out the Genuine wimp within
I drop the best, u gettin wacker wit age dawg this not a test
S'like I pile drove u Thru ur staircase as u stare dazed at how u Lost a Step
This disaster is natural, ur unwanted like spit n lay doubt
Even if I didnt get to u first it's cool.. Cuz Gods BEEN workin on wipin ur state out

[Smog]

I had dropped 20, lije we said but then took out out 4 so 16 at least bro.. Throw one more in

[Barcotic]

add one or take one away guys, so I can edit w/ a morning vote @Letterman @Smog

[.SiQ.]

Base meant, orajel, sir prize, & mark on the wall

Vs

Steal let o

Vote- Letter easy!
I felt Letter won wit way more haymakers, dope wordplay, & better concepts. smog had some personals but they didnt land properly. Good battle yall but i felt it was 1sided and that side was - Letterman

[Barcotic]

Smog was a cokehead. Caused a rift between his family bout affairs
Your involvement with the base meant, your parents forced you to move out of theirs

my apartment line was better, this was still decent

U not tough. A penitentiary would break this punk forreal
If u step inside a prison orajel, you'd get enough shots in the mouth to permanently numb ur grill

semi forced but not horrible

His concepts are all weak. Can't believe that smog picked em
They're the furthest thing from groundbreaking, those shits could provide relief for Nepal victims

played concept but good flip

I killed a legend. You a contender? Well, you're always down to fight
It's no sir prize to see u here, but as far as winning? We know there's Doubt around the site

smooth, I like

Vehicular homicide. Make a scene when I hit em & depart
Cuz when the Van Gogh's over your frame, it'll turn your body into street art

played out

Prolly 5 foot nothing. This kid'll get decked with a right
You'll see this little mark on the wall, like the bastard was trying to measure his height

dope, lotb

Cant view his bitch without laughter. Anakin is disaster
Cuz Smog's sister? Yoda bitch has the face of a Jedi master

played filler

Dropped the title out of fear. Came back to show you're the best?
You had to Earnhardt to get back on track, but you'll crash n burn on your road to success

ehhh, ok



vs



Listen nerd, the title isn't urs n nuttin u says gonna help it
I don't mean it's Bull He's in here.. unless I'm considered 1 for Takin that belt,bitch!

would've worked better using the word bullies & a different execution, this was soft

N after this body, Ur seedlings'll drop n ull prolly pout n bitch
Not only will u Fall Lower in the ranks.. Ull Copy Cats that sign out n quit

k, cool

I get no love defeatin a chick so how I do it is meaningless, prick
U cud get shot wit the Steal Let O knocked off ya heels, either way Im BEATIN a bitch

forced, whack

Geek ull get whipped.... by ya momma if she knew u spit the shit we see
So if u mention a Cal And Her ass hears it.. Ull have a Month to get ur shit n leave

see opener's feedback

That gun talk got u far, but this time I hope u brought some barz
Cuz if there's anything that u a Wet, Pussy... Then I won't have to expose the Twat u are

lame

Ur soft at heart, deep down a weakling but ya mind thinks ull win
Come wit that tough Act U'll get slapped to bring out the Genuine wimp within

na man

I drop the best, u gettin wacker wit age dawg this not a test
S'like I pile drove u Thru ur staircase as u stare dazed at how u Lost a Step

cool

This disaster is natural, ur unwanted like spit n lay doubt
Even if I didnt get to u first it's cool.. Cuz Gods BEEN workin on wipin ur state out

weak



I got it 3-2 in quotables, let's were also better

v/letterman

[Stat.]

Letterman
Smog was a cokehead. Caused a rift between his family bout affairs
Your involvement with the base meant, your parents forced you to move out of theirs
Nice!
U not tough. A penitentiary would break this punk forreal
If u step inside a prison orajel, you'd get enough shots in the mouth to permanently numb ur grill
Nice
His concepts are all weak. Can't believe that smog picked em
They're the furthest thing from groundbreaking, those shits could provide relief for Nepal victims
Eh.
I killed a legend. You a contender? Well, you're always down to fight
It's no sir prize to see u here, but as far as winning? We know there's Doubt around the site
Cool.
Vehicular homicide. Make a scene when I hit em & depart
Cuz when the Van Gogh's over your frame, it'll turn your body into street art
Eh.
Prolly 5 foot nothing. This kid'll get decked with a right
You'll see this little mark on the wall, like the bastard was trying to measure his height
Nice
Cant view his bitch without laughter. Anakin is disaster
Cuz Smog's sister? Yoda bitch has the face of a Jedi master
Nah
Dropped the title out of fear. Came back to show you're the best?
You had to Earnhardt to get back on track, but you'll crash n burn on your road to success
Nice

Smog
Listen nerd, the title isn't urs n nuttin u says gonna help it
I don't mean it's Bull He's in here.. unless I'm considered 1 for Takin that belt,bitch!
Nice
N after this body, Ur seedlings'll drop n ull prolly pout n bitch
Not only will u Fall Lower in the ranks.. Ull Copy Cats that sign out n quit
Eh.
I get no love defeatin a chick so how I do it is meaningless, prick
U cud get shot wit the Steal Let O knocked off ya heels, either way Im BEATIN a bitch
Ok
Geek ull get whipped.... by ya momma if she knew u spit the shit we see
So if u mention a Cal And Her ass hears it.. Ull have a Month to get ur shit n leave
Ok. Bit of a reach.
That gun talk got u far, but this time I hope u brought some barz
Cuz if there's anything that u a Wet, Pussy... Then I won't have to expose the Twat u are
Nah
Ur soft at heart, deep down a weakling but ya mind thinks ull win
Come wit that tough Act U'll get slapped to bring out the Genuine wimp within
Eh
I drop the best, u gettin wacker wit age dawg this not a test
S'like I pile drove u Thru ur staircase as u stare dazed at how u Lost a Step
Ok
This disaster is natural, ur unwanted like spit n lay doubt
Even if I didnt get to u first it's cool.. Cuz Gods BEEN workin on wipin ur state out
Ok

This is close! Lett, you had the best bar of the battle with that basement line. I liked 5 bars from each of you but I felt like Letterman's concepts were just a bit better.

Vote Letterman

[JEM.]

Let:

Smog was a cokehead. Caused a rift between his family bout affairs
Your involvement with the base meant, your parents forced you to move out of theirs
Haha, nice.

U not tough. A penitentiary would break this punk forreal
If u step inside a prison orajel, you'd get enough shots in the mouth to permanently numb ur grill
Damn, slightly wordy here man… but I fuck with the wordplay. Nice.

His concepts are all weak. Can't believe that smog picked em
They're the furthest thing from groundbreaking, those shits could provide relief for Nepal victims
Eh, nah.

I killed a legend. You a contender? Well, you're always down to fight
It's no sir prize to see u here, but as far as winning? We know there's Doubt around the site
Eh, wording was odd here man… Back to back questions, etc… Plus
wasn’t really a killer hit.

Vehicular homicide. Make a scene when I hit em & depart
Cuz when the Van Gogh's over your frame, it'll turn your body into street art
Eh, okay.

Prolly 5 foot nothing. This kid'll get decked with a right
You'll see this little mark on the wall, like the bastard was trying to measure his height
This was alright.

Cant view his bitch without laughter. Anakin is disaster
Cuz Smog's sister? Yoda bitch has the face of a Jedi master
lmao, nice.

Dropped the title out of fear. Came back to show you're the best?
You had to Earnhardt to get back on track, but you'll crash n burn on your road to success
Nice.


Smoog:

Listen nerd, the title isn't urs n nuttin u says gonna help it
I don't mean it's Bull He's in here.. unless I'm considered 1 for Takin that belt,bitch!
Nice.

N after this body, Ur seedlings'll drop n ull prolly pout n bitch
Not only will u Fall Lower in the ranks.. Ull Copy Cats that sign out n quit
Not feeling this one man.

I get no love defeatin a chick so how I do it is meaningless, prick
U cud get shot wit the Steal Let O knocked off ya heels, either way Im BEATIN a bitch
Not bad.

Geek ull get whipped.... by ya momma if she knew u spit the shit we see
So if u mention a Cal And Her ass hears it.. Ull have a Month to get ur shit n leave
Eh, okay.

That gun talk got u far, but this time I hope u brought some barz
Cuz if there's anything that u a Wet, Pussy... Then I won't have to expose the Twat u are
Nice.

Ur soft at heart, deep down a weakling but ya mind thinks ull win
Come wit that tough Act U'll get slapped to bring out the Genuine wimp within
Eh… not very good here man.

I drop the best, u gettin wacker wit age dawg this not a test
S'like I pile drove u Thru ur staircase as u stare dazed at how u Lost a Step
This was alright.

This disaster is natural, ur unwanted like spit n lay doubt
Even if I didnt get to u first it's cool.. Cuz Gods BEEN workin on wipin ur state out
Eh, alright.


Smog… not your best here man… Wording was a bit off this week, concepts weren’t
as punishing… Let got this one, with some clever wordplay and some pretty nice
lines.

V/Let

[Joe Boston]

Letterman: base meant was just too simple and basic of a concept for me. ORAJEL was pretty dope direct and creative. Seen the groundbreaking shit before. Mark on the was cool nice similie. Star wars wordplays lmao. Earnhardt was cool.

Smog:

Good attempts i felt u overworded a lot of bars though u had potential wordplays,that were creativly thought out n shit u just put filler in there.

V/Let overall he had the better wordplay attempts and solid wording

[Surplus]

Not a vote but letter took this easy.

Well done

[KnowP]

let wins